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  mark hearted this

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  mark says:
  Beautifully done. Love the rhyming and choice of imagery. Plus, it gets me in the mood for hot cocoa!

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  smile566729 hearted this

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  clzjjw says:
  Great text! What an artful gathering of words and images!

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  Plateau hearted this

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  Jenbird32 hearted this

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  LiamB hearted this

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  LiamB says:
  I like this story. you make up good rhymes.

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  kaye hearted this

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  kaye says:
  Fantastic.

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  taralazar says:
  Jaunty little holiday rhyme. Cute.

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  Sponik says:
  It is the most coolest rhyming chritmas story i ever read

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  fredcool3pandalove says:
  I love the ryhming parts! It's a really nice story! You should be proud of yourself.

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  TheSilverHound says:
  Awesome rhyme, and the story goes well with the pictures too.xD

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