Freedom - a poem
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Published: May 27, 2010
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KaylaMsoutheygreen hearted this
A TRUE POEM ABOUT LIFE
You keep on touching my heart! :)
SpaerklyRaine hearted this
Thank you, Kayla and Spaerkly !
keegan1328 hearted this
this is awsome.
Beautiful images. Can't help but wonder if this narrator is the "cat" or the author herself. I'd put my money in the second option but am reminded of the existence of the (very convenient) lyricself! ;)
Thank you, keegan and malu! Well, the lyric self is an invention of the author, so they´re basically the same person only in two different roles, or positions. The cat is a reminder for the author of her own nature, or the nature she identifies with. :-)
simple and beautiful.
I LIKED IT IT WAS SIMPLE NICE I UNDERSTOOD IT AND I THOUGHT IT WA S FANTASTIC!!!!!:)
Nele hearted this
great poem! I really liked how you used the 'cat'!
Thank you, Nele!
love it. it describes me!
RedWolfDagger hearted this
The Animal Communicator (I dream of her every night)
I´m glad you liked it, RedWolfDagger!
luminiere hearted this
It was short, but beautiful. I think it really was. Freedom is such an important thing.