Into the Unknown: The Adventures of Alastair.
Alastair's dog Scruff goes missing. By himself, he takes a step into the unknown! Will Alastair and Scruff be reunited?
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Published: March 27, 2011
Updated: Aug. 12, 2011
Total Pages: 14
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figment68 hearted this
Cute story!
Treiblmayr hearted this
Nice :)
fshnmath hearted this
Try to reduce the length of the text on each page to be more effective
Thank you, to all who commented! This was an example of writing for my year 7 (age 11) English group; identifying good and bad points in story writing. They enjoyed it, so I posted it! First time user.
Comments taken, and will look to improve with the next storybird!
A few changes have been made. Hopefully, for the best!
um it would improve if it was not so long i will heart it though.
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i <3 your story its so cute and well writen :)
this is cool miss but really strange
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DawnH1 hearted this
This is cool miss but it was a bit long. I really liked it though. :) I hearted it
good
katelyn18 hearted this
I like this book. Also I like the name Alastair. :)
Thats awsome!!!
It's a pretty cool story. Nice job. I really like the teddy bear. I hope you write more stories like this one. :-)
so cute! : )
THAT IS JUST FANTASTIC!!
d18fry hearted this
I love this book fantastic please write more !!!
Hopelovepeace hearted this
great! you should write more Alastair books!
JasonL hearted this
AWESOME JOB FANTABULOUSO ABSOLOUTELY LOVED IT!!!!!
bookloverjoy hearted this
WOW THAT WAS AWESOME! I DEFINITELY AGREE WITH SMILEY316!
deepfried_freak hearted this
Very good! I just realized that I read this series backward. Oops! This was cute, and good for elementry children!
loveyourlips hearted this
Good job!
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Cassb hearted this
Wonderful story!!!
smd_leahr hearted this
Great story! and my opinion, your story was perfect. I've looked at some of your comments and saw that some of them are negetive and i just wanted to say those people are wrong because i love this story!
@walktwomoons: Thank you very much. The series continues if you are interested, the next is Lost and Found: The Adventures of Alastair. Enjoy.
COX0008 hearted this
that was a lovely story it was so amazing it was fantastic i like it i just like to read it again and again it is such a beautiful story. you did a fantastic job at writing it and great pictures you have chosen. it was the most perfect story i have every read. great job.
BA2011 hearted this
love it it was cool
lily5899 hearted this
It's okay but I've kind of been reminded of Alice in Wonderland...
Awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeee good adjectives... I wish i could right like that..... sigh....ㅋㅋㅋㅋ ㅡㅁㅡ sigh, mannnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!
armlessmeat hearted this
I love your story!
JeanWork hearted this
Wow! Please read my stores some are written by a 6 year old but alot by me please read! If any request of stories just for you, comment on any of my stories :]
Thank you everyone for such positive comments. Much appreciated.
@Journey: Yeah I never though of that before, I suppose it is similar in some ways. That was not intentional. In reality we always have to question what is an original story, as people have been writing for years. There are bound to be similarities at times.
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Eleni27358 hearted this
Very well written and fantastic story line!
fantastice story
love it
mspv hearted this
Sorry frohr, you don't seem to have any storybirds to share publically. I did try. TAS
wait-it's over? ALREADY? WHAAA! really good! hearted!
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Michelle5M hearted this
That was a cute story i loved it. :)
nice i liked it
brawnash hearted this
2 words GREAT JOB!
how do you get such good ideas? please read my stories 2!
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SICK
kyby2 hearted this
i hope u did well in your english group
That is the best story bird ive seen ever
malou hearted this
AAAWWWWEEEESSSSOOOOMMMMEEE!!!!I LOVED IT YOU SHOULD MAKE IT A BOOK!!!
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So kool i love
Nice writing.
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WOW! Thank you for the responses very one. I will endevour to read as many of your stories as I can - work permitting! TAS
Nolly1 hearted this
I LOVE THIS BOOK THEY ARE BETTER THAN MINE. YOU SHOULD READ THEM THEY HAVE DEDICATION.
Wow! one of the best books i read. Could you possibly read one of my books called " Top 10 Music Countdown in Storybird " and comment Thx
That was a nice story! I really enjoyed reading it.
MKU10 hearted this
i like book
I like your imagination.It was really great. Keep it up!
i love and totally ador your book
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Good
ccraig hearted this
it was a good
i loved the fanticy world. I would love to live there!
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wow love it
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i <3 this
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Great story! :)
CTam hearted this
I liked it alot! you were awesome!
saba1234 hearted this
nice
real awesome
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ag44 hearted this
what a great story
what an awesome story just because you are not the author of the week keep on creating your stories there so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!
smallchip hearted this
Wow i love it so countinue to make stories like this.