Comments (7)

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  sevenblue says:
  Nice story. That was really neat. Never thought about most of those ideas you did. Great job! court <3

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  sevenblue says:
  Great story, Allie! Just some minor grammer and spelling issues, but otherwise awesome! -Ash

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  sevenblue says:
  I luved your story! I didn't really read it, but it looks good. I'll try to some other time.(: -best buddy

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  sevenblue says:
  Really good. There are some grammar, spelling, and punctuation to check out but really good.

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  sevenblue says:
  Nice job, Allie! You have some spelling and capitalization errors scattered around, but besides that it's great. :) -Becca-

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  sevenblue says:
  On one of the pages, you spelled "when" wrong. You forgot the E. other than that it was REALLY good i loved it!! :)

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  sevenblue says:
  I loved the story!!! It was really good. Aspecially the pictures!
  -best buddy(:

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)

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