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Jerry Isn’t Scary Jerry No Es Espantoso

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  • ChrisWashington one thing i really like about this is that the book sounds realistic
    one way to make this stronger could be nothing really

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  • DustinWashington1 This is on FIRE.

  • CourtneyWashington Real good story, nice rhymes.

  • ChrisWashington Super slick, like a Ninja.

  • ChrisWashington Wonderful Story

  • DustinWashington1 The one thing that i like about this story is how the monster was sad or scared. The one thing that would make it stonger is if he had a friend at the end. :)

  • RachelWashington This is dazzling.

  • RachelWashington One thing i really liked about your story is that you made it so a kid could really understand and get into it. you did an amazing job

  • stephenwashington This is on FIRE.

  • KamaniWashington Da bomb.

  • stephenwashington One think I really like about this is his story flows almost seamlessly from page to page, that is the talent of a real writer to have a story flow like that. Also I liked the story itself it was nice and short of course.

  • KamaniWashington One thing I really like about this story is the fact it's heart warming. Although, One way to make this stronger could be making it 1-4-year-old friendly... Other than that, great story...

  • DeoniqueWashington One thing I really like about this is... How the story rhymes so well.

    One way to make this stronger could be... use different pictures. Overall, I liked the pictures.

    Did you ever think about... nothing really, I like it.

  • MonicaWashington Cute as a bug.

  • ChrisWashington one thing i really like about this is that the book sounds realistic
    one way to make this stronger could be nothing really

  • kaylawashington3 One thing I really liked about this is that it rhymed and made me feel happy in the end. You have really good talent.

  • MichaelaWashington Grinning like a smiley face.

  • CoryWashington the one thing i like about your book is everything

  • kaylawashington3 Da bomb.

  • MichaelaWashington This is a really nice story! The topic is captivating and will easily catch the attention of young kids

  • keanuwashington One thing I really liked about the story is that it rhymes.

  • CourtneyWashington Grinning like a smiley face.

  • CourtneyWashington One thing I really like about this story is the ryhmes.

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