A Dream seems real.
A dreamed love.
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Published: Aug. 30, 2010
Updated: Sept. 1, 2010
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Good story, just a few mistakes. Be careful with the use of the third person in singular, check the use of relative clauses, check the use of infinitives and gerunds, after modal verbs never put the particle TO or the S. I LIKED YOUR STORY, I SEE IT VERY COHERENT AND IN GENERAL IS WELL WRITTEN.
cute story