Comments (4)

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  Jabd says:
  I like this story

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 3
  Development - 4
  Illustrations - 4
  Mechanics - 4
  
  Grade: 95
  This is an enjoyable story! I get the basic idea at the end, but I would like your answer to the question "Is it better not to know" to be more clear.

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  mmsc says:
  your story is excellent

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  telarode says:
  Its a good book but might wanna change the age rating its probaly not that easy for 1-3 year olds :)

  Posted 16 months ago (Permalink)

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