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  mark says:
  Lovely and eloquent. This is a keeper.

  Posted 24 months ago (Permalink)
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  risa101 says:
  As a young reader myself I think that this story is remarkable. You should read my story about my little brother."The Tale of Two Buddies"

  Posted 24 months ago (Permalink)
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  LizzyH says:
  I loved this story so much! It was sad, but happy and haunting. Keep writing. Check out my children's book:Do You?

  Posted 24 months ago (Permalink)
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  macbeth says:
  thanks folks for your great feedback. much valued

  Posted 24 months ago (Permalink)
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  nicoleAcolon says:
  beautiful story!

  Posted 24 months ago (Permalink)
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  apandit says:
  Outstanding!

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  rad52097 says:
  love this

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  annanor says:
  its good and long i love it keep it up

  Posted 23 months ago (Permalink)
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