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Birthday Truth

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  • jmikulski
    jmikulski says:
    Meaning - 2
    Development - 4
    Illustrations - 4
    Mechanics - 4

    Grade: 92
    Your story is very good, but does not clearly address the question, "Is it better not to know?" Perhaps you can change the ending a bit to make that more clear. Also, there's two small problems you can correct to improve your grade. There's a small spelling mistake on page 2, and I'm not sure if the picture on page 5 fits with the text. See if you can fix those!
    Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)

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Published: Nov. 25, 2009
Updated: Dec. 1, 2009
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