Imagination Gone Wild!!!
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Published: Nov. 25, 2009
Total Pages: 17
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Cute!
Meaning - 1
Development - 3
Illustrations - 2
Mechanics - 4
Grade: 75
There were a lot of events in your story. I found it difficult to follow, and I don't think the question "Is it better not to know" was clearly addressed. I'm wondering if it would be beneficial to cut out some of the pages and rework the story to make it easier to follow.
I DONT HATE IT I LOVE IT BUT JMIKULSKI IS RIGHT