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  Ginger says:
  Beautiful. I like that you don't force the rhyme, and leave a lot left unsaid, so that the reader has to infer some of the information.

  Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  hearted 25 months ago
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  brema223 says:
  great wrighting very touching words

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  RCI says:
  short but so sweet story

  Posted 18 months ago (Permalink)

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