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Thanks for commenting on my book. :)Such a creative idea. Again you make me feel like I'm in the book!
Haha! My Dad is just like that!!!!-Smiley :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Creative idea! Definitely goes with the artwork :)
Fun story. Not all Dad's were born to be a Dad. :)
i love it
The ending is great, but i don't know if a dad would like the story.
i love your story!!!!!!!!! So touching ;P
my dads like that to
@those who liked and hearted. Thanks all. You are all a great encouragement to me!@BubblePOP2 Well, in the story, the little boy clearly really likes his dad, and I wanted to show that the dad could do lots of fun and crazy things that didn't fit what the boy thought a dad should do, and that that was fine. This story is not really autobiographical, (about me and my dad). I hope that other people can relate to the kid in the story, like I did when I wrote about him.@aidanrissa see above response to Bubble. And I'm glad you liked the ending. The whole story relies on the ending, which it was building towards, and you might find that it helps to read it again with the ending in mind. -Foggie
cool real good
Foggie, as usual, you tell wonderful stories. Always a cleverness to them, and always making me smile. Good job.
This is really cool!
I'm voting for you!
that's what's up
My dad's bad at being a Dad. But don't take my word for it. Read the story.