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  luisafer says:
  Good story, just a few mistakes. Be careful with the use of the third person in singular, check the use of relative clauses, check the use of infinitives and gerunds, after modal verbs never put the particle TO or the S. I LIKED YOUR STORY, I SEE IT VERY COHERENT AND IN GENERAL IS WELL WRITTEN.

  Posted 17 months ago (Permalink)
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  kay3y says:
  cute story

  Posted 10 months ago (Permalink)

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