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  kaye says:
  Excellent! Just excellent.

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  mark says:
  Ditto what Kaye said.

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  laurenh3 says:
  i can SO relate! though, it might need some spelling checks......

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  Herdis08 says:
  laurenh3 hi,
  
  She is different remember! Perhaps therefore she makes spelling mistakes.I guess it is tricky for 10-12 years old kids as readers since they may need an explanation but otherwise the spelling mistakes fit very well. One can perhaps write those words in such a way that communicates the intention.

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  aliciav4 says:
  i'm so like that. and love it.

  Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
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  19cnaesby says:
  Love it!
  Ps.
  try to read one of my storys,
  one is caled Rosie the girl and one is caled the woman who told storys.

  Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
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  leesha77 says:
  Very cute- love the ending and the rhymes.

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  balloonfire says:
  yes...

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  connorB says:
  it was ok a LITTLE SCARY but GOOD

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  deijalc127 says:
  that was a really cute story! I love it
  

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  Whitewaters says:
  A very cute story. I love it!!!! It just has some grammatical mistakes.

  Posted 24 months ago (Permalink)
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