Comments (9)

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  olivia101 says:
  cool but you need to fix up some of the spelling

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  miczoey says:
  thanks for the comment i will make sure to fix it.

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  jasminevillegasbiggestfan says:
  it's a good thing he finally found a job that fits him

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  Forevergirl says:
  When he said "Wait I need to be a female zombie!!!" Did you mean " Wait I need to be a female zombie?!!! ?

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  miczoey says:
  yes i forgot the question marks. thanx for the comment i will fix that to

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  KStar says:
  he needed to look like a girl zombie (but he was already 1) so I think you should change "he" to "she"
  BTW (by the way) loved it
  
  KStar

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  KStar says:
  what i was talking about was on the last page HE had to look like a girl but was already one.
  
  so there was never a He.
  
  KStar

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  miczoey says:
  actually just because the bunnie was pink it does not mean he was a girl HE was actually a HE.

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  marlene111 says:
  i loved it!

  Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)

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