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  reabug11 says:
  Cool story. I like the "...well, nobody actually knows what knid of animal he is..." part! Please read some of my stories and comment!

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  mark says:
  Nicely done.

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  dndkjk says:
  Dylan, I think this is my favorite so far. I loved all the characters and their names. You did a great job. xoxoxo Malois

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  wirelesslibrarian says:
  Yaslow the Yak - great names and use of alliteration!

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  1566 says:
  I LOVE YOUR BOOK! =D YOU GET A LOT OF COMMENTS!

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  violet9321 says:
  wow this is the best story i've read so far.It is very interesting and very detailed.I hope you will get to read one of my books.Thanks =)

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  swp hearted this

  hearted 5 months ago

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