bmitchbub01I like how this story is told from the immortal image of Amanda. It's really cool how she's looking back on her life after her death. I like the point of view from which the story was told. Great Job!
stylegirlTHAT IS A VERRY SAD STORY YOU HAVE VERRY INTERSTING PICTURES YOU ARE VERRY AMZAZING WRITER HOW NICE STORY HAHA =) BTW IS IT A REAL STORY DID IT REALLY HAPPEN TO YOU IN REAL LIFE??
p14hjam Hearted.
p14hjam Great story! I particularly liked your picture choices for PAST, PRESENT and FUTURE!
213842 Hearted.
213842 I love it! :)
rogersajah390 I liked the picture byajah
jadekpps Hearted.
jadekpps WOW great story That really got to me
writer_smurf Hearted.
bmitchbub01 I like how this story is told from the immortal image of Amanda. It's really cool how she's looking back on her life after her death. I like the point of view from which the story was told. Great Job!
figment68 Hearted.
mightyfighty2000 Hearted.
mightyfighty2000 Nice one!
Pasqueflower Hearted.
Pasqueflower Sad but very captivating! :)
Bapic Hearted.
garrettzlu is that a real story?did that really happen to you
stylegirl THAT IS A VERRY SAD STORY YOU HAVE VERRY INTERSTING PICTURES YOU ARE VERRY AMZAZING WRITER HOW NICE STORY HAHA =) BTW IS IT A REAL STORY DID IT REALLY HAPPEN TO YOU IN REAL LIFE??
stylegirl Hearted.
dhallam Hearted.
samatha1085 Hearted.
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nidhi Hearted.
pizza1231112 Hearted.
SpottyEyes very sad but very good! enter the challenge http://storybird.com/books/descriptive-writing-challenge/
bridiestott very sad what an amazing storybird!
bridiestott that was very sad and that was a good and sad story
stylegirl nice story