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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 1
  Development - 2
  Illustrations - 4
  Mechanics - 3
  
  Grade: 70
  I think your story is missing pages. You never explain why it was better not to know about the bunny and the fox. Without that, your story does not make any sense.

  Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)

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