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  kendicott says:
  I'd like to set a date, to say I think it's great!

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  Betty says:
  Very clever. It ryhmes....that is not easy to do.

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  kaye says:
  Nice ending!

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  SHASHA says:
  You rhymed,that is hard!

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  Gymnast89 says:
  That was so good! I wish i could rhyme like that!!!!!!!!!!

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  ag4 says:
  Very, VERY, EXTREMELY, good. I like that even the little summary rhymed. That is what really caught my eye.

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  ag4 says:
  Oh yes, I forgot to ask...I know (at least I THINK i know) that you are an artist. Which one are you? (I have my hunches, but this has been tugging at me mind for a while.)

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  adam says:
  Do you mean me? I'm not an artist actually, I'm one of the developers here at Storybird. So, an art lover with no real artistic abilities of my own :).
  
  Glad you liked the story, thanks for the comments. The summary is my favorite part of this one too.

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  rockythegoldenpup says:
  I like to...
  Eat lots of food
  When I'm in a bad mood. :)

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  baconbaby511 says:
  Nice idea Rocky for a comment. Haha. Great story, Adam! ;D Really clever. I'm not very good at rhyming while telling stories. :P
  

  Posted 7 months ago (Permalink)
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  waphooy says:
  I like to read your books
  The illustrations you choose make it have even better looks! :)
  Awesome story! Nice desicion of the illustrations. It makes the story even better (which is really hard to do, because they're better than better they're awesome-er than awesome:)! You're also a very good poet:)

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  figment68 says:
  I like to read your stories! :)

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  luminiere says:
  I'd like to say that this was great! I like most of those things as well.

  Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
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  christina000 says:
  That has awesome rhyming!!!! :D :D :D

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