casd73aGood stroy but there was few spelling errors one was mean you said mien and its really spelled mean otherwise amazing stroy and good amount of content! good job and please read my new book " girl with the gift " thanks! (: p.s its also great you get so pulled i nto books like that! I do too!
gaussamanice! few spelling mistakes, but its ok! i do that to! sometimes. but mien=mean=agen=again=gist=???=charter=character=quit=quite. oh well that's okay!!! see ya!
p14hjam Hearted.
p14hjam Great story! It'll look even better if you use capital letters better, though! This book sounds AWESOME!!! Is it a real book?
772781 Hearted.
RoCkOuT99 Hearted.
RoCkOuT99 Oh gosh! I love this ..! It was so cute! You have a got some real skill, gurl! Awesome story! (:
casd73a Good stroy but there was few spelling errors one was mean you said mien and its really spelled mean otherwise amazing stroy and good amount of content! good job and please read my new book " girl with the gift " thanks! (: p.s its also great you get so pulled i nto books like that! I do too!
casd73a Hearted.
EJLN00279 LOved it girl!!!!!!
ntjahyadi23 Hearted.
mightyfighty2000 Hearted.
mightyfighty2000 LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
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cutepanda101 Hearted.
ntjahyadi23 Is this real? Did you really fall in the book? I really like it (:
caseymae those wow your story is awsome
caseymae Hearted.
gaussama nice! few spelling mistakes, but its ok! i do that to! sometimes.
but mien=mean=agen=again=gist=???=charter=character=quit=quite.
oh well that's okay!!! see ya!
gaussama Hearted.
Wagner2 Hearted.
figment68 Hearted.
sjsid Hearted.
sjsid LOVED
sagalstar COOL BOOK I WISH I COULD FELL IN TO THE BOOK TO HAHA :))
sydbean i loved the book great job
delaneyc1 Hearted.
stylegirl cool what a great story and great pictures and you are verry good writer and and great job HAHAHAH =) PLEASE READ MY BOOKS THANK YOU
stylegirl Hearted.
lovelyrihanna that was really nice story to read
hart89 a few spelling errors but i liked it!!!!!!!!!!!
cscenini Hearted.
5aalihah4hmad wow nice book good job and nice ideas about falling into the book!