Gloom, Doom, and a Plateful of Soggy Pancakes (A Two-Person Tag Game) Part 3

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  • Magarooney Just a reminder:
    Megan: A girl living in 2543 and trying to survive with her family.
    Owen: Megan's brother (I kind of named him that).
    Aporachi: Country Megan and Owen's family live in
    Foki City: Capital of Aporachi
    Hirudo: The family's old home
    What is happening: Megan has run away and is desperately trying to survive on her own while Owen and the rest of the family are very worried about her.

  • GreenHolly Hearted.

    • 7 months ago
  • GreenHolly Oh, so I get it now. So luminiere writes it in Owen's part of view and you're doing it in Megan's point of view. That's a great idea. Maybe she shouldn't have run away after all. I'm so excited to read luminiere's part, and then yours after, and then hers, and then yeah, so on.

  • fancy_dress Hearted.

    • 7 months ago
  • fancy_dress Amazing! Getting interesting... Can't wait for lumey's part! :)
    Thanks for the reminders, you totally made it easier!

  • writer_smurf Hearted.

    • 7 months ago
  • figment68 Hearted.

    • 7 months ago
  • figment68 Awesome Mags!!

  • mightyfighty2000 Hearted.

    • 7 months ago
  • mightyfighty2000 Nice one!
    It is a really good title by the way!

  • icefire29 A favourite tag game of mine. Great part, Magarooney!

  • luminiere Hearted.

    • 7 months ago
  • luminiere Uh oh... she's pretty smart, though, if I were here, I wouldn't survive a day. I like the name Owen... it suits him well. I guess I should start working on the next part then.:)

  • Pasqueflower Great part! I really love the way you write :)

  • Bitskoff Hearted.

    • 6 months ago
  • HannahL21 awesome!!!it WOULD be hard to survive in the wild, with no food!love it all-hannah

  • HannahL21 Hearted.

    • 6 months ago
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