JollyJessieit's ok, but If you want people to be attracted to your books, then you need to have a strong title and something interesting in the book. Though, besides that, it was great
fancy_dressVery cute story. I'm glad Jean in the end finally learns her lesson because telling stories which isn't true and make other people lose their trust on you so it's always the best thing to tell the truth, even if the truth might hurt more because in the end, the lie hurts even more. Wonderful story with a great message. :)
coletrain1 Hearted.
coletrain1 Very cute and clever story!
mbentzscls like it. its so cute
JollyJessie it's ok, but If you want people to be attracted to your books, then you need to have a strong title and something interesting in the book. Though, besides that, it was great
figment68 Hearted.
figment68 Good story!
fancy_dress Hearted.
fancy_dress Very cute story. I'm glad Jean in the end finally learns her lesson because telling stories which isn't true and make other people lose their trust on you so it's always the best thing to tell the truth, even if the truth might hurt more because in the end, the lie hurts even more. Wonderful story with a great message. :)
Penelope11 What happens next?
Penelope11 Hearted.
elspeth Hearted.
joejunior cool good on you
mightyfighty2000 Hearted.
mightyfighty2000 Wow - that was just amazing!
gfoleyrm106 It was good but it seems like you picked out pics you like, then wrote about them and related them to the story, besides that, it was ok
karthur Very cute story and Congrats on N&N! :)
karthur Hearted.
Laugh_Live_Love123 Hearted.
Laugh_Live_Love123 Wow!!! This was such a great story!
skinnerbees I like this story
zoejen nice
bellepoon What a lovely story!
Franker A cutie story
iloveselenagomez Hearted.
iloveselenagomez Really good stories its really good i love this story my number 1 story
cb1c I liked it a lot
Selena2602 Hearted.
Selena2602 love your story
Sulema3421 GOOD CHACATERICTIC DETAILS.
Sulema3421 IS THIS STORY BASED ON YOU.