Comments (16) | Hearts (3)

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  mahikahayley17 says:
  Lots and lots of hi's!!!
  But it is still quite interesting!!!
  Awesome pictures too!!!

  Posted 24 months ago (Permalink)
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  sonali117 says:
  WOW!!!!!!!
  NICE!!!!!!
  COOL!!!!!!
  NICE PICS!!!!!!!!
  
  took me a LONG time to read it but it is still awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

  Posted 23 months ago (Permalink)
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  sonali117 says:
  Maybe you could edit it and make a Bye at the end and maybe explain more about the character that say hi!!!!!!!!

  Posted 23 months ago (Permalink)
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  awesome says:
  HMM VERY INTERESTING HMM PAGE 7 HI MMHMM PAGE 8 HI MMHMM PAGE 89 HI INTERESTING YES YES

  Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  awesome says:
  WOW

  Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  hearted 21 months ago
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  awesome says:
  NICE STORY!!!

  Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  fudgeaberry hearted this

  hearted 12 months ago
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  fudgeaberry says:
  I agree with sonali117. I think you should have changed that. Just a suggestion

  Posted 12 months ago (Permalink)
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  Bubblecat3181 says:
  Also... I also think that you should edit it and do "BYE" at the end... Also just a suggestion :)

  Posted 11 months ago (Permalink)
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  Bubblecat3181 says:
  Great work though.... I bet it took you a long time to make that story... Does anyone know how many pages we are allowed to create in a story? <3 (That's a heart!)

  Posted 11 months ago (Permalink)
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  AwesomePink15 says:
  Hi lol

  Posted 10 months ago (Permalink)
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  aycro says:
  Your story is like the biggest story I read!!!!

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  4ga6 says:
  your story is 89 words long

  Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
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  4ga6 says:
  :) :) :) :) :) :)

  Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
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  4ga6 says:
  those are smiley faces

  Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
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  Dryboneshead says:
  nice work gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

  Posted 5 months ago (Permalink)
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  febbo hearted this

  hearted 3 weeks ago
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  febbo says:
  very long but i got a story bird [witch is called storyird] witch is longer then this

  Posted 3 weeks ago (Permalink)

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