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figment68 Hearted.
figment68 Great job. Very nice story and rhyming.
insomnamama Thank you! I make up silly rhymes at home all the time but this is the first time I've put digital pen to paper and I was very nervous. :)
Ladybug2010 Hearted.
Ladybug2010 That was so nice, I really enjoyed it! :O)
Vans24 Hearted.
sofiya05 Hearted.
llamamamma Hearted.
sillybird Hearted.
luna5000 I love this. Natural language, great page turns, and ending is a nice touch.
luna5000 Hearted.
insomnamama Thank you for the hearts and comments, folks!
S611870 was really great it some times rhrymed
vocejulie Hearted.
vocejulie OMG! Too cute!! Too precious! And Soooo you!!
stitchgirl Great story
stitchgirl Hearted.
FogCat So fun and sweet. You've got the rhyme-n-rhythm down so nicely too. Bravo!-Foggie
jnewkirk Very cute and good job with the rhythm and rhyme!
Mozzie Hearted.
Mozzie That was the best storybird i have read!!!!!!
jenw2012 Hearted.
jenw2012 This was amazing and has great little rhymes =)
kv2000 I liked how it rhymedyou are so clever
Goldensoprano I read this to my daughter and she asked for "more mommy...MORE!"
valremarshleen Hearted.
pottergurl Hearted.
fionas88888 Hearted.
fionas88888 No need to be nervous! This is not silly at all. It takes me a long time (seriously!!!) to make up good rhymes like that one.
cupcakexx aww i love this story have you got a little boy of your own
insomnamama
This is the story of an adventurous boy named Max and all the places his mama imagines he might explore on his day out.
figment68 Hearted.
figment68 Great job. Very nice story and rhyming.
insomnamama Thank you! I make up silly rhymes at home all the time but this is the first time I've put digital pen to paper and I was very nervous. :)
Ladybug2010 Hearted.
Ladybug2010 That was so nice, I really enjoyed it! :O)
Vans24 Hearted.
sofiya05 Hearted.
llamamamma Hearted.
sillybird Hearted.
luna5000 I love this. Natural language, great page turns, and ending is a nice touch.
luna5000 Hearted.
insomnamama Thank you for the hearts and comments, folks!
S611870 was really great it some times rhrymed
vocejulie Hearted.
vocejulie OMG! Too cute!! Too precious! And Soooo you!!
stitchgirl Great story
stitchgirl Hearted.
FogCat So fun and sweet. You've got the rhyme-n-rhythm down so nicely too. Bravo!
-Foggie
jnewkirk Very cute and good job with the rhythm and rhyme!
Mozzie Hearted.
Mozzie That was the best storybird i have read!!!!!!
jenw2012 Hearted.
jenw2012 This was amazing and has great little rhymes =)
kv2000 I liked how it rhymed
you are so clever
Goldensoprano I read this to my daughter and she asked for "more mommy...MORE!"
valremarshleen Hearted.
pottergurl Hearted.
fionas88888 Hearted.
fionas88888 No need to be nervous! This is not silly at all. It takes me a long time (seriously!!!) to make up good rhymes like that one.
cupcakexx aww i love this story have you got a little boy of your own