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  KaylaMsoutheygreen hearted this

  hearted 20 months ago
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  KaylaMsoutheygreen says:
  A TRUE POEM ABOUT LIFE

  Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
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  SpaerklyRaine says:
  You keep on touching my heart! :)

  Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
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  SpaerklyRaine hearted this

  hearted 20 months ago
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  Luciana says:
  Thank you, Kayla and Spaerkly !

  Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
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  keegan1328 hearted this

  hearted 20 months ago
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  keegan1328 says:
  this is awsome.
  

  Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
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  maluvargas says:
  Beautiful images. Can't help but wonder if this narrator is the "cat" or the author herself. I'd put my money in the second option but am reminded of the existence of the (very convenient) lyricself! ;)

  Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
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  Luciana says:
  Thank you, keegan and malu! Well, the lyric self is an invention of the author, so they´re basically the same person only in two different roles, or positions. The cat is a reminder for the author of her own nature, or the nature she identifies with. :-)

  Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
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  seachels says:
  simple and beautiful.

  Posted 16 months ago (Permalink)
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  druid says:
  I LIKED IT IT WAS SIMPLE NICE I UNDERSTOOD IT AND I THOUGHT IT WA S FANTASTIC!!!!!:)

  Posted 14 months ago (Permalink)
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  Nele hearted this

  hearted 2 months ago
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  Nele says:
  great poem! I really liked how you used the 'cat'!

  Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
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  Luciana says:
  Thank you, Nele!

  Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
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  RedWolfDagger says:
  love it. it describes me!

  Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
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  RedWolfDagger hearted this

  hearted 1 month ago
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  RedWolfDagger added a story response
  The Animal Communicator (I dream of her every night)

  A bear needs help in his burnt-down forest.

  Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
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  Luciana says:
  I´m glad you liked it, RedWolfDagger!

  Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
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  luminiere hearted this

  hearted 4 weeks ago
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  luminiere says:
  It was short, but beautiful. I think it really was. Freedom is such an important thing.

  Posted 4 weeks ago (Permalink)

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