Music Players from the Past, Present and Future!
A rhyming story to help children understand the concept that things change over time from the past, present and future.
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Published: Nov. 3, 2011
Updated: Nov. 4, 2011
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A smart and creative way to teach little kids about past,present and future!
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This is really good - I love the last comment about "The Past is gone the future is now" or whatever it was. :)
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I learned lots of new things from your story.
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Thanks everyone. One of the teaching strands in my state for 1st grade is "past, present and future" and it is tough to find books on that. I just love andymcnally's artwork, it worked so well for this.
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it rymed!!! :)
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I never could think of a story for this artwork and I probably never will because this is perfect for it! :)
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Did you read books on that =)
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love it!!! cant wait what the future will bring!!!
Really great story! I wrote a rhyming one like this but yours is so much better! :)
So cute and so true! I loved every page of it. If you get the chance, can you read and comment on my storybirds? Keep on writin'.
~blantone
I READ THIS BOOK SOOO MANY TIMES!!!
awesome. like the rhyming
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Great story and excellent rhyming! ☺
I can so see my teacher reading it!!!!
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That story is really good! I love listening to my ipod!:)
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Boy, I am bowled over by the kind comments from so many talented writers here and the featured author status - is there a way to thank Mark and the storybird team? What dynamic motivation!
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I like how you made it rhyme!
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its a really good story, don't stop writing!
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Great book. Music of the past, present,and future! Cool!
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I loved it.
i so so loved that.it is like one of the best story/potery i have ever read
nice book
nice riming I feel like I want to listen to some music now!
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Loved it very cool i am in to music too!!!! <3 <3
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Really awesome rhymes.
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I love music.
SWEET!
How did u get to be the featured author!?
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awesome story
love your story its better than any of mine awsome rhymes loved it all
Samarhra hearted this
really cool i LOVE it. My i pod is a touch which is the"now" music player!
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cool:)
ITS GOOD AND I LOVE IT
i love poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SO CUTE!
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Again Congrats and keep up all the amazing and good work!
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stubby_girl hearted this
great way to teach little kids with ipods how intertainment was in the past! :)
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thats a lovely, fantastic story, love how the words flow :}
Very cute!
Hehehe love the idea!
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!neat story I did not know old players were heavy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love the story!!!!! Can you please read mine? im not getting a lot of comments. :(
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I LIKED YOUR STORY
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so good and impresive i could never write a story as good as this
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i relly like the book you should be a techer when you grow up!
a smart and creative way to put that piece of story together and i really loved it!
great story . Your a fantastic auther .love the book
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Woah, you must be supah good at rhyming! Only one of my books rhymes...
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So cute! Great rhyming!
A-W-E-S-O-M-E
pork102 hearted this
I teach kindergarten. My class loved it. It is a great rhyming book.
That was really good!
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:0! Wow!
this is a awesome poetry story . I liked how mrs.d told the story through potery . That was verry clever .
You are a really good rhymer
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I like the riming you did and who was timing you to see how mush you to do this wunderful fabualis story.
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WOW I LOVE IT
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love it :)
Taleen1020 hearted this
That was really good, how do you get everything to rhyme so well?!
CErin hearted this
i love your rym your an amazing author!!!
good story
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you are sooo good at poetry and it has a little lesson saying we are lucky for inventors because without them we would not have all of this right now.
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I love it!I like the part when it rhymes! GREAT JOB!I love your work!You did a great job!Please create more stories like this!I like the stories you write!Have a wonderful day!Please visit my storybirds too!
You are a awesome poet!
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great!!!!!!
This story was very good.. youu are extremely talented!! :) the rhyming && how youu brought everything together was jusst perfection! :) good luck for your future even though you dont need it you are going to be very successful! :)
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This is my 2nd time that I read this story and it was the best!
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cute book
I like this book because it is a poem!:D
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lerning
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I really liked this book
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This is really good! Being a 10 year old I really like this.
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That was cool and a good ryhme fantastic work
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WOW!! Thats really Good!
Your story is great but what does ''croon'' mean?
so cool
this is such a cool story i love music!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
petra1s hearted this
I lik ur story its really interesting!
this is ok not my favorite
awesome!!!
ParkinLexy hearted this
LOVE it are you a auther cause you need to be one I wish I could write as good!!!!!!
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that was one of the best stories ive ever heard in my life
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1068325 hearted this
omg so cute,love your rimming,i wonder what will happen i the future ,you should write another book called i pods return.
I love this story
THAT WAS AWESOME!
PS U ROCK
FROM ANIMALJAMMER
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I love your books. And maybe sometime you can find some of my books! But they arent as good as yours cause I am only 9.
Please read my books and comment. :)
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very good piece of work!
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So cute hope you become a famous author, your are a really good writer!! :) <3
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Awesome!
I Love It, Please Read:
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I love this story<3
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I love this storybird sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo awesome teaches about music i love music kudos to the writer
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COOL!
Super great story!
Wow I wish I could rhyme like that!
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that is one brilliant story that will let children learn about lots that got invented in the past. out of 10 give it 9 so 9/10 xx
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THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!! Nice rhym to!
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i loved it it was awesome
this is the best rhym ever almost
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Wow! That's really good! :)
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I luv your rhyming! The storyline was very clear!
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This is an amazing book! You should be so proud! =]
I'm proud of you!
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I like it. hope you read mine
Sorry I don't like to ask
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Impressive.
you have a lot of comments.
flip30 hearted this
awesome what a great story
awesome very good matoaka
cute
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AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! READ MINE
I LIKE MUSIC!
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I LOVE IT
this is my favorite one so for
hope u read mine
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cool pix
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i love ur story.
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BEutiful
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Awesome book, awesome art, awesome everything.
it was ok......
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I like this story. It's awesome!
:-) fantastic!!!!!!!!!!
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AWSOME!
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I love your story!
Cool! =]
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Funny I wonder
okay then
so coooooooll
EmileeA hearted this
Wow! Good job on the story! :)
I liked it
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wow i like ur story it was really cute
I am a kid and I like it
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cool book!!!!!!
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HEY, I LOVE THAT!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!! ;)
The most best book ever!!! Phenomenal, and great! Wish you all the best!!!!
MY HEART IS A STEARO
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great
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Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :)
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GOOD JOB!!!!!!!
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I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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All of your stories are amazingly amazing!
Lilly3535 hearted this
very good story:)
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Nice story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it wasa blast from the past of music
really good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mrsappletree hearted this
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I love this book its good and lots of details
You're good, matoaka...
i love the book
i like this story
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i loved this
Nice rhyming good story
petlover1102 hearted this
I loved that story! I wish I could get this much comments!I also wish that I could write a book like that.
love your pics and story
nice
Nice
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did you make this art?
21ladams hearted this
That was really good, are you a real author?
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It was long but still awesome!!!!!!!!!!
this story is enteresting but, also really long!!!!!!!!
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I <3 this story sooo much! Good job!
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NICE SB!Can u read some of my stories please? =]
norwaybound658 hearted this
like your story
I now love music
jkdejordy hearted this
fudgie hearted this
It's amazing to see how much stuff has changed from before. It kind of makes me feel spoiled by so much technology!
I know me 2. Rock on Mrs. D.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love it
ktszykman hearted this
I love it!
I love it Mrs. D! :D
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andymcnally hearted this
Wow!! That was an awesome story. I'm very honored that you used my artwork. Thank you.
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jaylori hearted this
interesting
Jeez, Andy! It was your artwork that made this story happen. Love wondering what you had in mind when you created it all. It makes me so happy to see Storybird work so well in in this fashion. I was truly as a teacher trying to find a way to reinforce a teaching strand and your artwork was just perfect!
i got to use his artwork
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I love this poem!! It's soooo adorable!
RitzCrackers hearted this
NICE !!!!!!!!!!!!!
SUPRISED IT HASNT WON
I WOULD OF THOUGHT THIS WOULD WIN
BUT IM SUPRISED IT HASNT WON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS POEM AND ITA SO CUTE AND LOVELY
ITS ADORABLE ASWELL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FROM BECKYANDJESSI
beckyandjessi hearted this
LOVE IT X
elspethmunro hearted this
My kind of story - the rhythm is wonderful and it's just the kind of thing I like to read to my grandchildren at bedtime. Gives them food for thought. Lovely
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Clap Clap. I love the rhythm nice a clam :)
Commander28 hearted this
good
Loved it.
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