kebcoconut
says:
Dear Mark,
I have heard tons of good things about you! I didn't know if they were true, but now that I have read some of your stories I know they are! I just have one qestion, but it is not related to the story..... Are you one of the creators on story bird? I loved this story and love the way you reach out to other story birders on line! I have always loved to write, but my mom discovered story bird for her 2nd grade class in about 2009. That was when she showed it to me! I love love love storybird! It is my second favorite website! my first is club penguin. No offense to you and the other people who work on story bird! I know I may not be a great author like figment 68, fogcat, and many many others, but it would make me REALLY happy if you could check out some of my stories and comment them and give me advice? other then grammar,because i know I am terrible at that!
Again, i would be SO honnored if you read some of my stories, and even more honnored if you read ALL of them and commented. I have some really wacky ideas, so they turn into really wacky story birds, but i personaly love them!!!!! please please please check them out! YOU ARE MY IDOL!!!!! SOME DAY, I HOPE TO BE SUCCESSFUL AS YOU! PLEASE RESPOND! I GET THAT YOU MIGHT NOT RESPOND FOR A WHILE, BECAUSE YOU ARE REALLY BUSY! IF YOUR SCEDHULE IS TOO BUSY, OF COURSE I UNDERSTAND! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW THE POSSIBILTIES OF ME BECOMING AN AUTHOR WHEN I GROW UP, AND WHO IS BETTER TO HERE IT FROM THEN A PROFESSIONAL WRITER??????? AND REMEMBER, BE HONNEST!I TOATLLY UNDERSTAND IF YOU DON'T LIKE MY WRITING. JUST KNOWING THAT YOU READ THEM GIVED ME ENOUGH HONNOR FOR BOTH OF US!
REMEMBER, YOU ARE MY IDOL!!!!! BE HONEST!
YOU BIGGEST FAN,
KEBCOCONUT
This made me smile, nice story :).
Most of the credit goes to Andy. I just trimmed and added unnecessary lines like "now, so and so thought he was clever..." Because really—what story isn't better with the word "clever" in it?
I would have had all three and saved the ice cream for last.
@missK: I suspect, dairy allergies willing, you would have had ice cream before, during, and after the other three ;)
klopa hearted this
<3 love it
I love this story
kalo6765 hearted this
Cute story love it!
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randomgal hearted this
I love the story!
smart thinking
maplegears hearted this
Cute. (:
cutee
lucyhigg hearted this
I get your thinking on the ice cream part and read some of my story's please
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bookworm1996 hearted this
`this is a good story
OUT OF ALL OF YOU STORYS THIS WOULD BE MY FAVOURITE!!!
eddiehussamybird12 hearted this
I loved this storybird, it made me laugh at the end!One of the best I have ever read.^_^
like ur story i likee the burp haha. could u plz look at my stories mark?? and comment cuss i think ur a pro so tell me how my stories are! haha
That was ramdom but very very clever. it was very interesting and enjoyable.
awwww poor sprinkles!!!
from :0)
really good its a great story
thanks 4 this great story! =D
ur so kool andy!
What a cute story! This is going on my reading list.
Jajo11 hearted this
Yeah this is SO going on my reading list. :) I like oodles of noodles. Sprinkles is'nt very smart though!!!!
:)+:)= :D
Pearly hearted this
Go this book!!
(lots of orange)
My baby sister cried at this she said " I don't like scawy stowies ."
Forevergirl hearted this
Good!
nice job
wowo
that makes me hungry
JAW11 hearted this
yellow1 hearted this
So funny!!!!!!!!! Please make more
That's so funny! It made me laugh! You make such good stories; and such a lot of them! This is my favourite story on Storybird I have read yet!
PinkKiwi hearted this
Clever, funny and it is an awesome storybird!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa hearted this
great job guys!!!!!!
is the picture on your thingy actually you?please write back xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxbangbangtobambam
@bangbangtobambam: yes, that's me :)
wow!!!
pinkiepop hearted this
Weird but Yeahhh !!!!!
:):):):):):):):)
Much better than any of my story's :):):):):)
xxxxx
really good story mark and andy! really enjoyed myself. mark can you please view some of my stories?
such nice story mark it is even better than my stories
really good story i like it. this story is way better than one of mine
Nice
-Sofftie
lol that was so funny. I love how it turns out that he the ice cream gets eaten. Nice ending to the story. I hope you can read mine
you are a great storybird writer!
Punkinpiecrust hearted this
hee hee hee Funny!
ha ha mark lol
:)
Hahahaha!
-Foggie
hahaha...
hey mark whats up well,i like your storybird i guess i'll see you or talk to you later see ya later bye bye!!!$$$
this a really nice story! Well done! x
i love the story please comment on mine. Luv it!!!
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4cc hearted this
This story is the best! I used the same pictures in some of my stories! You guys have good writing. I'm going to put this on my reading list. I love it so much that I can't even heart it! HAHAHAHAHA!
-CaseyB1
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I really like this story,
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love it!!!
Love it mark
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mark
I noticed on your story that on the front cover the words were in white. Could you tell me how to do that?
@happycupcake: that's from the old system, before we introduced printing. It was possible to do this when stories were ONLY digital and we didn't have to worry about ink combinations and printing technology.
Ok thank you!
nice story mark
nicolesbp hearted this
Dear Mark,
I have heard tons of good things about you! I didn't know if they were true, but now that I have read some of your stories I know they are! I just have one qestion, but it is not related to the story..... Are you one of the creators on story bird? I loved this story and love the way you reach out to other story birders on line! I have always loved to write, but my mom discovered story bird for her 2nd grade class in about 2009. That was when she showed it to me! I love love love storybird! It is my second favorite website! my first is club penguin. No offense to you and the other people who work on story bird! I know I may not be a great author like figment 68, fogcat, and many many others, but it would make me REALLY happy if you could check out some of my stories and comment them and give me advice? other then grammar,because i know I am terrible at that!
Again, i would be SO honnored if you read some of my stories, and even more honnored if you read ALL of them and commented. I have some really wacky ideas, so they turn into really wacky story birds, but i personaly love them!!!!! please please please check them out! YOU ARE MY IDOL!!!!! SOME DAY, I HOPE TO BE SUCCESSFUL AS YOU! PLEASE RESPOND! I GET THAT YOU MIGHT NOT RESPOND FOR A WHILE, BECAUSE YOU ARE REALLY BUSY! IF YOUR SCEDHULE IS TOO BUSY, OF COURSE I UNDERSTAND! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW THE POSSIBILTIES OF ME BECOMING AN AUTHOR WHEN I GROW UP, AND WHO IS BETTER TO HERE IT FROM THEN A PROFESSIONAL WRITER??????? AND REMEMBER, BE HONNEST!I TOATLLY UNDERSTAND IF YOU DON'T LIKE MY WRITING. JUST KNOWING THAT YOU READ THEM GIVED ME ENOUGH HONNOR FOR BOTH OF US!
REMEMBER, YOU ARE MY IDOL!!!!! BE HONEST!
YOU BIGGEST FAN,
KEBCOCONUT
HAHA I LIKE THE ENDING
BURP HAHA
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i liked it so m uch i added it to my reading list and my little 5 year old sister loved it so read some of my stories i gatta go spongebobs frozen face of is on now
Parkini hearted this
ha ha!!!!!!!!!
Melody133 hearted this
funny luv it!!!!!!
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i love it. it was sssssssooooooo cccccuuuuttttteeee!!!!!!!!!
from jas
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loved it but poor icecream
cute! I feel sad for Sprinkles though.
-Mark
I really LOVE your stories but I have a question: Can you read some of mine? I want to be an author someday so can you read my stories and tell me if you like them? Thanks, That would mean a lot to me
Swiftiegal
Magarooney hearted this
poor little Sprinkles! waah :(