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  mark says:
  LOVE this. Great job Betty.

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  missK says:
  Your best yet. The penguin line was especially good.

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  kendicott says:
  I agree, I think this is the best one.

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  Natasha says:
  Love the story and the way the pictures fit in with the words so well

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  danielle114 says:
  loved it

  Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
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  oldersis says:
  Love it!! so cute!!

  Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
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  MissVikeFan says:
  So cute!!! great job, Betty!

  Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
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  Quasimime says:
  I love this story, Betty!

  Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  natbennett says:
  way to go betty keep writing stories u good at it

  Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  absurd_bird says:
  This is a really nice story. There are many good lessons in this story, including not smoking and other things to keep you healthy. You've done a great job. There were also many things in this story that made me laugh!

  Posted 24 months ago (Permalink)
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  Milli says:
  I loved this one.

  Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)

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