Leaving My Soul Behind
Jae leaves her hometown behind and must learn to fit in a new city.
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Published: July 20, 2010
Updated: Aug. 6, 2011
Total Pages: 15
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Journey, Your story really touched me. You have written about powerful emotions and helped me feel some of what Jae must have been experiencing. I hope to read more of your writings!
PEM
Cassb hearted this
What a beautiful and touching story. So full of emotion with such a positive ending. Well done!
figment68 hearted this
Wonderful and touching story!! I felt her pain. I'm glad she realized she could be happy in her new home.
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Thanks for hearting this, guys!
I've moved seven times, so I know how Jae feels. Its like starting over- again and again and agian.
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Journey,
First of all, that story is now in my reading list. Brilliantly amazingful job and congratulations on getting under new and noted!!!
Second, is your name like the band or an actual journey somewhere? Just wondering.
~bookloverjoy
I love it Journey! I know how it feels to move... though my experience wasn't as devastating.I hope she finds her soul. I expect that she will.
luminiere hearted this
Wow! Thats like exactly how i felt when I moved, Thanks for writing this as sort of like a guide to getting through it. I have to be honest...in some big books like this I pass though some pages but I had to read each page of this book!!! Awesome fabulous book!
zarour1 hearted this
lovely touching and true story!!!!
Wow! That story is amazing!!!!!!!! One of my favorites! Keep it up, Journey!
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Wowza! What a fab story! Great job! I like how many people can relate to your story. I sure could! xD
Happy writing!
~FriedChicken
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Man, I love cheesecake - next to all the other amazing foods. :P Wondrous, stellar, superb, brilliant, suspenseful, and full of emotion story! When I finished it I found myself smiling, and smiling, and smiling. I loved the story! Great job, Journey. Well that was certainly a "journey" for Jae, huh. I mean she's leaving her other home and going out into the big city. You described how she felt extremely well! Congratzz on getting on New & Noted. :D Fantastic!!!
Thanks!! All of these comments literally popped up overnight...wow! Thanks for reading, guys!! :)
~ Journey
xD No problemo.
:)
Almalind hearted this
;) I read it again. Sheesh, it's that good.
Lilgirl hearted this
Journey!!! You are an amazing wrighter! I am very happy i got to read this you better make more -.-
i felt like crying it touched me and it gives me warmth inside ;D
I agree with Lilgirl: You are an amazing writer. :) I'll TRY not to be jealous... xD
Awwwwwwwww I've been given so many awesome comments. :) I'm going to cry! 17 comments and 14 hearts and 124 views...you guys are amazing...
*Tear* ~Journey
You deserve it, Journey. I think you'd like my friend - she's obsessed with wolves! :) Her username is Mjsay2. Maybe you'd check out her story?
Wow great job!!
WOW so touching... I can't get over the feeling of losing something...SOON REALLY SOON.... ANYWAY another prooooo book from u
gabbysegond hearted this
sad but loving inspiring and I want more