How do I write a story?
If you are suffering from writers block, this story bird is for you.
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Published: Oct. 8, 2010
Updated: Nov. 16, 2010
Total Pages: 21
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Awesome story bird, Mopoke, you have done it again!
NOTE: on page 12 you said MAKE instead of MAKES
Keep on writing Mopoke!!!
ScottScienceLab hearted this
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I will use your tips!
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Peace97531 hearted this
The best!
Very well written Mopoke!
I love reading your stories because of your creativity, your rhyming and how you make postive books that can help people. Your an excellent author and all your books should be brought to the real world! Good luck writing stories :^D
dtwilight hearted this
Again! another masterpiece! you're WAY better than me, (I'm only a kid). but i have written my own book, it's called "The Attack Of Hak-man! your work inspired me to write this book, and could you send me some tips on how to write a better action story?
-Freedom
(I hope you don't for get!)
Hi guys. Thanks for you comments.
ScottScienceLab- thanks for the editing- I have fixed the typo.
ecca hearted this
This is quite clever and another great addition to your growing library-of-fun. We may just use this as a primer for getting people started on Storybird ;)
mark hearted this
Well said. And true for a lot of us!
A very inspiring story or should i say a gift from you to me. =]
3degg hearted this
Thanks Mark! Very intriguing....I look forward to seeing what new things may develop at story bird.
SEA hearted this
good story
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good story
kadomada hearted this
Wow!! You're so good at writing!!
And it rhymes, too!!
10/10!!!
THX FOR HELP
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I love stories about authors. I am an author too (says Macy, age 6).
Meow01134 hearted this
This story inspires and makes you ponder before you see the last few pages, I mean... The rhymes just dance off the pages and the work you made into this...Great work.
This story is very inspiring
It's insperational. I like it. Nice work.
awesome storybird loved it!
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cool
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cool
nice storybird!!! peace, love, and write!
i love the rimes
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i might be the downer here but i didnt enjoy it at all
awesome!
this story is absolutely epic! very good job! it is so perfect and could help people to be inspired to write and have a good time. Keep writing stories and someday you could very possibly be a great and famous writer! could be children books or adult! who knows! but with an imagination and creativity like that you could go far!
U DID NOT LOOK DID U
GREAT STORY!!!!;]
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!1
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omg i loved it well done
good story
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You make the best books, Mopoke! I'd like it if you read mine.
mjc02 hearted this
THANKS FOR THE TIPS IM GOING TO BE A WRITER SOME DAY TO
WOW I HAVE HAD A HARD TIME WRITING BUT THANKS TO YOU IT IS SO EASY
LIVVY_LOU99 hearted this
Really like your story it has great art work
nicly done!! 10 out of 10!
lizgirl hearted this
I LOVE your storybird ! write more !
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kool story i love it:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
Great storybird, Mopoke! (And congrats on the feature, too.)
-Foggalator
cute
Hey Mopoke-
I loved your story. Wondering if you have published in other places... or are using this as a means to spread your story. I'm an author seeking ways to "spread my work" and think this is a great site.
I'm also a teacher and think this is a great place for my students to read and create work!
Any advice regarding the publishing angle?
Thanks!
a
love it
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wow what a touching story!
figment68 hearted this
lovely. very flowish
Hamsf hearted this
Sweet Job. I write stories in rythym too!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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YOUR BOOK HELPED ME SO MUCH!!! I REALLY WANT TO BE A WRITER AND I'D SUFFERED WRITERS BLOCK BEFORE I READ YOUR BOOK!
@runnerchica: Storybird is the only place where I have published my work. I wrote my first story on Storybird so I could learn how to use the site and then teach my children how to use Storybird to write their stories. In doing so I discovered that I really enjoy writing and I am very happy that my stories are encouraging others to give writing a try as well. All the best with your writing endeavours. Mopoke.
you are a beautifull writer
That was a great story,i loved how you just said to let the words flow i will be sure to use your advice!!!!.you are a kind of person that god made to write great story's keep on writing those story's.<3
pinkcutie hearted this
it is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good
Claraxxx hearted this
can you be a writer!!!!!!!
estrella19 hearted this
Awesomness
NICE STORY y don't you read my story Tiggar's life
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Lindsey15244 hearted this
You did a really good job!
Great Work! :)
Mads999 hearted this
I like it.
sitizul2001 hearted this
it's such a mature storybird. i luved it!!! :)
- Kiara
TeraFan hearted this
Awsome story. Love to read more!
click on me and look on my story
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Ajin1 hearted this
Awesome! A story well written and the poetry adds a nice touch!
coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool!
sams565 hearted this
What a cool story!!! I love the way you made it rhyme and how you made it so nice and neat!!! I hope you enjoyed writing it.
excellentwork hearted this
are u an adult?
melpomuse hearted this
OMG that was great said little Miss 7!
wow i love how you made it into how you do the rules of how to make your storybird
i love this story wayyyyyyy better than mine just saying.
I love this story it helps me alot to think of one!!1 hahahaaa...lol
federicaf hearted this
That was awesome and that was good rhyming. love, annie
That was awesome and that was good rhyming. love, annie
taylorcparkplace hearted this
I know lots of people said they liked it but i am diffirent i loved it!!!!!!!!
it was cool
mooooooooooooooooo
i know kiwifruit
likes it
Paris2468 hearted this
nice story
good story
snugabub hearted this
excellent you did it
omg what a good book
cri hearted this
I love the rythym, the ryhme and the flow. Very well written and enjoyable to read!!! LOVED IT. Brill tips for writing too!
Awesome tips! Very catchy tune :D
Cool! You have a lot of comments
I loved it...
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cool mopoke i love it
bigbeak hearted this
BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the short perfect story you can read easily and finish quick if there was a favourite button i would click that
Cute! This book my #1 book!
great book! mopoke is back, one of the best authors on storybird!
nice story!!!:)
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I love this!
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CarpeDiem hearted this
I LOVE it!!! it makes me think of every story I write and I will definetly use your tips! :)
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@charna15:Yes, Im a Mum and thanks to Storybird Ive just discovered that writing stories for my children and all of you is heaps of fun. We love reading everyone elses Storybirds too! Keep on writing. Mopoke.
nice
5_Alive hearted this
i love this book its got fabulous info on how to write a book
thanks jafamo3
I loved it! I also really like how you express your feelings to a sttory and how you can share them!
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=] <3 LOVED IT
awesome
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rawbone hearted this
that was the BBBEE-HHEEE-SSSTTTT story i have read yet!!!!!
epersons hearted this
nice story but it took me ages to read because i am a slow reader and your other storys are so awesome.
luna5000 hearted this
Wow! That sounds like me! LOVE it! Great illustration choices too.
Niiiiiiiiiice story.
keep up the great work.
I love the choice in wording and I really like how your story can inspire someone or help someone to have a motivation in writing. Even though it's not your typical beginning, middle, end it still has a strong thesis that flows through your whole story. Great work!
alix hearted this
Mopoke, are you a Brownies leader?
bigV hearted this
What a great story!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the way you write!!! can you help me out.... i'm stuck on a topic! lolz!!!! :oj
Purple12484 hearted this
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cool.
acthomas02 hearted this
Great! I love the tip about reading aloud -- it really works!
That is a wonderful story/poem!
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMEE a cool way to say AWESOME!See it.
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I want to say one more time THIS IS VERY VERY VERY AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this is #1!
mano111 hearted this
GUD
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goddardgirl1 hearted this
I read this again!!
I need to write a story for school, and your StoryBird has helped
Thank you!!
xxkadomada
your storybird was aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwssssssssssoooooooommmmmmmeeeeeeeeee another way for saying awsome :) lov it
AO5S hearted this
this is well cool it rocks and i love the way it rhyms but at the same time tells the story and even more gives advice it is brill keep writing u could become famous
Loved it well done
Bunny234 hearted this
It's just great where do you get the ideas?
It's a very good poem. :)
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Purple 12484: This storybird has some tips which might help you to indentify places where you can find inspiration for a topic. If you are inspired/choose you own topic, your ideas will flow more freely and you will find writing to be more enjoyable. Keep your eyes and ears open, inspiration for stories might just appear in front of you (eg that butterfly would be a perfect character for my story!) Good luck and most of all enjoy! Mopoke.
bigV: No, Im not a Brownies leader. Have fun reading and writing. Mopoke
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ONe of the best I've read.
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AWESOMEAWESOMEAWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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awww...
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cool! AMAZIN! LOL
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Your right ScottScienceLab
Thanks for the advice.
thecreator hearted this
VERY INTERESTING
thanks. i want to be a writer, like, a REAL writer, and ur words helped. Thanks again! :))
<3
Gabriella hearted this
You really know how to wright thanks for the tips
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susief hearted this
I'll read this to my class- I'm sure they'll love it just as much as I do.
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As far as I can tell your story was the hit of 2010! Hope you write another story.
love your story mopoke can you help me on storybird?
beed hearted this
YOU ARE SOOOOO GREAT AT WRITING BOOKS!
YOU ARE LIKE, MY IDOL OR SUMTHING......
shells2176 hearted this
i LOVE the story but i dont like ryming
LOVED IT
Awesome story mopoke
but some of the coments did not ryme
Wow! This is great!
luminiere hearted this
when you write in this book you sound like an adult...... anyway nice work LOL
THEY are some good books please read and remember comment!!
okay, thanks for the tips!
Great Story!:)
BrW30 hearted this
how do you make a story because I tried everything but I still cant make a story
im enyone ansering???
Write down any ideas that come to you and then write about those ideas, doing this will make more ideas come. Once you think you have finished get someone else to read over it. They will find any mistakes and places where it doesnt make sense. Repeat this process until you're done. P.S Dont forget to have fun doing it:)
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