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A Dream seems real.

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10-12 years
A Dream seems real.
A dreamed love.
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Comments (2)
  • luisafer
    luisafer says:
    Good story, just a few mistakes. Be careful with the use of the third person in singular, check the use of relative clauses, check the use of infinitives and gerunds, after modal verbs never put the particle TO or the S. I LIKED YOUR STORY, I SEE IT VERY COHERENT AND IN GENERAL IS WELL WRITTEN.
    Posted 17 months ago (Permalink)
  • kay3y
    kay3y says:
    cute story
    Posted 10 months ago (Permalink)

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Published: Aug. 30, 2010
Updated: Sept. 1, 2010
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