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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 2
  Development - 4
  Illustrations - 4
  Mechanics - 4
  
  Grade: 92
  Your story is very good, but does not clearly address the question, "Is it better not to know?" Perhaps you can change the ending a bit to make that more clear. Also, there's two small problems you can correct to improve your grade. There's a small spelling mistake on page 2, and I'm not sure if the picture on page 5 fits with the text. See if you can fix those!

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)

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