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  TOM_DA_BUDJITO says:
  This story has great potential. But you may want to try to make it a bit longer and put some more adverbs in it! Overall this was a great story, I'd give it a 8 out of 10!

  Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
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  18bs says:
  I've got to agree with TOM_DA_BUDJITO, it's a really good story and yes it does have great potential. Keep making stories, you are great and NEVER SAY NEVER! (I'm obsessed with Justin Bieber)

  Posted 7 months ago (Permalink)

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