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  SarahV says:
  Look, I know it's a bit sad, ok, but it's my story and I don't care. say what you like, it won't change my view.

  Posted 17 months ago (Permalink)
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  bubblesM says:
  Ummm,it was soo sad but it was a cute story! please check out my stories!

  Posted 17 months ago (Permalink)
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  bubblesM says:
  You know this story is really nice. maybe it actually happened...

  Posted 17 months ago (Permalink)
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  FogCat says:
  Hey SarahV,
  
  This is a nice storybird even though it's sad. Life can be hard sometimes. I like the narrative voice that you developed in the story.
  
  -foggie

  Posted 16 months ago (Permalink)
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  SarahV says:
  :-) Thanks Foggie!

  Posted 16 months ago (Permalink)
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  ssanc45 says:
  so said life can be hard like how foggie said

  Posted 12 months ago (Permalink)
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  gilliapril21 says:
  is this all true i am not trying to be mean but still i think it is a liitle mean to have someone choke and die! just sayin
  

  Posted 12 months ago (Permalink)
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  baconbaby511 hearted this

  hearted 9 months ago
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  baconbaby511 says:
  SarahV ~
  it was a great story, and I totally relate to how you feel when people point out flaws and criticsize your work. I personally like it the way it is. :)
  It may be sad, but the best stories always end in some sort of tradgey. Looks like Shakespeare knew that, I mean look at 'Romeo and Juliet'. Haha.
  I just want to let you know that I loved it! :DD
  
  ^ ^) baconittaaa

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)

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