Do You
Remember
When?
A story for my students.
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Published: Aug. 29, 2010
Updated: Sept. 3, 2010
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Great use of the "Remember when" sentence structure. I'm going to share this with my students.
Thanks for sharing!
Señor Beast
wow it was soooooooooooo super u make amazing stories i give this book a A+ and the Author should be Queen
I love this - written with palpable love. I relate.
it's a beutiful story
Naomi1 hearted this
I loved how you used "remember when" so many times.
i don't even know what to say i loved that so much!
Benannah hearted this
aww i like it
gwenamon hearted this
Lovely.
brit2tani hearted this
that was such a good book i put it on facebook and my mom and dad loved it so much
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anoney8 hearted this
Really really good writing! i loved the story (:
this was an awesome book!! :)
MusicLily hearted this
Gorgeous. An instruction manual for parents in disguise.
Wow! Thats so cool! I love it! Keep it up!!
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love it
ok i got to hand it to you; you write better than me although you are very inspiring
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Sweet
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Well written!
-Ikvuse
so cool,awesome and everything in the best way!
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i really lo this
Tildabird hearted this
So cool! sweet!
U make perfect and amazing stories
Oh My God,thats awesome, i wish i could write like you check my new story called the monster of drazeton! its so cool.
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Thankyou for this story! You just gave me a wonder ful idea.
Absouletly beautiful and amazing. Great job (:
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Great book i would enjoy reading others!
brittr hearted this
really really nice story!
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i wish i was you i really do. :):):):):):):)
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I love the message in the story and the way it comes.
Congratulations.
i loved it i am speechless
This book makes you fell like you have endless thoughts
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What a beautiful story. It was wonderful!
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This is a beautiful story, something that students would cherish. I hope you share it with them!
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WOW! This story is very heart warming. I loved it! Great job!
12265936 hearted this
soo good
YES OH YES!!!!
very very good
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silverx778 hearted this
it took my heart away.......
cakefruit12 hearted this
beautiful, full of love, passion, and it put me in an excellent mood!
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This is such a lovely story. I am going to use the I remember when, with my classes next week.
This was a great book excellent job A+. It reminds me o fwhen I was little and couldn't do anything and mow I'm independent. Loved the story good work right more lihe this. Very heartwarming and touching. When I'm a parent I will see to that your kids grow up to fast.
Love this story. It is so cool!The story sort of tells you to remember how far youve come in life.
This is an inspirational story. Perfect to use with students to inspire them to write. You should consider publishing it for a wider audience.
Amethyst98 hearted this
This is lovely!
My year i students thought this was a fabulous story and it took them through their memories. They could see how much they had grown up.
I loved it it reminded me of lots of my memories
LittleLollipop hearted this
i think this story is really beautiful and i think this story is really good cause it reminds people of their young memories.
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This is a great story bird nice work.
KALV hearted this
best story yet and I will look back to my memories.
its so nice i love it
alecr hearted this
love this book! so cute. :)
really good! I LOVED IT!
megymax hearted this
you are a very very good writter keep it up !!!!!!! i love the story do you remeber when ? its great like i said KEEP IT UP
Sincerly ,
Caitlin !!!!!!!!
i love this book! it reminded me of when i was young and now im old and going to school. it kinda makes me sad though. when i was reading it i thought of all my memories. i miss the good ole days. know what im saying? anyways i love to write, but this book inspired me even more! you should publish it for real! its a realy awesome story about a father and his baby girl, kinda like me and my dad. i like being indipendent, but sometimes, just sometimes i miss those days when i would stay home and play all day. i toatly get this stry! its just like my experience and like evry little girls out there in the world! i was looking at the comments and it seems when people read this they feel a strange feeling. a feeling of happiness, of joy, of hope, maybe a little sadness,but most of all, a feeling of wanting to write. i wish i could write as good as you and have your talents.but were all dfferent people. and this book explains all of that, and more! once again, you should try to publish this book in real life! when ever i see one of youre stories,i will click on it right away! everyone agree with me? im looking forward to more stories from you! i know you will be sucsessfull in life! when youre older, you should be an author! ok ok. ill get to the point. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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xoxo.
B3$T B00K 3\/@
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I this was wonderful and beautiful. Life can many ways of learning, and it's important when someone learns something new!
hearted this.I like it so much!
its such a beautiful book
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i love it and i fell like crying
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aMAZing!!! I was about yo cry :-)
that is beautiful
Wow. great story. im speechless
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I love this book its great to read when you feel small and underaprieciated.
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!! ITS SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
benckqes hearted this
coolstory!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your story was great, I wish I would of thought of that, how wonderful it was and the writing and the picture I think I might show my class this.
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this is a very good book
i totally agree with everyone elses comments! OMG that was amazing! you should be really proud of yourself! Its such an inspiring book and i think it brought back a lot of memories to the people that have read this wonderful book!!! Keep writing other heart-warming books like that and you will become an excellent writer(not that you arent now) I think your amazing!i love it
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this is a b-u-ti-full story i almost cried it so tuching i love it. it so emotinol so lovely
Loved it
soo cool and lovely!
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cooper hearted this
That was very good. I liked the end a lot.
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wow that was amazing it makes me feel happy and sad at the same time
I'm jealous, that was great.
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It was as if the words were written first and then the illustrations were created to match your words! I loved it. And my son did too!
That is a grat story bird i loved it more then every ones.
wow that was really good :)
The was a very infulency story and i love it
imene hearted this
great work
love it
alesha786 hearted this
amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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OMG this book is so touching i love this book!<3
Wow.amazing
wow... i come from the school u teach at and this was amazing!
it wa s heart warming
LOLGal hearted this
Write more story birds for me to read please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sdemasky15 hearted this
This is a beautiful story . It reminds me of what my dad says "You are never to old". YOU are very talented best storybird in a long time Lol
great
i loved thissss!!!
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lol I love your story
This story was not something that our librarian would normally read to us. It made us think about how far we had come in our learning.
My mom loved it! 100 out of 10
Awesome!!!
I loved this
this story is very true cause it inspires us if we were little gorgous book darl xx annie
COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UR AWSOME.....U SHOULD MAKE SOME MORE STORYS BIRDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Beautiful!!!
Vassiliki hearted this
awesome book so cute :)
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you have a lot of comments and im adding to them i L-O-V-E-D loved it it makes me feel when im older i might be crying about when i was little and all the good times passed so i'l remember right now
i would be crying now but those time just might be happening
hearting it
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nice
This story is really moving
claire300 hearted this
I realy like the story
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awww....
This is the greatest book i have ever read........ i never read a book so touching, so loving, but also a little sad. i have never read a book ever in my time on storybird that has made me feel this way. You are very touching with your story and i like that about you. You express true parentship (Which to point out i am no wear near to parent-hood) but my mom expresses it to me so much i can't quiet explain. You have made me want to write so much. I THINK EVERYBODY FEELS THIS WAY ONCE THEY READ THIS!!! You have that much power? Lolz!! But I want to say again that it is sad because you tell about a girl who can't do much but now can do anything. The parent feels sad (because of having not to teach their child that anymore) but because it is like a feeling that you do not need them anymore. I just love your story. Your going to have to give me some help. I WANT AS MANY FEWS AS THIS!! I know that whoever hasn't read this yet has to be insane!!!!!! This book is to good. AND IF YOUR READING MY COMMENT AND YOU HAVN'T READ THIS BOOK YET... YOU WILL UNDERSTAND WHAT I AM TALKING ABOUT!!!!!!!!!!! You will feel insane that you didn't read it right when you clicked on it... like i do. From now on i will try to spot your stories more...... because i have experianced how good they are. AND REMEMBER KEEP WRITING!! Don't ever doubt yourself thinking, 'I am not good enough to write... why do i even try!?' And if you do think that... well look at all these comments! (That should change your mind!) keep writing! great story! Wish to see more! lolz!! :oj
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Amazeing story. I could relate to that. keep up the great work. <3
awesome book i loved it i liked how you started every page with remember when that story was amazing i added it to my reading list
awesome book i loved it i read it every day i liked how u started every page with remember when that book was just amazing if u have any othersi will read them and add them to my reading list and comment on them i bet they r amazing like this one ur stories r so much better at my stories this is the best story i ever read p.s best book on the planet :)
i love the pictures it just goes so good with the words :)
EmersonG hearted this
it's so sweet!
luna5000 hearted this
So sweet and a wonderful positive message. Nicely done!
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Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
voodoodollz hearted this
this is my favorite book! it is just so cute but so real at the same time.
PEACE LOVE HAPPINESS : )
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underthesky hearted this
really great book....This person had reminded me of who i am and when in was little my parents taught me things that i didn't know what to do.
yang159 hearted this
it is a wonderful no changes are needed
i love the book.
pvanevera hearted this
great book. i loved it <3
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figment68 hearted this
Wonderful story. Our children grow up so fast.
This book is absolutely shocking! I know some people just say "I love this book. " , but I want to express it.
When I read every word, my heart was regretting of what the bad things that I have reacted to. My attidue was always negative, " Oh, I can't do this! ". Whenever I cannot do something, I give up very easily. Although I cannot remember my early days, it made me picture how happy I was and I am ashamed, for I am somewhat a lucky girl and I'm taking everything for granted.
Someday, I want to be a great author like you. Have the potential to claim my dreams and to believe in myself.
Thanks for writing this story.
asiangirl hearted this
u are awesome at writing something about the young time
guess ur students will love it soo much
svetam hearted this
Its so sweet and well thought through, the words are so wise and generous , I'm going to read this to my younger sister. She'll love the pictures, HA HA HA=)
luv this!!!!! has me remember when I was a kid!!!
I loved your book. That is so true through the hard times we should just remember when we did all those great things. to get to where we are now.
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Roxxie hearted this
This is the best book i've EVER read on Story bird, period.
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SO Cute made me cry a little bit. :)
This is such a story about life...I had tears at the end! Love, Love, Love!
i could read that loads i loved it
This such and amazing story, so much so that this is the second or third time ive read it! Everytime I read it, new feelings and emotions fill me. I'm stuck for words to express how much I love this book! I tottally agree with brennankarren's coment! You should totally publish it for real. You've probebly heard it millions of times before, but I would like to tell u this: this story is great!!!
Your students are so lucky to have a teacher like you!
mbuettin hearted this
That was a great story, you have a talent.
realy good my name is grace my named me scrawny
Fantastic story! Strong message and great pacing!
lollypop12 hearted this
Fanamagreat story! (fanamagreat is great, fantastic, and amazing combined!)
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