Comments (8)

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  dewese says:
  I would run home too if a dog was chasing me!! On your next story, try making it longer with some more action. i enjoyed reading it Mrs. Black

  Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
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  dewese says:
  this should be continue by Quinten

  Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
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  dewese says:
  That was funny by:lekendle

  Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
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  dewese says:
  funnybyashlee

  Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
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  dewese says:
  need little work on yours but it's ok
  semajia
  

  Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
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  dewese says:
  It's too short next It can be longer
  
  
  From Victoria

  Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
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  dewese says:
  It need a little more sentences
  
  By:Destiny
  

  Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
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  dewese says:
  To much black and white pictures.

  Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)

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