Journey to the Centre of the Mind, Pt. 3
Weathackhob takes the entire world by storm and the only people that can save the world from Weathackhob's evil forces is Tim and Tina!
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Published: Oct. 5, 2009
Updated: Dec. 25, 2009
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this is the best part of the three parts
you should type several other less
complicated and shorter stories about
the other evil deeds weathackhob or another
morthadoodle has done. Probaly you should do another
morthadoodle because weathackhob has weath in it like in weather
What a great suggestion! I would like to do other short stories about Weathackhob as well as other Morphadoodles!
P.S. Looking forward to reading some of your stuff in the future!
Thanks for taking the time to comment on a story from a hard-working 10-year-old like me!
thanks
maybe you could also do a part 4 which explains why the book is called Journey to the centre of the mind
P.S. centre is spelled center
I live in Canada which uses British English, so in Canada, the word "center" is spelled "centre".
are you working with some one else? I showed your stories to my mom because this is so good and she said that it sounds as if a grown-up was giving a couple of ideas
Do you want to help with my story?
I am working in an independent school program where I get to spend a lot more time practicing my creative writing than most kids do. I also write lyrics to songs for singers that I invented, and I also write imaginary track listings for the music albums that these singers released. So, this story, as another one of my creative writing projects, was written on my very own, without the aid of anyone else.
And yes gabriello, I indeed want to help you with your story because I love writing. It's cool that you can collaborate with other story writers on Storybird.
I love your other story. were you referring to tim and tinas dog
when you collaborate you need to have the persons email and real name ,I dout your real name is thegnome
gabriello hearted this
I have to figure out how to do the collaborator invite... don't know how to do it if kids aren't supposed to give out their personal info. Maybe one of the admin here can explain how to collaborate with new friends.
P.S. I'm glad you like the rhyme! And yes, I was referring to Tim and Tina's dog.
How are you doing? I love your other story
I love all three parts of journey to the centre of the mind. pretty cool!
love it but one thing im not sure if this is on purpose or not but you keep on spelling center "centre"
Gnome - well done for spelling "centre" as centre. You might want to include "favourite", "colour" ,"analyse"and "theatre" to demo that both variants, American and British are cool. Peace:)
u forgot a comma! apart from that gr8