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  lemonade5678 says:
  Love it! Nice rhyming! It is so smooth, and that it was I like about all your stories.

  Posted 11 months ago (Permalink)
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  blantone says:
  Beautiful ryming! It truely explains what bliss is. If you get the chance, could you read and comment on my storybirds?
  Keep on writin'.
  ~blantone

  Posted 11 months ago (Permalink)
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  deepfried_freak says:
  A poem!!! And a fantabulisic one at that! Very awesome!! I love poems, as I love this one! Keep it up!

  Posted 10 months ago (Permalink)
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  baconbaby511 hearted this

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  baconbaby511 says:
  Aw, page 6 is my absolute favourite part of the poem. :) Love love love love love it!!! Phenominal, and just plain fabulous.

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  Titanic8642 hearted this

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  Titanic8642 says:
  I love poems!

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  figment68 hearted this

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  figment68 says:
  Wonderful poem!!!

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  Titanic8642 says:
  Have you heard the song Beautiful Liar?
  I'm listening to it NOW!

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  zibbycomix says:
  Titanic8642- No, I haven't heard the song "Beautiful Liar." Who is it by?
  Also, thanks for commenting!

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  XochitlFlower says:
  beautiful!im enjoying all your stories so far!

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  XochitlFlower hearted this

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  stubby_girl says:
  You are such an AMAZING writer!!! Im starting to get jealous of you. lol :)

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  luminiere hearted this

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  luminiere says:
  Bliss is an awesome feeling to have.

  Posted 6 months ago (Permalink)
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  Stephanie4HAVS says:
  Love the rhyme!
  

  Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)

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