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  • Nele How was it? Please tell me if it's ok, because this was my first attempt of a rhyming acrostic! :)

  • deepfried_freak Hearted.

  • deepfried_freak Neeeeeellllllllllee! That was MARVELOUS!!! (: No joke. A rhyming acrostic is very clever. (: Great job!! (:

  • Nele deepfried_freak-Thanks! I was thinking about it one night...

  • waphooy Hearted.

  • waphooy Very nice Nele!! :) Great first attempt at an acrostic. You did amazing!!

  • Nele waphooy-Thanks, waphooy!

  • luminiere Hearted.

  • luminiere Nele, it's way more than okay. It's awesome. No doubt. Acrostics are wonderful.

  • bookloverjoy Hearted.

  • bookloverjoy :) That made me smile! It was absolutely amazing!!! :D

  • Nele luminiere-Thanks, luminiere! You're awesome without a doubt too! I like acrostics too.

    bookloverjoy-thanks!

  • figment68 Hearted.

  • figment68 Great job Nele!!

  • Nele luminiere-Yes, enjoy I will, as always!
    figment68-Thanks, figment!

  • Luckyboy22 Incredible Nele! I love it?? btwm you made the dragons temple part 5 a private book, can you please make it public so everyone can read it? THX,
    Lucky

  • Luckyboy22 Hearted.

  • luminiere Nele, have I ever told you this? I love your avatar. A lot. I really do. It gives me a feeling of peace and serenity. Just does.

  • Nele luminiere-Really? Thanks! I like it alot, too! Yes-peace, serenity, also hope for the future and imagination, maybe.

  • Allalea http://storybird.com/books/the-mysterious-appearance-of-the-house-of-casus/

    A story about a mysterious house within a mysterious fair

  • luminiere Yes, totally hope for future and imagination. THough, I would think that imagination was a little more wild and crazy? But what you said sounded really pretty, so I'm listening to it.:)

  • smiley316 Hearted.

  • smiley316 First attempt at a rhyming acrostic? Wow... it seemed like you had done it a hundred times before, that is how good it was!

    It was really, really good, and I think it's OK to cheat a little bit... In my reading list!

    I love your avatar by the way... it kinda gives me a feeling of serenity. It reminds me of imagination... because it's kind of like a girl looking out of a window, staring at the sky, like she can see the whole world from her tiny little view. I like it a lot (:

    Anyway, you should definitely send me the link to your next storybird, because if it's as good as this one, I'll definitely want to read it (:

    -Smiley

  • Nele Allalea-Cool!
    luminiere-yes, imagination-ideas all over the place. Great thinking!
    smiley316-Really? It was that good? Thank you so much! Sure, a link!

  • lalahead316 Hearted.

  • luminiere It's acrostic poem week! alexjane101's idea.

    Never let go of your dreams, for
    Each dream lets you fly free from the Earth. Dreams
    Let you fly, and you're never rooted, ever, to the ground. So keep
    Every dream, spread your wings and fly.

    And that spells Nele! Sorry, that had nothing to do with you. Nothing at all. Just something about dreams. But dreams do let you fly. Oh, and it's so not my best. Really, please don't judge my writing by this.

  • deepfried_freak Acrostic poem week! How clever!! Too bad it's over now... :/

  • Nele lalahead-Thanks!
    luminiere-Cool! Acrostic poem week? Cool! Thanks! No, I liked what you've done with Nele!
    deepfried_freak-Yes, clever, huh?

  • Nele Jojo_Mojo-Yup. It was a while. But glad to know the next one's out!

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