Mother Nature: The Birth of Summer
Mother Nature was blessed with three wonderful children: Spring, Autumn and Winter. But, something isn't right; something is missing. But what?
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Published: June 13, 2011
Updated: June 18, 2011
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So well-crafted! The words are so even, so crisp, I could barely imagine the hard work and effort you put into writing this. I especially love all of the different powers the children have (my favorite is Summer's). Although, all the different connections the seasons have in the world, they unite to produce a lovely world to live on. Thank you for helping me realize that, and creating a personal touch and creativity to go along with it.
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Wonderful, creative story! I love it.
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Beautiful. I love it.
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That is just so FANTABULOUSO!!!! i loved it! you are such a good storyteller! Wonderful job!
-Smiley
storycreator34 hearted this
i wish that i could meet them most of all its a very loving story i like how described them in their own ways
Thanks for the comments everyone. This was a bit of a wildcard for me, as I wasn't too sure how it would be received.
@Cassb: thanks for the heads-up with the typos - I've amended the errors. I have a tendency to read what I think is there, rather than what is!
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That is FANTASTIC! I'll NEVER underestimate the seasons again!!!!!
I love this story!
What beautiful story! I love how you have given all of the seasons their own personalities to match! Absolutely perfect! One of the best I have read!!!!
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i love sweetness of the book.
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This story reminded me of one I wrote when I was little: it was about Summer and Winter, and ended with why they both were important. The difference between this story and mine? This one is so much better!
The words are perfect, and the descriptions beautiful. I can imagine each and every one of the seasons, and especially loved Summer and Winter. Though I usually hate the Summer heat, you made me like Summer a little more today. Great job!
very,very well done!!
are you a real, published, author??
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@blackie_517: No I'm not a 'real published author', but I wish I was! I'm just someone who enjoys reading and writing.
are u a real author? ur stories make so much more sense than mine!D:
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I LOVED THIS!!! Thank you so much for the work and time you put into it. I have only been a site memeber for 2 days. I would love to use your story in my classroom to introduce seasons. I recognise that it it copywritten. Do you know how I go about seeking permission to use it? Do I request from you or from the site? This has made my day! Thank you so much for the hard work and creativity!!
this was a GREAT story! fantastic! keep writing!
can you read some of my stories?
thanks
Hey @tanyaattwewellsmith and @scottnl it's not a problem to share Storybirds (in fact, it's encouraged), and the more they can be used to teach kids the better! If you want more details, our Terms of Service are here: http://storybird.com/terms-of-service/ feel free to email support (at) storybird if you have any more questions.
When you described summer i could see her!
@scottnl: I'm more than happy for you to use my storybird. To be honest, I'm quite flattered!!!!! I'm a school teacher myself and understand how useful this site is. Enjoy! It would be nice to know what your students thought.
WOW!!! Thankyou so much for putting all your time and effort into writing this for everyone to marvel and treasure, I've added it to my reading list and I'm sure thousands of others have to! Thankyou again for making that story such a joy
:):):):):)
thats so sweet
Wow! What an amazing depiction of the four seasons.
Very tender. You breathed life into each one through the excellent use of personification.
06lcox hearted this
Brill story, so cool!
zoolife23 hearted this
Cute story
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Summer is such a great thing. My favorite is probably Spring. I love this story. It's so creative. It brings out the beauty within nature. You got to love Mother Nature. Try and add in Father time! That would be a good twist to it.
I love the words you used in the story. So fragile and special. Unique words of the words.
Just beautiful.
I like how the Kids' names were seasons!
Great story! I can't think of how much effort and hard work you put into creating this wonderful, creative story!
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Really well made.LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!
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A beautiful story!
MrsRex hearted this
i am mother natures duaghter
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This is sooo good! I didn't know writing this fab was possible... Guess I was wrong...
firewings hearted this
awwwww, that is such a nice story. i really loved it & so i will <3(heart) it..........
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Great storybird! It really proves how uninteresting our lives would be without seasons. If you get the chance, could you read and comment on some of my storybirds?
Keep on writin'.
~blantone
nmoyo hearted this
Hey miss really nice story:)I was just wondering about the assingnment you set us. I thougtht we had to write it in our books?
IDovey11 hearted this
I really enjoyed it! The words chosen were absoloutly exquisite, and flowed so easily! I cannot imagine how long it would have taken to write this masterpeice! :D
Could you read some of my stories? :)
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Thanks everyone! Your comments are much appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed the read. More on the way soon!!!!!
I loved that story!! It was so interesting and the word choice lured me in!!!
Babydragon hearted this
Marvellous Tanya. Keep writing stories like this.
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cute!
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I liked it. It was really beautiful! Congragulations on becoming the new featured author!
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Wow you are a GREAT story teller
so far the best story that i have
read on this site. ;)
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cool story
I love mother nature!
Your awesome
Pretty
Wow Awesome Work You've Got There. Well done I loved the big lovely words that you put in this story. My favorite power was summer becuase I 4t she was very kind & pretty. The rest of the family were very cool 2, but I think summer was the best! That story is so cool that I might heart this story, & I 4t my story's were good. From Ana.
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Soooo Cool Love it hearted it
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wow that was amazing i would lik to here and read more of your books
I feel the power in this story,truly breath-taking.It really touched me.I hope more storys are too come i will be looking out.well done!
mc1999 hearted this
Wow! that was amazing, I would love to read more of your books... That was soo powerful and breathtaking!
littlemissshy hearted this
Really good never ever read a story like this before and when i read this story i thought it would be about the same level then mine but now that i've read it i fell it is perfect.
Great desription. Very unique topic.
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It is wonderful the words are perfect it could be published I would buy it but no money you are a wonderful writer you have a gift keep that gift and use it you are wonderful!
- Fellow Writer
sapphirefin hearted this
Great story! Love the characters! Very creative!!
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Cute pictures!TAS your book is cool too so intersting
mammote hearted this
That was great!!!!!!! Which power is your favorite? Mine is Spring's power because I like to bring new plants to this world. LOL!!!!!! WONDERFULISTIC JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Once again, "Thank you" everyone. Your comments always bring a smile to my face. More storybirds on the way. TAS
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You took my place. * looks glum *
did you add me your comment
REALLY AWESOME! You used very good words. I imagine that this story took a while to write!
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I like this book
This book was SO good! :-D could u please read mine?
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coooool
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That is suh a beautiful story. You can tell that thought has been put into it and the words ring around you, creating the perfect senteneces for your story.
DEFINATLEY GOING ON MY READING LIST!!!!
nem hearted this
I would love it if you read some of my stories
Thanks,
swiftiegal
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this book is awesome!
i thought it was awesome that u used seasons and nature and used personification.
Great Job!!!
i like it
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So awsosme
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This book is so good! One of my favorites I've read!! I just love all the details! The children and mother nature! This is going on my reading list for sure! Read one of my books and tell me what you think! One of them is a poem I wrote called, Have you ever let nature do the talking? It's not too much to be proud about, but let me know what you think!
Thank you all for the positive comments. If you enjoyed The Birth of Summer, take a gander and this latest storybird. Enjoy!
ShaV5 hearted this
I like it please read my story. Its kind of like your story, don't worry i didn't copy you i made this story before i read your. i like your story better.
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