Comments (3)

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  mark says:
  Cute!

  Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 1
  Development - 3
  Illustrations - 2
  Mechanics - 4
  
  Grade: 75
  There were a lot of events in your story. I found it difficult to follow, and I don't think the question "Is it better not to know" was clearly addressed. I'm wondering if it would be beneficial to cut out some of the pages and rework the story to make it easier to follow.

  Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
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  kaitybugg11 says:
  I DONT HATE IT I LOVE IT BUT JMIKULSKI IS RIGHT

  Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)

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