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  daddylove678 says:
  it has a good amont of pages but wheres somr of the words???

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  daddylove678 says:
  ...its better than mine

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  1566 says:
  sometimes, tho, it is really hard 2 b happy....

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  graceishere says:
  cute and so true :)

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  yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa says:
  WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW

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  kadomada hearted this

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  kadomada says:
  Sweet

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  mackenzatron says:
  that was nice

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  kadomada says:
  A really nice story. I read it again!!
  I always read your StoryBirds and check if there are new ones!! You're a really advanced writer!!
  You haven't written any new ones lately...
  Hey could you read one of my StoryBirds and comments on it to tell me what you think of it? I'm trying to improve my writing skills!!
  Here's the link: http://storybird.com/books/how-to-live-your-life-with-success/
  Please enjoy and keep writing!!!
  kadomada

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  luckytwice says:
  Aww, what a cute little adorable story! Very well written with a very strong message! :)

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  bakeericee says:
  I really liked it. However, on the last page, when you put the smiley face [:)], it kind of ruined the mood of the story and brought it down a little. Other than that, it was fantastic.

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  Coolguy777 says:
  Hi Mark, it's me Coolguy777 remember? I haven't been on Storybird for a long time and I wanted to know why the questions/comments tab is gone. Thanks again, Coolguy777. Oh, and great story :D

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  mark says:
  Thanks folks,
  
  @bakeericee: it was one of my early Storybirds and written off the cuff.
  
  @coolguy777: it's temporarily disabled. We'll have it back up "soon."

  Posted 10 months ago (Permalink)
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  PorchMonkey says:
  this made me happy face.

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  hattusas says:
  loved it!
  
  there are a lot of things to be happy.
  be aware of this,plz:)

  Posted 10 months ago (Permalink)
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  ag4 says:
  You really are a good writer, although smilies ruin the mood, I have to agree.

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  luminiere says:
  Very nice!

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  charlize65 says:
  very good story bird may you please read some of my story birds?
  

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  celtic32 says:
  Hey, Baconita and Freaksta!!! (This is for them Mark, loved your Storybird, BTW)
  
  2nd part of the taco is.......here!!!!!!!!

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  Megan5G says:
  Well Done Mark! I have written a few stories like that too with a strong message but you won't find them. Sadly. Great Job!

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