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  mark says:
  I would add "brilliant" to the tags. Lovely story, perfect rhyme, great tone.

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  missK says:
  Very sweet.

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  kaye says:
  Added to my reading list.

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  mark hearted this

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  ako says:
  Thanks for the hearts and comments!

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  lisong says:
  sweet...
  

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  jeano says:
  Very nice!

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  ele_202 says:
  this is brilliant, could you do more like this plz!
  check out my stories please( you just need to click on my name as u probably know)and also comment as i want to know what people think of them
  

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  Kaydad says:
  Good story. Really nice!

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  bakeericee says:
  This is fantastic, Ako! It's really nice without being to in-your-face nice. Very short, sweet and simple. Beautiful.

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