Forgiveness
The follow up to a well known tale.
The entire story is just a conversation between two people, and may be somewhat difficult to follow. However, I've tried to make it as easy to read as I could.
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Published: Dec. 29, 2009
Updated: Dec. 29, 2009
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Ha! Love it.
I'd prefer line breaks for the dialogue though. That might make it less challenging.
"She did?"
"Yes, she did."
"My lord! Who would have thought?"
The French way of annotating it, with a dash and no quotations, makes it even easier.
-She did?
-Yes, she did.
-My lord! Who would have thought?
Not sure if it would change your page breaks and relationship between dialogue and image.
Yes, I considered the line breaks. Although, I admit that I didn't think of using dashes. My extensive use of quotation marks can get rather dizzying, can't it. However, I was hard pressed for space as it was, and I was unable to really space the lines out. I also thought of putting one character's dialogue all in caps, but that was just a tad too overwhelming. Plus, I needed caps to emphasize certain words.
Still, I'm glad that you enjoyed my take on the fairy tale. perhaps I'll do something similar with another one.
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How Wonderful Dear Ginger.
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that was pretty good ginger
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Very good! It was greatly interesting and detailed!!!
Please read my other book s too! I love reading yours, though :)