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Great job. Very nice story and rhyming.
Thank you! I make up silly rhymes at home all the time but this is the first time I've put digital pen to paper and I was very nervous. :)
That was so nice, I really enjoyed it! :O)
I love this. Natural language, great page turns, and ending is a nice touch.
Thank you for the hearts and comments, folks!
was really great it some times rhrymed
OMG! Too cute!! Too precious! And Soooo you!!
So fun and sweet. You've got the rhyme-n-rhythm down so nicely too. Bravo!-Foggie
Very cute and good job with the rhythm and rhyme!
That was the best storybird i have read!!!!!!
This was amazing and has great little rhymes =)
I liked how it rhymedyou are so clever
I read this to my daughter and she asked for "more mommy...MORE!"
No need to be nervous! This is not silly at all. It takes me a long time (seriously!!!) to make up good rhymes like that one.
aww i love this story have you got a little boy of your own
This is the story of an adventurous boy named Max and all the places his mama imagines he might explore on his day out.