And That's When the Presents Exploded - A True Christmas Tale
The true, real, and totally accurate story of who really gets those presents under the tree.
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Published: Dec. 16, 2009
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mark hearted this
Another winner. Laughed the whole way through.
Absolutely hilarious. I always thought Santa was an elephant and my therapist was wrong.
Hyper-bots, pigs and ninjas. What more does one story need? (Christopher Walken, perhaps?)
Fern hearted this
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This could possibly be my "annual Christmas story" of the year.
Thank you!!
kaye hearted this
LoL. That is sooooooooooooooo funny. Do you kow Mr. Santa C. Laus? ;)
Lizard1212 hearted this
LoL.SooooooooooooSilly.loveit.(Brianne)
Ginger hearted this
Oh look... someone with a more twisted mind than mine (say that over and over until the room spins...) Nice story..."wicked twist".
i really like this story.
this is by far one of my favorites!!! GREAT JOB!!
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Silsopang hearted this
that was amazing i am going to show it to my class and they are going to die because we are kearning about fairy tales and tall tales
nac hearted this
I love it!(You can guess because I read it 10 times!)
Rainbow741 hearted this
Ha! Funny. I think the one thing I learned today is what I read today. It's nice haw you made the pictures match really well with the words. Awesome job!
luminiere hearted this
Pigs and elephants are awesome! Go Alice! I believe you! :)
aleej hearted this
cute story. why an elephant?
Nice. The pigs were hillarious!!
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Awesome! Hilarious!
Cassb hearted this
Amazing
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anb2000 hearted this
that was the best story i have ever read to be honest
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LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
50562 hearted this
good story
Oh sure, blame stuff on the ninjas. I will admit, I have had a few Christmas adventures, but there is no such thing as a ninja spy group. Get your facts straight. But this was absolutely hilarious. Good job! I'm so adding this to my reading list.
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hola
do you believe in Santa or not?
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WOW!
This is a really awesome story!You should be an author.
pm1234 hearted this
Great
vare good story
rachel348 hearted this
Wow!
Very nice. A good story with adventure and very funny :)
Hahahahahahaha! I love this story!
Allalea hearted this
Hi love the book so much
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I LOVE IT!
Sponge838 hearted this
cool story
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I liked it
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ur pretty good
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Love it so much!!!!!
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love it! you rule!
GOOD JOB I liked it
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FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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You Are Very Creative And Awesommeee Story I Liked It :))
LMBO HA HA HA funny story
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Now that was funny. The day I posted this comment is Monday, December 12. Monday is my reading list day. The day I rush into work-picking up some Birds and putting them on my list. You must be glad it was Monday and I found this, because it's going on my list, getting a heart, a wink ;), a smiley :), an excited smile ^_^, and a compliment. I didn't believe the story, but you have great imagination!
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I love your story!
Luckyboy22 hearted this
That was an Awesome story, L.O.L. & you tell me not to beleive crazy stories! Gr8 book! Congrats!
you have changed the way i see cristmas.
Qui26 hearted this
Absolutely loved it!! It was hilarious!!!!!
Melody133 hearted this
What a funny story
Kayleenf hearted this
Nice, Great and wonderfull!
dcha hearted this
<3 it!!!
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loved it
vanmetea hearted this
This is definetly story of the year, decade, and century.
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awsome story
It is awesome.
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very, very funny! LOL!I beleive you 100%
This is good!
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Very imaginitive, and creative way of playing with the pictures to match the words. A winner! :) Also love how you made the epilogue - I like how you told how he's actually real. :)
elliebrocks and I love your story!
i like this.it's funny!!!!!!!
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I love this, I enjoyed reading it. Sadly, there are not enough Christmas stories about elephants, pigs, ninjas, Hyper-bots, and exploding presents.
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trainwe hearted this
cool story i really like this story it is brilliant
KPSJacintaL hearted this
Haha that was pretty good...
haha i believe in Santa not some silly pigs and things.
But haha it got my mind set!
good job!!
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awesome!
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HenryAE hearted this
thatys so sweet
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NCJDLSCMSKD = MEANS COOL DUDE
ahviking hearted this
the best story i ever read
this was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo aaaaaawesome
I thought it was kind of offensive towards santa. I don't think the elves will like the part about pigs making toys and stuff.:(
AWESOME
what I wish I could be............
once there was a fairy
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THIS WAS THE BEST BOOK I HAVE EVER READ...( TODAY )BUT IT WAS OVERALL FANTASTIC!!! WOW WHAT A GREAT JOB... KEEP MAKING MORE!
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i love it!
very nice
sylasb hearted this
REALLY GOOD, yet random! :)
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this is definitely going on my reading list
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zarour1 hearted this
it is cool/weird.
Thank you all - you are far too kind. You've inspired me to get back into Storybird - it has been way too long since I've used this totally awesome site!
Abib_Itoshiihito hearted this
EPIC!
KJ8 hearted this
I think it was the best story ever!!
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Austin_7 hearted this
I agree about the "evil wolves" part, as you can see from my avatar, wolves are NOT evil.
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Now that is what I call a funny story.
SwaggBoy hearted this
It's a very good book.
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megamilly100 hearted this
This is really good!! I like this story better than the actuall santa claus story!!
KEEP IT UP!!
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mustardrockbear hearted this
great story
thats so funny!!!!!!!!!!
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smattix hearted this
This is so good oh and funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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cooooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Wow I love this story
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SOOOOOOOO FUNNY!
I like it
I loved your story.
Awesome story It's hilarious!!!!
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Love it!
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that was cool as
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that was awsome!!!!!!!!!:):) great imagination or is it the truth?
bluebird26 hearted this
Oh my gosh! I can't even put to words how AWESOME this is! Okay, maybe I can. But, ANYWAY, I love this story so much! I laughed out loud every minute! Oh, and congratulations on the featured storybird! (Just between you and me--and everyone else who's reading this--I am so jealous of you! XP)
awesome and funny story :)
jiascu hearted this
Wow really cool.
I love this book! It is super funy
randim hearted this
GREAT STORY ! very interesting and creative :)
warpusbr hearted this
great! so funny! lol!
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109158 hearted this
so awesome hope you write another story about those weird pigs like it
tjing hearted this
awesome book
u hav a lot of comments dood or dudet.I like this book 2!!!
sidneycrosbycanada87 hearted this
really good i liked it
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awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wallace5 hearted this
You are some bit good
kara25 hearted this
bellebum hearted this
what a tale it was hillarious
cute story i love it great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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shadowwarrior hearted this
Hilarious!
I love it.It is funny
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CHR0002 hearted this
I love it so much
AS12 hearted this
its funny
THIS IS THE BEST STOY EVER TOD
u ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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out of all of the story birds I have read this is the best one yet and I love the part that you said the elephant is a karati master and the kids were ninga spies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I think you can tell I love this story
check out Annie a little dreamer (p.s. great story but it's not true.)
wow just read every comment its like reading harry potter any ways awesome book:D
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i love it
ashtonmjah hearted this
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Romines21 hearted this
nice
Susanna4th hearted this
santa won't appreteate that
Good story!!!
Saraisawesome hearted this
What just happened?
braderz001 hearted this
COOL STORY
ailema hearted this
now i dont belive in santa.all thanks to you
I really Really REALLY like this book!!!!
cdspring hearted this
gret story it was just made me cry
ACvetovac hearted this
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GreenHolly hearted this
He he. I loved it! It's funny how you said it was all real, and then in the end, you said Santa C. Lause was reading stories about people mistaking him as Alice. Your a great author!
Ecookie hearted this
why this theme?
That story was pon nub!( In other words AWESOME!)
kaitlynb7s hearted this
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My favorit part was when the giant tentical drank all the egg nog!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ritchison hearted this
That got my Crhistmas spirit going. Magnificent imageination, and a marvelous book.
Lillystar17 hearted this
blahaar hearted this
loved!!! but whats with the tentacle????
cdiggs11 hearted this
well done that was great!!
Ha!HA! What more does a story need?(Adele) perhaps!
Tcourtney hearted this
that story is not what really happend
betterthanshakspere hearted this
So funny wouldn't be surprised if it was true
WOW! Good balance of voice, fact, humor, and reality!
PercyJackson16 hearted this
That was so funny! I absolutely loved the imagination throughout the whole story, hilarious!
Broadway11 hearted this
Kat221234 hearted this
I wish I could write stories like that
-inoneill
ianoneill hearted this
This is hilarious!!!!!
Mscindyl hearted this
taha04 hearted this
ILOVE IT.
NiamhEB hearted this
mrscurry hearted this
i like this story it is about christmas and it is in one week
great book!!!!!!
HAMLI hearted this
A true winner.
Nele hearted this
That was really funny! Loved it!
Cool story :)
ameliaarts hearted this
oisinosullivan hearted this
great job!
loved it
shaw0614 hearted this
love it
missbirdy hearted this
The Animal Lover
I love your story.
Like the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very silly and funny. You have a true talent.
so awesome i could die!
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funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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mmunoz766 hearted this
Very creative and funny... I liked the characters and the whole plot
DevonJS hearted this
this is a great story i love pigs
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I love it!
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This book is a really creative way to boost up all the Christmas spirits. It has a plot beggening middle middle end a problem and a soulution! Everything in a really good book. Yiu have a gift.
evago hearted this
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Nice story!
zoroarksstorys1 hearted this
OMG!!!!!! that was the best story i have EVER read!!! do you have any other storys like that?
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AWEAOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):):):):):):):):):):):)
baily123456789 hearted this
I loved the start! But i got busy and couldn't finish...
starSam hearted this
Best. Story. Ever.
I think your story is the best I have ever read because I like the way you use your imaginatoin,it just brings out fun and exitment.If you are reading this,thesundaybest,I hope you enjoy it!
This has ALOT of imangination so it'll make you think like,"Hmmm,this seems really true,I starting to belive it now!".You are avery great writer and I MEAN IT!This just has so much intresting pages.it wants to make you go on and on with this fabulous story.Thank you for entertianing me!!!
Wants to be a freind of yours,
BUBBLEgumsticks ;)
Funny
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wow thats a lot of people and I love it
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LOL!!!!
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It could use a little work. I think that more presents should have exploded and also it should talk more about exploding presents or you can't call it that. by the way I think that you should make a story with Justin Bieber.
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THAT IS A GREAT STORY!!!!!!! GOOD JOB
Nice
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love it
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Best Storybird I Have Ever Saw!!!!!!
awesome!!!!!!!!!!
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You sure do have a lot of fans. Anyway, awesome story! Your creativity is unmatchable. Please keep writing!
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I love this so much! Even my class enjoyed reading it!
deepfried_freak hearted this
Hilarious. (: Can't stop smiling.
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luv it i sended it to my friend
wms8 hearted this
LOL!!! sofunny!
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Awesome and hillarious story dude.:)
524tt5 hearted this
That book is awesome (Totally Hillarious)
funny lol god it's halarios
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I like this.
alanma hearted this
i love this story absolutely entertaining and very amusing!
I don`t get it really but it is sooooooooo cool
A bit long but i am deffinitly a BIG fan of this book.
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i love your story so darn much
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as we grow old....
luv it!
The best story EVER!!!!
Anyone young or old has to love that story!!!!!!
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Sooo funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Could'nt stop laughing!!!!!!!!!!
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allih hearted this
soooo good you are a true author
Aww that story is lovely!
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I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! I will definatly look for more of your stories!! :D
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I like it.
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u r so,very,have lots of really great talent... i wish i were u
Awesome
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aslw hearted this
true insperation
JNSP72 hearted this
that is funny I can not stop lagheg
lioness22 hearted this
great story!
Loved this story! Really creative! :)
ErichaRae hearted this
niceee
This is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good I'm sure you will become an awesome author when you grow up. YO!!!! PEACE!!!!
callissa1234 hearted this
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i love this story its so funny
I love this book so much.
ur a really great writer
the story hilarious!!!!!!
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lol it was funny you got to do more like this!! :)
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Megha123 hearted this
a mad book
HO HO HO HO It was funny
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pinksugar246 hearted this
cool i love it
catizzy1 hearted this
i really liked this story
ellis8 hearted this
ur on my reading list
blakekaraca hearted this
An absolute winner, By far.
funny
You must have a pretty big imagination to come up with that. It's hillarious!
Santa Is Bipolar!!
is it also false that alice was partial 2 honeydew melons?
it toook mee five minutes to be able tto type this u did great iit took me a half hour because ii could NOT stop laughing im stilll laughing.
thatts a good thingg uuuu know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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this story is amazing i believe you 100%...HILARIOUS(and you gave it some attitude)!
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hallarios i just read it for the 4th time
It's a great story!
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I LOVE IT
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I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Thursday best, your story really was the best. I'm just about to show it to my brother(I don't usually show story's to my brother!)
TOPWRITER XXX
dottey12345 hearted this
This book is so funny! I mean, hyper-bots, evil ninjas, this is the best christmas story ever!
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!
niiiice!
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That is so funny!!!
That was an EXTREMELY FUNNY story, good job thesundaybest
nice story
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so random!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I loved it, it was realy funny
LUV THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nny hearted this
Great book!
YoungT hearted this
This is a good story to read
quincyblue hearted this
PAHAHAHAHA!!! THATS PURE GOLD!I LOVE IT! X
avaschweitzer hearted this
i love this story........... it may be the best on story bird!
totsylove hearted this
i loved it.Great imagination.
I liked your story it is the 2 best story P.S I'ev never thout that people are good I don't realy know how old you are but you are good at writing storys.
shaden2da hearted this
loved youer imagination
how did you no all of that wow
wow i loved it :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i loved the bit when you the elaphant was called Alice :):):):):):
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thats the best story ive ever heard well done
SheEyeballedAMint hearted this
We absolutely loved this..super fun story! Good job!
bookworm320 hearted this
that is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo funny!
This is a really funny story. I love this
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awsome!!!
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OMG that was so funny LOL :)
O.M.G THATS AMAZING LOVE IT SOOOO SOOO SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH COULD READ THAT SOOOOO MANY TIMES AND WONT GET BOARD!well done u should be proud!
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THATS SO FUNNY
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is made of 100% awsomeness
... (awkward silence) ... ......... I LOVE IT! You have a great imagination. Although it could use a little... never mind
HaleySer hearted this
i didnt really get this story but it was entertaining!!!
i loved it.it is the best story i've read.
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sweetheart19 hearted this
very good,you are very talented,it was a plesure to read your story.
Andrew1s hearted this
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kyaral208 hearted this
this was really funny
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THIS STORY IS AMAZING,HILARIOUS, COOL, CRAZY,AND AMAZING!!!!!
DID I MENTION IT WAS AMAZING??!!
20pbarcus hearted this
really awsome
I love this story!!!!
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cool i love it
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I hope dat dis book will be cool!
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I'm very sorry about what I said. I love the book!!!!
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wow loved it and wow you have alot of comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This book is really good !!!<3 it who wrote this?
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Best story EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Tee hee hee it's funny
Whoa!!! you have like! 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 comments! by the way your book is very.... um.... what's the word.......... interesting!!!!!!!!
1. nice
2. cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
3. I like it.
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clarkhdean hearted this
Luv it! I really love this story!!!!
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dominguezl hearted this
nice story
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yggdrassil hearted this
Hilarious and quite informative.
Westphal hearted this
Absolutely amazing! I love how you brought the humour into the story. Wonderful!
wow !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like this book it r almost as awshum as HARRY POTTER and that's saying sumthin ^^
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...and this book XD
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good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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i like this book <3
kaydan12345 hearted this
I think this is really funny.
awesome amazing
quintencook hearted this
Halirrious hahahahahahahhaahah!
I am so adding this to my reading list!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Scarysarabeara5 hearted this
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :P :D
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love it
I just love it! I wish I could heart it a million times!!! Please check out my stories! Thanks!
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THIS IS A REALLY GOOD BOOK KEEP WRITING!!
i love storybird
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ChristineApples hearted this
hahaha so funny! loved it!
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This book is going on my reading list, lloooooooooovvvvveeeeee it
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if you wrote this and had it published i would pay you just to read it LOL make more and never give up
Great story!!!!!!MY THEORY WAS RIGHT!!!!! HA HA I TOLD ALL THOSE FOOLS BUT NOOOOO SANTA CLAUS WAS REAL!!!!!LOOK WHOS LAUGHING NOW GRANDMA....They also said I could never teach a Llama to drive...lets just say the cliff did not agree with him.There were lots of tiny bits left though I could have a half Llama barial
Slaney1 hearted this
If I was in a laughing mood this would =have been hilarious
WOW! What a great story you have. Boy they are not as bad as mine. Yours are heeps better.
lol so funny
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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lol this is AWESOME
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HotsonT hearted this
i love this story soooooooooooooooooo much and i think it is my new christmas eve story
really cool story
lol, read in a lifetime, really good
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add to my reading list. awsome, funny good humor, but really Alice and Santa C.Lause are real?
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Wow this is sooo good. I laughed all the way through. I bet you got the idea from the true story of the 3 little pigs. But this was wayyy funneir!!! Try to get it publlished! This is to good to leave alone nice job winner!!!!
HOLY SMOKES HOW MUCH COMMENT S DO YOU HAVE
I like this!!!! its pertty funny if you ask me.
this storys pretty good..lol
kikimimi34 hearted this
i love it. it was so hi-larry-us
Dear, Santa C. Laus
I wished for a great story and I got one. Thank u flying elephant guy with pigs who do cool stuff.
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your good
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ATTENTION: EVERYONE READ THE STORY " Emily made me feel like ice cream today" . MY FREIND WROTE IT AND ITS REALLY FUNNY SO IF U READ IT TELL HIM IN A COMMENT THAT NICKYBOY11 SENT YOU THERE. THANK YOU SO MUCH
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i not bad i like the story you creative thanx for the story :-)
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rcrigler hearted this
Loved it! Laughed at Santa, hope I don't get coal. Bet Alice is nicer.
ilove this book your books are better than mine good luck with your storybirds
376583 hearted this
this is the best
gaby5401 hearted this
That was a good story...know wonder you have a lot of commets!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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it was alsome
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I like your book very much from yeo man.
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i loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it
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BEST STORY EVER! TRUE STORY!!!!!!
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alexk494 hearted this
i really really really [keep on saying really for 20 minutes] like it!
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emmac7s hearted this
your story was really good.i liked when the pigs scared the man
OMGoodness you have a TOOOOOON of comments. But anyway, awesome, funny, smart story. Congrats!
LB
Libertybell hearted this
Very Funny!
misskate hearted this
Loved it - you should publish!
awesome story
i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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Firestory hearted this
It was very cute and even though I belive in Santa, I also belive in this. I don't know how it could get any cuter.
studentts hearted this
funny
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Long, but very detailed. I really liked how you said that all the Christmas Stories were fake. I agree with you, but I like to listen to them for fun on Christmas Eve. :D
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Good story. Weird but good. Make more like it. I like the part where you introduce Alice the elephant. I mean, come on. Nobody could have thought of a better idea. I do believe in most of the Christmas stories except for the one that goes like this: Twas the night before Christmas and all through the house not a creature was stirring not even a mouse. Fakeola. Anyway...thanks for sharing, thesundaybest! D10
P.S Keep up the good work.
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