How to: Survive Waiting to Open Presents in December

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  • Warriorcats110401 This.... is genius. I didn't think about it until now, but those all actually work! I love this! :D

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  • Mickey782 Please, if you read this, leave a comment. Let me know what you like about it, don't like about, a tip on writing or anything, really.

  • figment68 CP Hearted.

  • verityjade AWESOME!!!!!!!

    And PLZ LOOK AT MY STORYBIRD , THAT AFTERNOON!!!

  • Teddieisthebest Hearted.

  • Mickey782 verityjade, I looked at your story. Thanks everyone for all the nice comments!

  • Mickey782 P.S. If you liked this book, I am writing another today. It is called "How To: Write an Excellent StoryBird."

  • niki2i514 I liked this! But (here comes the constructive critism) It was hard to follow, At first it was all about the little christmas tree, then Sam(?) and it became hard to follow. Also, you kept getting off topic.


    Dont get me wrong, I love this book, but I think it helps when you give constructive critism to help the authors become better authors! You should try it! (constructive critism that is)

    Niki2i514

  • niki2i514 Hearted.

  • beatle Wowzers! nice story. LOL

  • Paris2468 I THINK THIS IS A GOOD STORY BIRD! I WANT TO READ YOUR NEW ONE YOUR DOING TODAY!!!

  • acthomas02 a realy good story

  • Mickey782 Thank you Niki2i514,so you think it should just be about the Christmas Tree? I like seeing multiple perspectives!

  • Mickey782 And also, niki2i514, I wrote a StoryBird called "How To: Write an Excellent Story." It is all about the Christmas tree, and I made it about an hour ago, before I read your comment. Weird, huh?

  • NatalieT4 Yello. Hi. Great story. But...AWESOME STORY!!! Mickey782, you are cool! How did you get your story on the front page? You rock!

  • emdelaney Awesome you are my IDOL!

  • Mickey782 Hello, commentators! Thanks for the comments! I don't know how I got it on the front page, because when it came on the front page, I had one comment written by a different person and only viewed by four people.

  • Mickey782 Paris2468, I published the "How To: Write an Excellent Story" today already, so you can just search for it in the StoryBird Search Bar.

  • Mickey782 Actually, search "books," "How to write a book," or my username in the search bar.

  • christa14 Hearted.

  • llamamamma love these tips they probably really work.I guess I'll have to wait until next year to use them because I opened all my presents today Christmas morning

  • llamamamma Hearted.

  • cullum6 WOW!!!!!
    i will really use those tips!!!
    thanks for putting them in your book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • cullum6 Hearted.

  • libraryfun4u I enjoyed the concept of the story book. Your book seemed a little amateur, but I'm sure mine would, too. I'll look forward to reading some more! Thanks for showing us your creative side.

  • alitcoolcat Hearted.

  • lazydaisy sooooooo good

  • soccer1290 great! =o)

  • ardumisa Awsome book!!!!!!!!!!!

  • mmohr256 cool


    8-)

  • greengirl01 Hearted.

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