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And That's When the Presents Exploded - A True Christmas Tale

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And That's When the Presents Exploded - A True Christmas Tale
The true, real, and totally accurate story of who really gets those presents under the tree.
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  • mark
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  • mark
    mark says:
    Another winner. Laughed the whole way through.
    Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
  • stad11
    stad11 says:
    Absolutely hilarious. I always thought Santa was an elephant and my therapist was wrong.
    Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
  • taralazar
    taralazar says:
    Hyper-bots, pigs and ninjas. What more does one story need? (Christopher Walken, perhaps?)
    Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
  • Fern
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  • kiyoung
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  • kiyoung
    kiyoung says:
    This could possibly be my "annual Christmas story" of the year.
    Thank you!!
    Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
  • kaye
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  • Lizard1212
    Lizard1212 says:
    LoL. That is sooooooooooooooo funny. Do you kow Mr. Santa C. Laus? ;)
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  • thomas
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    LoL.SooooooooooooSilly.loveit.(Brianne)
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  • Ginger
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  • Nimby
    Nimby says:
    Oh look... someone with a more twisted mind than mine (say that over and over until the room spins...) Nice story..."wicked twist".
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
  • rosiemcgrath
    rosiemcgrath says:
    i really like this story.
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
  • owl_stitch13
    owl_stitch13 says:
    this is by far one of my favorites!!! GREAT JOB!!
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
  • bgh112
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  • Silsopang
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  • Shift
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    that was amazing i am going to show it to my class and they are going to die because we are kearning about fairy tales and tall tales
    Posted 12 months ago (Permalink)
  • nac
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  • nac
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    I love it!(You can guess because I read it 10 times!)
    Posted 5 months ago (Permalink)
  • Rainbow741
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  • Rainbow741
    Rainbow741 says:
    Ha! Funny. I think the one thing I learned today is what I read today. It's nice haw you made the pictures match really well with the words. Awesome job!
    Posted 5 months ago (Permalink)
  • luminiere
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  • luminiere
    luminiere says:
    Pigs and elephants are awesome! Go Alice! I believe you! :)
    Posted 5 months ago (Permalink)
  • aleej
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  • aleej
    aleej says:
    cute story. why an elephant?
    Posted 4 months ago (Permalink)
  • GilbertC7
    GilbertC7 says:
    Nice. The pigs were hillarious!!
    Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
  • jazzl
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  • figment68
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    Awesome! Hilarious!
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  • Cassb
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  • Vannila
    Vannila says:
    Amazing
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  • anb2000
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  • anb2000
    anb2000 says:
    that was the best story i have ever read to be honest
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  • 19abode15al
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  • 19abode15al
    19abode15al says:
    LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • 50562
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  • 50562
    50562 says:
    good story
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • inkninja
    inkninja says:
    Oh sure, blame stuff on the ninjas. I will admit, I have had a few Christmas adventures, but there is no such thing as a ninja spy group. Get your facts straight. But this was absolutely hilarious. Good job! I'm so adding this to my reading list.
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
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  • brangarcia
    brangarcia says:
    hola
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • AleahFerngran
    AleahFerngran says:
    do you believe in Santa or not?
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
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  • nala0102
    nala0102 says:
    WOW!
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • rainbow02
    rainbow02 says:
    This is a really awesome story!You should be an author.
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • pm1234
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  • shark5
    shark5 says:
    Great
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • bhawl
    bhawl says:
    vare good story
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • rachel348
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  • morganb03
    morganb03 says:
    Wow!
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • kylieges
    kylieges says:
    Very nice. A good story with adventure and very funny :)
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • Allalea
    Allalea says:
    Hahahahahahaha! I love this story!
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • Allalea
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  • jazzmine37
    jazzmine37 says:
    Hi love the book so much
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Tbp12
    Tbp12 says:
    I LOVE IT!
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  • Sponge838
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  • olol16
    olol16 says:
    cool story
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • olol16
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  • peytonkaraca
    peytonkaraca says:
    I liked it
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • soccer4
    soccer4 says:
    THAT WAS A GOOD BOOK
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • lauracupcake10
    lauracupcake10 says:
    ur pretty good
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • MatthewF11
    MatthewF11 says:
    very good
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • shilei
    shilei says:
    :)
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  • thomasbor
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  • I5Natalie
    I5Natalie says:
    Love it so much!!!!!
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  • Desidell123
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  • Irisbird703
    Irisbird703 says:
    love it! you rule!
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • ethanh8
    ethanh8 says:
    GOOD JOB I liked it
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • Aathena
    Aathena says:
    Love love love love love this
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  • Aathena
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  • 3ADibartolo
    3ADibartolo says:
    FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • NicholasGib
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  • cindilovesyou
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  • cindilovesyou
    cindilovesyou says:
    You Are Very Creative And Awesommeee Story I Liked It :))
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • NyaJohnson
    NyaJohnson says:
    LMBO HA HA HA funny story
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
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  • danreines
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  • kittykat256
    kittykat256 says:
    WWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTT????????????!!!!!!!!!!
    Now that was funny. The day I posted this comment is Monday, December 12. Monday is my reading list day. The day I rush into work-picking up some Birds and putting them on my list. You must be glad it was Monday and I found this, because it's going on my list, getting a heart, a wink ;), a smiley :), an excited smile ^_^, and a compliment. I didn't believe the story, but you have great imagination!
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • kittykat256
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  • 1175010
    1175010 says:
    I love your story!
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • Luckyboy22
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  • Luckyboy22
    Luckyboy22 says:
    That was an Awesome story, L.O.L. & you tell me not to beleive crazy stories! Gr8 book! Congrats!
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • awgo
    awgo says:
    you have changed the way i see cristmas.
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • Qui26
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  • Qui26
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    Absolutely loved it!! It was hilarious!!!!!
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  • Melody133
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  • Melody133
    Melody133 says:
    What a funny story
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  • Kayleenf
    Kayleenf says:
    Nice, Great and wonderfull!
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  • janjan01
    janjan01 says:
    <3 it!!!
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  • Dayday101
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    loved it
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  • derekjeter23
    derekjeter23 says:
    This is definetly story of the year, decade, and century.
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • jastech
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  • jastech
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    goooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddddddddd jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjooooooooooooooooooooobbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb ddddddddddddddddddddddddd uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuddddddddddddddddddddddddddddeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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  • burns3s
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    sweat
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  • kasen348
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  • gehrkgra000
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    i love it so much
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  • 1234cheese
    1234cheese says:
    awsome story
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • Aubrecht
    Aubrecht says:
    It is awesome.
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • 123456a
    123456a says:
    ok
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  • nala0102
    nala0102 says:
    very, very funny! LOL!I beleive you 100%
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • Mickey782
    Mickey782 says:
    This is good!
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    hearted this
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  • waphooy
    waphooy says:
    Very imaginitive, and creative way of playing with the pictures to match the words. A winner! :) Also love how you made the epilogue - I like how you told how he's actually real. :)
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • hollylover
    hollylover says:
    elliebrocks and I love your story!
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • SBWPuffin
    SBWPuffin says:
    i like this.it's funny!!!!!!!
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  • linda332
    linda332 says:
    I love this, I enjoyed reading it. Sadly, there are not enough Christmas stories about elephants, pigs, ninjas, Hyper-bots, and exploding presents.
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
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  • erobinson1
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    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • KPSJacintaL
    KPSJacintaL says:
    cool story i really like this story it is brilliant
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  • purplemaddyxo
    purplemaddyxo says:
    Haha that was pretty good...
    haha i believe in Santa not some silly pigs and things.
    But haha it got my mind set!
    good job!!
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
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  • megleg99
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    awesome!
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  • HenryAE
    HenryAE says:
    thatys so sweet
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    NCJDLSCMSKD = MEANS COOL DUDE
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  • ellaguiles
    ellaguiles says:
    the best story i ever read
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
  • LucasRa
    LucasRa says:
    this was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo aaaaaawesome
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
  • gar11
    gar11 says:
    I thought it was kind of offensive towards santa. I don't think the elves will like the part about pigs making toys and stuff.:(
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
  • ImanF
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    AWESOME
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  • what I wish I could be............
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    what I wish I could be............
    it is bout a little boy who wants to be something when he grows up.
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
  • once there was a fairy
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    once there was a fairy
    a fairy who is trying to find her magic
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  • DALIYAH11717
    DALIYAH11717 says:
    THIS WAS THE BEST BOOK I HAVE EVER READ...( TODAY )BUT IT WAS OVERALL FANTASTIC!!! WOW WHAT A GREAT JOB... KEEP MAKING MORE!
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
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  • pokemontaylor
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    i love it!
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  • AbbyNyan
    AbbyNyan says:
    very nice
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  • cjwilling23
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    REALLY GOOD, yet random! :)
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  • sunnydays0
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    love love love love love love love best best story you are good
    this is definitely going on my reading list
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  • catt1
    catt1 says:
    it is cool/weird.
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
  • thesundaybest
    thesundaybest says:
    Thank you all - you are far too kind. You've inspired me to get back into Storybird - it has been way too long since I've used this totally awesome site!
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
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    EPIC!
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    I think it was the best story ever!!
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  • Austin_7
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    I agree about the "evil wolves" part, as you can see from my avatar, wolves are NOT evil.
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  • esecco20
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    Now that is what I call a funny story.
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    TwinkleToesGirl says:
    It's a very good book.
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  • cloud9
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    This is really good!! I like this story better than the actuall santa claus story!!
    KEEP IT UP!!
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
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  • gygygygygy
    gygygygygy says:
    great story
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  • hlee2
    hlee2 says:
    thats so funny!!!!!!!!!!


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  • sunsethkk
    sunsethkk says:
    This is so good oh and funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    SOOOOOOOO FUNNY!
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    I like it
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    I loved your story.
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    Awesome story It's hilarious!!!!
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    BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMM THERE GO THE GIFTS BYE BYE F.Y.I! LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IT!LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    that was cool as
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    that was awsome!!!!!!!!!:):) great imagination or is it the truth?
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    Oh my gosh! I can't even put to words how AWESOME this is! Okay, maybe I can. But, ANYWAY, I love this story so much! I laughed out loud every minute! Oh, and congratulations on the featured storybird! (Just between you and me--and everyone else who's reading this--I am so jealous of you! XP)
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    awesome and funny story :)
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    Wow really cool.
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    I love this book! It is super funy
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    GREAT STORY ! very interesting and creative :)
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    great! so funny! lol!
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    cool it rocks
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    so awesome hope you write another story about those weird pigs like it
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    awesome book
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    u hav a lot of comments dood or dudet.I like this book 2!!!
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    awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
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    what a tale it was hillarious
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    cute story i love it great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Hilarious!
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    I love it.It is funny
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    i ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    I love it so much
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    its funny
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    THIS IS THE BEST STOY EVER TOD


    u ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    ;)
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  • riptide135
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    out of all of the story birds I have read this is the best one yet and I love the part that you said the elephant is a karati master and the kids were ninga spies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I think you can tell I love this story
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    janniegowdy says:
    check out Annie a little dreamer (p.s. great story but it's not true.)
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    wow just read every comment its like reading harry potter any ways awesome book:D
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    wow
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    i love it
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    nice
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    santa won't appreteate that
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    Good story!!!
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    What just happened?
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    COOL STORY
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    now i dont belive in santa.all thanks to you
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    I really Really REALLY like this book!!!!
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    gret story it was just made me cry
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    Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    He he. I loved it! It's funny how you said it was all real, and then in the end, you said Santa C. Lause was reading stories about people mistaking him as Alice. Your a great author!
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    why this theme?
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    That story was pon nub!( In other words AWESOME!)
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    Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My favorit part was when the giant tentical drank all the egg nog!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    That got my Crhistmas spirit going. Magnificent imageination, and a marvelous book.
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    loved!!! but whats with the tentacle????
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    well done that was great!!
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    Ha!HA! What more does a story need?(Adele) perhaps!
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    that story is not what really happend
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    So funny wouldn't be surprised if it was true
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    WOW! Good balance of voice, fact, humor, and reality!
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    That was so funny! I absolutely loved the imagination throughout the whole story, hilarious!
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    I wish I could write stories like that
    -inoneill
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    This is hilarious!!!!!
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    ILOVE IT.
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    i like this story it is about christmas and it is in one week
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    great book!!!!!!
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    A true winner.
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    That was really funny! Loved it!
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    Cool story :)
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    great job!
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    loved it
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    I love your story.
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    Like the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Very silly and funny. You have a true talent.
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    so awesome i could die!
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    funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Very creative and funny... I liked the characters and the whole plot
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    this is a great story i love pigs
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    FAVORITE BOOK
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  • evago
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    This book is a really creative way to boost up all the Christmas spirits. It has a plot beggening middle middle end a problem and a soulution! Everything in a really good book. Yiu have a gift.
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    OMG!!!!!! that was the best story i have EVER read!!! do you have any other storys like that?
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    AWEAOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):):):):):):):):):):):)
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    I loved the start! But i got busy and couldn't finish...
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    Best. Story. Ever.
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    I think your story is the best I have ever read because I like the way you use your imaginatoin,it just brings out fun and exitment.If you are reading this,thesundaybest,I hope you enjoy it!
    This has ALOT of imangination so it'll make you think like,"Hmmm,this seems really true,I starting to belive it now!".You are avery great writer and I MEAN IT!This just has so much intresting pages.it wants to make you go on and on with this fabulous story.Thank you for entertianing me!!!
    Wants to be a freind of yours,
    BUBBLEgumsticks ;)
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    Funny
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    MAN THAT'S COOL
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    super
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    wow thats a lot of people and I love it
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    It could use a little work. I think that more presents should have exploded and also it should talk more about exploding presents or you can't call it that. by the way I think that you should make a story with Justin Bieber.
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    THAT IS A GREAT STORY!!!!!!! GOOD JOB
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    Nice
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    Best Storybird I Have Ever Saw!!!!!!
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    awesome!!!!!!!!!!
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    You sure do have a lot of fans. Anyway, awesome story! Your creativity is unmatchable. Please keep writing!
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    IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    I love this so much! Even my class enjoyed reading it!
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    Hilarious. (: Can't stop smiling.
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    LOL!!! sofunny!
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    ! (:
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    Awesome and hillarious story dude.:)
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    That book is awesome (Totally Hillarious)
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    funny lol god it's halarios
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    i love this story absolutely entertaining and very amusing!
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    I don`t get it really but it is sooooooooo cool
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    A bit long but i am deffinitly a BIG fan of this book.
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    i love your story so darn much
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    a touching story about growing up
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    luv it!
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    The best story EVER!!!!
    Anyone young or old has to love that story!!!!!!
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    soooo good you are a true author
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    Aww that story is lovely!
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    I llllllloooooooooooooovvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeddddddddddddddddd it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • Bubbygirl1234
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    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! I will definatly look for more of your stories!! :D
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    u r so,very,have lots of really great talent... i wish i were u
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    Awesome
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    true insperation
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    that is funny I can not stop lagheg
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    great story!
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    Loved this story! Really creative! :)
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    niceee
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    This is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good I'm sure you will become an awesome author when you grow up. YO!!!! PEACE!!!!
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    i love this story its so funny
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    I love this book so much.
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    ur a really great writer
    the story hilarious!!!!!!
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    lol it was funny you got to do more like this!! :)
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    a mad book
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    HO HO HO HO It was funny
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    cool i love it
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    i really liked this story
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    ur on my reading list
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    An absolute winner, By far.
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    funny
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    You must have a pretty big imagination to come up with that. It's hillarious!
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    Santa is bipolar? What does that mean?
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  • Alm0ndo
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    is it also false that alice was partial 2 honeydew melons?
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    it toook mee five minutes to be able tto type this u did great iit took me a half hour because ii could NOT stop laughing im stilll laughing.
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    thatts a good thingg uuuu know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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    this story is amazing i believe you 100%...HILARIOUS(and you gave it some attitude)!
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    hallarios i just read it for the 4th time
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    It's a great story!
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    I LOVE IT
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    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESTORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!,But don't you think little kids, Santa + his Elves might be offended?
    I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • topwriter
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    Hi Thursday best, your story really was the best. I'm just about to show it to my brother(I don't usually show story's to my brother!)


    TOPWRITER XXX
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    This book is so funny! I mean, hyper-bots, evil ninjas, this is the best christmas story ever!
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    Awesome!!!!!!!!!!
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    niiiice!
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    2000%
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    That is so funny!!!
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    That was an EXTREMELY FUNNY story, good job thesundaybest
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    nice story
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    so random!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    you have a lot of comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    I loved it, it was realy funny
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    LUV THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Great book!
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    This is a good story to read
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    PAHAHAHAHA!!! THATS PURE GOLD!I LOVE IT! X
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    i love this story........... it may be the best on story bird!
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    i loved it.Great imagination.
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    I liked your story it is the 2 best story P.S I'ev never thout that people are good I don't realy know how old you are but you are good at writing storys.
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    loved youer imagination
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    how did you no all of that wow
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    wow i loved it :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    i loved the bit when you the elaphant was called Alice :):):):):):
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    STORY EVER

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  • bethany023456
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    thats the best story ive ever heard well done
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    We absolutely loved this..super fun story! Good job!
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    that is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo funny!
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    This is a really funny story. I love this
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    OMG that was so funny LOL :)
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    O.M.G THATS AMAZING LOVE IT SOOOO SOOO SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH COULD READ THAT SOOOOO MANY TIMES AND WONT GET BOARD!well done u should be proud!
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.................................MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM............................................GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
    THATS SO FUNNY











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    nice!
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    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    this is made of 100% awsomeness
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    ... (awkward silence) ... ......... I LOVE IT! You have a great imagination. Although it could use a little... never mind
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    i didnt really get this story but it was entertaining!!!
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    i loved it.it is the best story i've read.
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    awsomme
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    very good,you are very talented,it was a plesure to read your story.
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    THIS STORY IS AMAZING,HILARIOUS, COOL, CRAZY,AND AMAZING!!!!!
    DID I MENTION IT WAS AMAZING??!!
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    really awsome
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    I love this story!!!!
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    cool i love it
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    I hope dat dis book will be cool!
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    Absolutely amazing! I love how you brought the humour into the story. Wonderful!
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    THIS IS A REALLY GOOD BOOK KEEP WRITING!!
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    if you wrote this and had it published i would pay you just to read it LOL make more and never give up
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    Great story!!!!!!MY THEORY WAS RIGHT!!!!! HA HA I TOLD ALL THOSE FOOLS BUT NOOOOO SANTA CLAUS WAS REAL!!!!!LOOK WHOS LAUGHING NOW GRANDMA....They also said I could never teach a Llama to drive...lets just say the cliff did not agree with him.There were lots of tiny bits left though I could have a half Llama barial
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    WOW! What a great story you have. Boy they are not as bad as mine. Yours are heeps better.
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    i love this story soooooooooooooooooo much and i think it is my new christmas eve story
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    really cool story
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    lol, read in a lifetime, really good
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    add to my reading list. awsome, funny good humor, but really Alice and Santa C.Lause are real?
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    Wow this is sooo good. I laughed all the way through. I bet you got the idea from the true story of the 3 little pigs. But this was wayyy funneir!!! Try to get it publlished! This is to good to leave alone nice job winner!!!!
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    HOLY SMOKES HOW MUCH COMMENT S DO YOU HAVE
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    I like this!!!! its pertty funny if you ask me.
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    this storys pretty good..lol
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    i love it. it was so hi-larry-us
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    Dear, Santa C. Laus
    I wished for a great story and I got one. Thank u flying elephant guy with pigs who do cool stuff.
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    ATTENTION: EVERYONE READ THE STORY " Emily made me feel like ice cream today" . MY FREIND WROTE IT AND ITS REALLY FUNNY SO IF U READ IT TELL HIM IN A COMMENT THAT NICKYBOY11 SENT YOU THERE. THANK YOU SO MUCH
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    Loved it! Laughed at Santa, hope I don't get coal. Bet Alice is nicer.
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    ilove this book your books are better than mine good luck with your storybirds
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    your story was really good.i liked when the pigs scared the man
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    OMGoodness you have a TOOOOOON of comments. But anyway, awesome, funny, smart story. Congrats!
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    Loved it - you should publish!
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    awesome story
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    It was very cute and even though I belive in Santa, I also belive in this. I don't know how it could get any cuter.
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    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Long, but very detailed. I really liked how you said that all the Christmas Stories were fake. I agree with you, but I like to listen to them for fun on Christmas Eve. :D
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    Good story. Weird but good. Make more like it. I like the part where you introduce Alice the elephant. I mean, come on. Nobody could have thought of a better idea. I do believe in most of the Christmas stories except for the one that goes like this: Twas the night before Christmas and all through the house not a creature was stirring not even a mouse. Fakeola. Anyway...thanks for sharing, thesundaybest! D10
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    P.S Keep up the good work.
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    ASWOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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