How to: Survive Waiting to Open Presents in December
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Published: Dec. 23, 2010
Updated: Dec. 11, 2011
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figment68 hearted this
AWESOME!!!!!!!
And PLZ LOOK AT MY STORYBIRD , THAT AFTERNOON!!!
Teddieisthebest hearted this
verityjade, I looked at your story. Thanks everyone for all the nice comments!
P.S. If you liked this book, I am writing another today. It is called "How To: Write an Excellent StoryBird."
I liked this! But (here comes the constructive critism) It was hard to follow, At first it was all about the little christmas tree, then Sam(?) and it became hard to follow. Also, you kept getting off topic.
Dont get me wrong, I love this book, but I think it helps when you give constructive critism to help the authors become better authors! You should try it! (constructive critism that is)
Niki2i514
niki2i514 hearted this
Wowzers! nice story. LOL
I THINK THIS IS A GOOD STORY BIRD! I WANT TO READ YOUR NEW ONE YOUR DOING TODAY!!!
a realy good story
Thank you Niki2i514,so you think it should just be about the Christmas Tree? I like seeing multiple perspectives!
verityjade, could you please not advertise another StoryBird on my comments? Thanks.
And also, niki2i514, I wrote a StoryBird called "How To: Write an Excellent Story." It is all about the Christmas tree, and I made it about an hour ago, before I read your comment. Weird, huh?
Yello. Hi. Great story. But...AWESOME STORY!!! Mickey782, you are cool! How did you get your story on the front page? You rock!
Awesome you are my IDOL!
Hello, commentators! Thanks for the comments! I don't know how I got it on the front page, because when it came on the front page, I had one comment written by a different person and only viewed by four people.
Paris2468, I published the "How To: Write an Excellent Story" today already, so you can just search for it in the StoryBird Search Bar.
Actually, search "books," "How to write a book," or my username in the search bar.
christa14 hearted this
love these tips they probably really work.I guess I'll have to wait until next year to use them because I opened all my presents today Christmas morning
llamamamma hearted this
WOW!!!!!
i will really use those tips!!!
thanks for putting them in your book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cullum6 hearted this
I enjoyed the concept of the story book. Your book seemed a little amateur, but I'm sure mine would, too. I'll look forward to reading some more! Thanks for showing us your creative side.
alitcoolcat hearted this
wow great story i love it!OMG AND LOL!
sooooooo good
great! =o)
Awsome book!!!!!!!!!!!
cool
8-)
greengirl01 hearted this
Hehe! funny! for christmas i got tickets to lion king!
ace0508 hearted this
I really needed those TIPS
Hey awesome story. I really liked it. Check out some of my storybirds.
Nice story, Very amusing and funney!
Oisin01 hearted this
HAHA. VERY GOOD!! ;D
RN56R hearted this
oh, and if you're reading this, i'd like to know what your favorite present you got for christmas was. But remember: some people aren't as lucky as we are, so make sure to be thankful! You should thank your parents and family, too.
StoryWriter678 hearted this
These tips will definitely help me. I am definitely going to use tip 1.
That was such a good book! I loved it a lot :) I think u did a really good job with everything about it.!
I love your story. I think it was pretty funny and I liked how you used multiple characters, I would have done the same thing.
cool
Thanks everyone for the feedback! There are some mistakes I see but I won't fix them so it seems more natural. I hope this story becomes popular next christmas!
That's a great story. Thanks for the advice:)
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luminiere hearted this
Those were wonderful tips! I'll be sure to use them when my presents come! It's always so tempting to open them. Very creative idea, and I'm sure many others will use these tips as well.
Cassb hearted this
What a great concept for a story!! Tip 3 is especially important - I am always staring at my presents!!!
Cool!
Poppyawesome hearted this
Great tips! I'll try and use them this Christmas! :)
spray1can hearted this
great
Boyt3346 hearted this
Haha. This is so cute.
Ha ha ha love this storybird
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50562 hearted this
So cool!
great story i'm going to use those steps.
wldnathanh hearted this
I love this story.It's fantastic.I can't wait till christmas4
very funy book
I LOVED THIS STORY AND PLEASE READ MY BOOKS
Cute! It was a great idea and you used the pictures well. I'm not sure what you could improve about it. I'll comment again if I think of something. Otherwise it was a fun story that I am sure to be reading to my siblings.
Cool
nicework man i cant wait to see another story of yours!
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tatesorensen hearted this
that is awesome, dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its stilll aesome
Loved your story. Thank you.
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olol16 hearted this
Hey....nice story
Nice story! :) I can not wait till Christmas!!!
christina000 hearted this
Okay. I'm going to give you a TINY bit of critisisim. But critics can help authors.
Okay. First of all, there wasn't a lot of detail and it got a little bit dull. Then the story got off-topic. First it's about a tree...and then it switches gears and it's about Sam...you know what I mean.
Work hard and you can do it!
thx for the tips
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Joniell hearted this
I love it it is so awsome!!!!!!!!!
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grsmith hearted this
Great story! You are awesome! How could anyone give you criticism over THAT? You are my IDOL!! :D
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kdz1206 hearted this
LOVE IT
great!!!!i loved it!
your story is awesome im going to heart this and add this to my reading list i love it so much it is like the best story ever that ive never even read before yeahh
ShelbyG1 hearted this
Thank youuu.... so much. The day I posted this comment was December. It's not even Christmas Eve yet. It's just Monday, number 12. But now I can try remembering this..
..if I can't, just in case, I'm putting this Bird on my reading list. And hearting it.
^_^
From,
kittykat256
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cindilovesyou hearted this
Cute :)
knight29 hearted this
GOOOOODDDD!!!! funny!!! cooooll!!!
marrisasorensen hearted this
This inspired my story "Appreciate the Gifts" that I finished writing 1 minute ago (more like 45 sec.) Good job! I'll use these tricks. Hanukkah is in 8 days, and the presents are already out! I can hardly wait for the holidays!
tmomanyi333 hearted this
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Tese are some really good tips. I am a person who can't wait at all to open and rip open my chrissie prezies!
That is a really good book!
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Charlib hearted this
I love the book there's some excellent 100% tips in there for CHRISTMAS
Qui26 hearted this
love it!!!
akellybtw hearted this
kool story thanks for tip
It was cute when you said remember to eat your vegetables!
candyoo2 hearted this
cool story
damand hearted this
ha ha ha ha! lol! that was a dead good. especially th last bit: eat all ure vegetables! lol
lizziedoll10 hearted this
asers094 hearted this
awsome story who ever you are
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GOOD JOB
cakey hearted this
very funny. loved it :D
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I love it it is an adorable story...
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Farmgirl2 hearted this
Very cool plz read my stories becuase you are a great writter
P.S VERY CREATIVE!!
P.S.S MERRY CHRISTMAS
pinkkittycat hearted this
Cool! I like it! And I already know what i'm getting for Christmas! Bc I know where my parents hide the presents! But cute story!
AWESOME
Hamster11 hearted this
I tryed them all and they all work
I will say this again I see ways to make this story better but I want to keep it original. Second of all, oh my gosh how am I on the cover of Storybird? This is so cool!
I like the steps
i like it
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Lauren7128 hearted this
I wrote a new storybird called Christmas Rap if you want to read it.
waphooy hearted this
i loved it its from taylor
Very funny and cute! I will show this to the little ones, in case they are suffering from this. :)
nice it really worked out for my little sis/sister.she was shocked of the presents so i was looking for a tip book for her and i read this to her and she did some things it said in your book like play video games is u have to.
NicholasGib hearted this
linda332 hearted this
I think this is really creative and cute. I would have loved to see more tips, though!!
I Really Love This Story......
Great Tips and Wonderful pictues to go along with it....
Would you read my story and tell me what you think?
I know it would never be as good as your writings, but
I would like to know what a good writer thinks of my work....
My story is called "What Should I Be?" and "Moving Day"
omg! I luv the ending. Maybe u should add more specific words to it so it emphasizes that it's the perspective of the tree. But overall, AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
brendanren hearted this
YanelisC3 hearted this
THIS IS A REALY GOOD BOOK ARE YOU GOING TO MAKE A SEQUL
joshua11876 hearted this
Add your story responses I want to read them!
your book is awsome and it was good for me because I'm one of those people that want to sneak in a peak of my presents!
skye53 hearted this
ilove it and its so cool just want buy it "awh"lol omg brb
sure will help my not open my presents early
that was tottly awesome please write aother one
I love this story it makes me laugh!
Pi1998 hearted this
agrimesbtw hearted this
That is a really good story i needed the tips :):):):):):):):):)
nice story
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laraslater hearted this
i read this in class it is amazing
Turtwigalice hearted this
love this amazing
This book is cool and every useful..thanks for the tips!!:)x
kerkinh hearted this
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OMG this is sooooo helpful. luv it! :)
<3 thats soo cool cant wait until ur other book great i will use them tips.! ha :)
lauren205 hearted this
I like your story it is really good
hi i love love love this story
MekW hearted this
Love it and thanks for the advice
arutchasky hearted this
make a how to:survive the day before christmas
you now because kids like us always cant wait till the day of christmas so make a book to help kids learn what to do if its the day before christmas....tell them what to do so they don't get all exited about christmas
awesome story! love it(:
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Mittens8627 hearted this
awsome
I love your story!!!
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tricia99 hearted this
This is awesome.
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i thought this was a very cute story and i will be sure to follow your tips because just like everyone else, i am excited to open presents on christmas!!!!!!!:)
afazbtw hearted this
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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cbegoa hearted this
This is a awesome book
I dont want to eat my veggies
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105950 hearted this
Very good.
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ag1049 hearted this
awsome!
It really works
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meax hearted this
good advive
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rileyaig hearted this
good story
Katniss889 hearted this
I couldn't read the story, (my CP was going really slow) but it sounds awesome!
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GREAT JOB ^.^b!!! I love your books, keep it up!!! btw i sent you my favourite book i have written, ihave only 2 books currently, but id highly apriciate it if you look at them. thanks, GREAT JOB
-DreamsphereINC
Hey, Mickey. You know ... I would like for you to write one called, "How to Survive School Dances", or "How to Survive Love." THNX... please do so. I've been really down lately... XOXO
you know i tried that and i ended up opening everyones presentes this morming.
i'll follow yur directions
great story i really like some of yours check mine out i am gothic429
davidharris19 hearted this
emiliepvsrm0110 hearted this
this is awesome i might try it and see if it works
I like this story. MY mom banned me from her closet. That's where the presents are.
washington33 hearted this
Hopefuly, these steps will be usefull to my sister!
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shookde hearted this
awsome!!!
i love it,it's soooo cute!:)
Kayleenf hearted this
I thought that it was good, nothing wrong!
kionnao hearted this
awesome advice merry christmas!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):)
Shannon9 hearted this
i wish i could do that
I will try it!
Liamwwolf hearted this
Hilarious!!
Stevenbwolf hearted this
I love it!!!!!!
randim hearted this
Very Creative !
i tried it and it didnt work! thnks 4 nothing! haha jk :) nice job/book.
mustafa2f hearted this
RandyVu hearted this
this book is a little werid but u made enjoying by the beginig so i like it but in real life
I love this
Kai_Lego hearted this
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wallace5 hearted this
the tips are helpful! must try :)
I love it
I will do all of this!(Except for eating veggies.)
lioness22 hearted this
freysie hearted this
that is pretty gooooood.
this is really good! i'l use some of the tips!
ebatt hearted this
The long-awaited sequel is here! Read it to get new tips!
LOL PAGE 8
"BE A NINJA!!!!!!!!"
(Honestly, being a ninja solves EVERYTHING.)
I realllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly needed this advice!!!!!
livie9 hearted this
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charlotte21 hearted this
cute i like it
nice mickey
whoa! thats a lot of comments!
luv it!
CHR0002 hearted this
snowball123 hearted this
Hiya, I really enjoyed this story and I hope you keep making stories like this!
ReeceyB hearted this
PinkiePie hearted this
I love this story!soooooooooooooo coool!
keep up the good work
Love It!!!!
Great job!!!!
MeghanSTS hearted this
That book is helping me a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so cute i would never change a thing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
I LOVE YOU MICKEY!!!!
i really like your book Mickey782
THIS WILL REALLY HELP ME! THANKS!
yistom hearted this
braderz001 hearted this
mwolner hearted this
i reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly needed this advice!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bobsterguy hearted this
this really helped
Awesome story! I enjoyed!
niffy hearted this
Susanna4th hearted this
Ilov
Personally I think you should make it longer.
sarah4701 hearted this
The sequel everyone waited for is now here! Sorry I just realized for the past few days it was set to private!
I think this is awesome!
Mickey784,is it ok if i coped you?
Lisen,i am only 8.
slgouw hearted this
great story when i was 3 i opened half of my presents secretly and when we opened together there was 6 presents!
LOL so funny! I will use these tips on Christmas myself!
luv2dance12 hearted this
I loved this story...thought your ideas are awesome!!!Great
job,Hope you have a very Merry Christmas!
AshGood hearted this
Cutest story ever I like it and the tips are very effective. I LOVE IT!!!!!!
6licoricesticks hearted this
SBacher hearted this
very good i loved it cant wait to read more of you books
hey i love this story nice tips i cant keep my eye's off my present so nice tips i will try them and BYE THE WAY YOU HAVE A LOT OF COMMENTS I HOPE I GET THAT MUCH COMMENTS SOMEDAY
Cool story look at my srory called "mom" it was on the front page!!!
guineapigsrock hearted this
YOU DID GREAT ON THE BOOK
GreenHolly hearted this
Great tips! Those tips will help me not open my presents early. Even though I don't do that:D
lots of coments relley good advice
thewimpykid hearted this
Fantabulistic story!
kaitlynb7s hearted this
$ man!
This story is cute and simple, I love it!
Broadway11 hearted this
angel678 hearted this
hi mickey782! I read your book again, I loved it and I'll never get tired of it and just to let you know, your awsome and you make fantastic books!!! :):):):)
ety5 hearted this
this is a great book
thats great
kimakk hearted this
this is awsome
so awesome
Paris99 hearted this
Happy77s hearted this
oh i got an ipod and im doing this and im 6 years old
I love this storbird!!!!!!!!!!! Im gonna try these tips!
leroy35 hearted this
COOL!
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that is so cute! i add it to my reading list and hearted it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice Job I love this storybird.Oh and Merry Christmas t you too.
Oh sorry,by that t I mean to
kermitcarra0297 hearted this
NICE job that was awsome!
mm10 hearted this
It is kind of a wierd lesson on the back.Why eat your vegtables?
MarkunH hearted this
P.S. Hi!
kyleerwolf hearted this
it is so funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:);)
cren hearted this
Hey love the story i will also read your ne one and thanks for the tips i will be sure to follow all of them!!!!!!!!!!!1
PatriciaTHJ hearted this
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Tanis711 hearted this
Thanks for telling me those tips! Without them, I would've exploded!
Annette135 hearted this
it was short but great tips! I'm gonna use them
HAMLI hearted this
Wow so good!
Thanks the tips will really help
i think the book is AWESOME
DanyV hearted this
This is great advice! I really like the way you write these advice books. Mabye I`ll write one too.
Selma8yoc hearted this
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alexstathakis hearted this
Funny! I usually go in my Mom's closet cause the presents are always in there! Awesome story!
VEGTABLES REALLY VEGTABLES!I love this story.
Tab1 hearted this
COOOOOOOOOL
roflwafflejon561 hearted this
What a KOOL book
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19smipt hearted this
great story! i hearted it!
Klu891 hearted this
Livvy71800 hearted this
Awesome book! This will for sure help me survive with my tempting gifts!!!!!! :)
hi micky its me again and I need some advice, alright well I've just started publishing story birds and I want people to read them and give comments on them but latley no one has, do you recon you could give me some advice since you've got heeeeeeeeeeaps of people reading yours and giving comments?
thanks, angel678 :)
Haisaysme hearted this
CUTE!!!!
boneymalony hearted this
bookloverjoy hearted this
Hahaha!!! :) That was a really great story!! I enjoyed every word. :):D
I sort of copied your idea
hope its ok.....
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Primroseh hearted this
I am soooooooooooooooooo going to use these steps and geuss what I have a suprise preasent.
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AWESOME!
very fantastic
VL4D hearted this
Cakefacecheese hearted this
I love this story!
i hate veggies
arogers4 hearted this
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lillylavender hearted this
LOVE your advise i am going to try right now
ariasorensen hearted this
CUTE
thats an awesome story!!!!when i was littler i had that problem!!!!!1
katiejae4 hearted this
#1 #1 #1 #1 #1 #1!!!!!by the way you should check out nemrachtumeds storys thay are awesome too!
daniel1023 hearted this
cool
AWESOME
LOL
SurferChick227 hearted this
I love this story so much! Thanks, last year I got in trouble for opening some of my presents before it was Christmas, so this will help for this year. I love the pictures!
I love this. It is helping a lot. Thank you!
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Variety
I'm going to need to put this on my reading list. How am I going to survive opening my presents without it? Anyways I loved it. We could all do with more constructive criticism niki2i514.:-) I <3 this a million times. Thanks without this my presents may be open right now.:-) <3
booklover302 hearted this
great tips! :D
Nice story I`ll try your tips! It is almost Christmas grrr...time goes to slow.
AmandaFACS hearted this
Birch22 hearted this
Wow great work i really liked it!!!!!!
CTIGHE45 hearted this
Great story! How do you find such good ideas for your storybirds?
eisaman hearted this
i am so trying your tips
I love this. I showed it to my little sis and I think it will work. Note the fact that my sister is very hyper and excited for X-Mas.
Theawsomeness4 hearted this
presleycgirl hearted this
i love it i will defently read all your story birds
OMG!! I absolutly luv this story!!! 100% true about everything, after i submit this comment im gonna give all these things a go.. im so excited for christmas and I can't wait to open my presents but its annoying to wait so hopefully your story helps me alotttt thank you!!!! :) BTW Read my christmas story,, its awesome!! but yours is much better though... ;p
This is a great story and it will probably help me not to open my presents thank you
Romines21 hearted this
JQuim hearted this
nice
i love it
17ms hearted this
wow
I am going to use them
So cute!!
The beginning was a little shaky because it sounded too casual with your little side notes but I really loved the tips! Especially the ninja one :) I'd say this is definitely really cute! But not suitable for all ages, a child's story for sure :)
A great work, though!!
nice one how did you do it?
lara12 hearted this
nice!
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Gregorys hearted this
Awesome!But you should have added more some people:Don't like ninjas Don't Have videoGames etc,....
THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORYBIRD EVER IN THE WHOLE ENTIRE WORLD!!!!!!!!!
HeimZach1 hearted this
This is awesome!! The tips really helped me a lot. Especially the ninja one.....
lol i need this.
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Brittany12 hearted this
sorry,I already tried figuring out what my christmas presents are. maybe I shoulda started an account earlier and read this
kipper123 hearted this
mtimm hearted this
it is so funny lol.
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smp99 hearted this
love step 1!
i could use thease tips
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I like this.
chaas hearted this
verry good steps and merry Christmas.
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kaleyw hearted this
COOL BOOK I LOVED THE BIT BE A NINGA
Gabby324 hearted this
May21 hearted this
You know, Your a really good writer. It makes me want to write a story right now! Did you publish anymore books?
luv2read88 hearted this
zoo wee mama
This was a good book come and look at book: 'My life so far'
chill7fl hearted this
<3 it!!! awesome job
I really HATE veggies but other wise it was good... but you did get off topic a lot and it was kinda hard to understand, but at the same time it was very very funny:)
WOnderful I loved it sooo much! and very helpfull!!!
Mercy101 hearted this
LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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EVERY TIME I GET A PRESENT I WILL READ THIS AND TELL U MICKEY782 AND READ MINE AND PUT A COMMENT ON THEN??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
amy222 hearted this
Emanuel771 hearted this
that learn me a lesson
i like the illostations.
from puggy101
Hi love the book.
jazzmine37 hearted this
why legos
I GOT A PRESENT
BEST STORIE EVER and it really works, i read it on december the 8th and it DOES 100% works!
Meg12345 hearted this
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Haha, eat your begetables. Good book!
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LoLoBug21 hearted this
I think these steps might work. So i'm going to use those steps next christmas!
Andrew20000 hearted this
Great job!!!!!!!
hi,that is really good tips
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To whoever asked if they could copy me because they are only 8, plagurism is not legal no matter what age you are. Besides, I'm only eleven.
ebani123 hearted this
Amazing
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this is amazin dontcha think?
Please read my story,Ella The Elephant!
It is about an elephant who lives in the zoo but really,really wishes she could go live in the wild. She also reall,really wishes she couls see her best friend. Her best friend gets to live in the wild,no fair!
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AWESOME
This is a great book you should really read it.
i love christmas
nice
manni010 hearted this
morgan3l hearted this
It is a awsome storybird it is funny and entertaining i love it.
love it, read in a lifetime people
Well I stare down my presents every year, and I am a healthy freak I eat something healthy every day
bubblesoso hearted this
great tips
Krivkin hearted this
halwoo843 hearted this
Hi Mike I am in your class.I am Shelby.
ShelbyW12 hearted this
Joey111 hearted this
That was really funny if you can find the humor. I will use the tips.....
AND SO WILL MY SISTER!....AND OUR CAT HENRY!
P.S. Henry is crazy about presents! That is a 100% true fact! That gives me an idea! I will base my story off Henry's craziness for presents!
bubbas26 hearted this
awesome! ^^
NICE! I just might use those tips.
love it
95nicky hearted this
Ha Ha Ha Ha! Very hilorious!
LOVE IT
GeeCory6 hearted this
KenzieF8 hearted this
This is such a CUTE story!
rcrigler hearted this
If we don't foolow the steps i guess we have a awesome holiday if i am wrong then wow
AWESOME!!!!!!!! cant wait for an other one.
drago145 hearted this
cool
I love it!I will use these tips next Christmas.
fjohnson hearted this
storytrooper hearted this
wow so many coments. one of the ways i think is to sirvive chritmas without opening presents is to play LEGO until you can open them
Andrew1eh hearted this
or to be a cool nija is fun too
CClassen hearted this
awesome this rocks!!!!!
these tips will definetily help next christmas
LizPatton hearted this
cool i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bieberfever1701 hearted this
great story
birdlove11 hearted this
this was so cool
I like it I think I will use them next year
aboestc hearted this
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markck hearted this
Callie101x hearted this
found this funny
nicholas4h hearted this
that was very helpful edvise
OrangeSoda hearted this
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kjmeermans hearted this
I LOVE THIS BOOK AND THANK YOU FOR THE HELPFUL TIPS!!!!!!!!!!!
ctopp hearted this
elkhorn14 hearted this
i don't know if i will use these tips but still...
Love it!!!
oliviah2 hearted this
MY FAVOURITE THING WHAT I GOT FOR CHRISTMAS WAS A MOBILE PHONE HOW WONDERFUL IS THAT
Funner hearted this
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
REALLY HELPFUL!
1066743 hearted this
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i love it
boy that is a long list of poeple u have to go through to make a comment
You must be famous because it toke me an hour or so to get to the bottom of this list! :P
Zi luz itz!:P
km12345 hearted this
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lmfao0914 hearted this
cute
Daring10 hearted this
This story...great! Little short though. No offense.
Have a great year.
-D10
thank u so very merry much <3<3<3
TO MANY COMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But great story
I dont like veggies!
To many people like this!:)But anyways,nice work!Vsit me and leave a comment,thanks!
This book is cool ^-^
tiger21 hearted this
NICE
this story is AWSOME
Tubatuba hearted this
GREAT AWESOMENESS
cassi264 hearted this
Soph6B11 hearted this
i love this storry now i now how to not open my presents
so thank you so so much
BriannaSMCP hearted this
cool
it gets better ever time COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
I LOVE YOUR STORY I WILL TRY IT OUT.
gizmokitty hearted this
this is amazing i needed this advice and also page 8 be a ninja that is awesome and you are awesome for making his amazing book
poploo09 hearted this
Thats preatty cool
This is amzing nice word and art choice.
minty1234 hearted this
it works!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SkyeNoelle8 hearted this
Don't need the tip, just looked fun! mabye they will be useful!!! funny! keep writing! all who see this please look up these storys and heart them:the great king,are you a good pet owner quiz. you will find others too! good job!!!
Mickey782 you are an awesome storybird maker
Its an amazing book. I love it
arosenberry hearted this
LGetz3 hearted this
My sister needs this. lol
make more this s awesome!!
lyu5 hearted this
well its a book about tips
TO MANY COMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but good tips
i like how you use my best word that i like the most is lego
Speedbug hearted this
u got alot of comments and cute story now i know wat to do to not open my gifts early
markandkostis hearted this
Sanford1 hearted this
wow it really worked i acctually didn't open my presents until christmas day thanks please send me some tips on how to write such a great story please oh and please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lgittings hearted this
this book is so funny i love the intrduction it is so funny. thanks for the tips
niki5213n hearted this
jonaswags hearted this
dude u r so cool. i'd want to be friends. wait i do. your rad man (8
Your story is 100% good(8!
if u like cute storys then read "Friends"
I really liked your story.
awolsey hearted this
sidneys hearted this
this is one of the best story tips ever:love what you have wrote and your readers will love it.If you like creativity about science read "how the hot air balloon was invented! i love this story !!!
VERY FUNNY
i love it
really good hope to see more of your stories! i can read this over and over again
snakesceem hearted this
bradyn3l hearted this
nice story
I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT BUT NOT MORE THAN BIEBER
EzraLevin hearted this
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medorio2002 hearted this
nice tips will definitely use them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
amarjez hearted this
good book
donh19 hearted this
Awesome story great tips I got to remember those tips for this christmas
HollyKHome hearted this
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norwaybound658 hearted this
Great instructions!
rockergirl02 hearted this
faithhutt hearted this
wow so funny the ninja part is so funny
econstance18 hearted this
haha cool look at my storybord and comment and ill do same to your :)
seb200 hearted this
i lov it
Vidza hearted this
ha ha! i loved the part about eating veggies!
I let you know what I liked about it: EVERYTHING!
what i didn't like: NOTHING
a tip on writing: BE YOURSELF. don't try to imitate great authors like J.K Rowling or R.J Tolkien. Be yourself and I guarantee you'll reach your star. proved 100% (as i'm an author myself)
anything really: LOVED IT!
That is really really good advice thank you for writeing this book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
ascher7023 hearted this
Kay10watermelonfeet hearted this
Nice! think that will help me!
its pretty good i say
BlackOrca5 hearted this
thats is so cool i like it
tabithak1 hearted this
read my story called shush and cool book!!
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Awesome storybird!!
Do you have any tips on seeing Santa?
Ereader5 hearted this
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this book so much write anothewr one like this thanks1
i love your book sooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!1
ab0329 hearted this
if i don't eat my veggies, will you be sad?
:)
its so good! keep it up
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved but one thing......... Kids dont do step 4
just saying :>
alexisgarcia hearted this
I will take your advice!!! (:
This is actually really good
very creative
good job
abigail325 hearted this
Love the story I will take your advice!
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I love this storybird and think it has really helped me!!!!
LucyK hearted this
cute!
THIS WAS AN AWESOME STORY
winiarski hearted this
Wow, that might really help, but what about birthday presents?
it was really cool and i bet it will help me! love stella.
I LOVE YOR STORY
garden67 hearted this
What's with the end? Eat your vegetables? No thank you sir or mam
GOOD STORY
Banana83 hearted this
how cute
Hope55 hearted this
DaniCalifornia1999 hearted this
It was a really well written story with tips. I can't wait to read more!
mockingbird77 hearted this
cool!
6366 hearted this
Steven this story will really HELP me A LOT
BrownieB hearted this
wow i am going to use that
those tips helped me alot
ewitt26 hearted this
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I LUV THE PICS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I THINK I'LL NEED THAT ADVICE ALOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
deepfried_freak hearted this
Cute story!! I just might use that advice sometime in the future. (:
maggieemb hearted this
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Even though its not Christmas, great advice! My favorite one was BE A NINJA! :) You rock! (Even though I have no idea who you are!) :)
hahill hearted this
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I am the 421 comment and I love IT!!!
omg this so cute!= p
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Even though I read this and it's not Christmas THIS BOOK IS STILL CUTE!!!!!!!
cutechic519 hearted this
This is a really good book. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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it get better every time i read this really cool book
gooooooooooooooooooooooood story
i like it
ellieg56 hearted this
ashleyq104 hearted this
i like your story
Cute!
natalie38 hearted this
it was alright i kinda liked it.
I wished it would be longer
pasionel hearted this
dont forget to read mine!!! i like urs
haha funny
ClubCW hearted this
LOVE IT
0977966 hearted this
so funny!
this story bird inspired me a lot .
Carmen81107 hearted this
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batescook2 hearted this
YOU PUBLISHED THIS WHOLE BOOK?IT WAS AWESOME!
thank you for that tip book i will remember them for always now!
mercedeshird hearted this
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;P
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i heart it ! good tips . Ill keep them in mind this christmas
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Hey this is Caroline, Thank you for making this book to help me through Christmas! Usually I just ask my mom if I can open one ( really I open 2 or 3 and then no more)!!!
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dogpound19 hearted this
Um hi love you story
I liked your story.
funny