30227Love it! Such and great poem with brilliant rhymes. The pictures fit the story exactly and the refrain was placed perfectly. I'm adding this to my reading list! :)
smiley316Haha! What a great rhyming story! I love the repetitiveness- how each page normally ended with something about the House on the Hill. Great rhythm, too. This is definitely going in my reading list, and congratulations on getting storyspotted-this totally deserves it. :)
fancy_dressReally lovely story. Saw some really amazing rhyming and repetition inside. It had a really creative and unexpected ending. Nicely written, elspeth.
fancy_dressWow! You are incredibly an amazing author! You have two of your stories in the new & noted section. I feel so happy for you and you really should be! Congrats!
DrGiblet4 Great Story! This was added to my reading list!
zaylo23 How do you add this to reading list. I'm new
elspeth @zaylo23 just click the book icon at the bottom left.... PS Thank you for liking my story :))
DrGiblet4 Hearted.
30227 Hearted.
30227 Love it! Such and great poem with brilliant rhymes. The pictures fit the story exactly and the refrain was placed perfectly. I'm adding this to my reading list! :)
pepinito Another gold for you elspethmunro! Fantastic! Reading list! And good choice MrsRex!
mojoco11 Hearted.
mojoco11 What a superb-ulous story. Such an unexpected ending! I'd bet a million dollars that you'll win gold. Reading list!
pepinito Hearted.
smiley316 Hearted.
smiley316 Haha! What a great rhyming story! I love the repetitiveness- how each page normally ended with something about the House on the Hill. Great rhythm, too. This is definitely going in my reading list, and congratulations on getting storyspotted-this totally deserves it. :)
elspeth wow - a huge thank you to Mrs Rex and thank you everyone for the lovely heart-warming comments :))))
figment68 Hearted.
figment68 Wonderful story elspeth!! I love it.
Gwaci awesome i love this story:)))
fancy_dress Hearted.
fancy_dress Really lovely story. Saw some really amazing rhyming and repetition inside. It had a really creative and unexpected ending. Nicely written, elspeth.
autumn1 to long story but good
boyinkm Two New and Noted stories in one day? Amazing! And both were spectacular!
Nimby Good use of the illustrations to tell this amusing story. A job well done.
Nimby Hearted.
dogcrazy11 Hearted.
MrsRex Hearted.
MrsRex I loved this story! I'm glad I got to read it first and recommend it for "New and Noted." Keep it up! :)
juanpablodub Hearted.
juanpablodub perfect much?
this is just amazing, i love the musicality you have created, it's just addictive
Flower5745 WOW!
YOU'RE EXTREMELY W-O-N-D-E-R-F-U-L
:D
YOU AREE REALLY GOOD AT MAKING STORIES :)))))
LUV,
FLOWER :)
fancy_dress Wow! You are incredibly an amazing author! You have two of your stories in the new & noted section. I feel so happy for you and you really should be! Congrats!
kohinoor Hearted.