My Gramps
Whatever goes wrong, my Gramps has got the fix for everything. Don't believe me? Come and see!
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Published: June 16, 2010
Updated: Sept. 7, 2010
Total Pages: 23
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This is grand. Love it.
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Thanks muchly! I had a blast writing it. I love how stories just sort of tug themselves out of the pictures---if you let them. I wish I had known my grandparents.
-Fog
p.s. Oops, that was a rather depressing note to end my comment on. But I've always been sad that my grandparents lived so far away and that I hardly knew them. For a minute there I could be the little boy in my story.
I liked it. it was very interesting and quit funny. Good Storybird.
Thank you Ferinhator. Glad to hear you enjoyed it. ( :
-Foggie
awsoeme storyy!!! i exspecially liked the ending!!! :)
Thanks very much 1566. For a story to be good, it's got to have a good ending, right? haha, but no, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
-Foggle
SWEET JOB @FOGCAT
pinkymiracle1 hearted this
I like your attitude towards old people. Great work!
This made me laugh, and it made me think of my grandfather. Great story!
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brilliant like it
Oh, wow! Thanks everyone. And thank you to the administration for featured this. I very much appreciate it. ( :
kairos: I'm not at all a fan of how the elderly are treated in our society right now: Put away in retirement homes and treated as if they are useless. Not good, not good at all. I say we should change it before our turn comes to be old.
047Mister3: Thanks. If your grandfather is still alive, I'd encourage you to pick up a phone and tell him that you appreciate him, or send him a note in the mail. ( :
-Foggie
it just might be a little to long
Hahaha this was such a funny story it was really great and i really enjoyed it right now i am at my grandfathers house because it is in the middle of the school holidays......he is a funny old man!!
I really like this its clever
amazing! and the pictures fit the story perfectly!! great choice! i want to meet your gramps!! :) well done!
That was a really funny story. Check me out tooooooo!!!!!!!!!!
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@bangbangtobambam You know, you're probably right. I was thinking that, too. I think if I do some serious editing, I'll chop a bit of it out. It does drag just a tiny.
Thanks, Sweetnsour. Glad you can be with your grandfather; sounds fun!
Thanks adfresh10
~FogKit
I like the idea that you have used for your storybird that tells me you are very creative.
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I llllooooovvvveeee that adorable cat as your avatar. Anyway, great story:)
I love your story... So thorough and interesting..
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I love how it rhymes when the story is almost ending. Awesome story. ^^
i like that book
sunderland hearted this
i love your story. thank you for writing it
I think we should all appreciate our grandparents as much as you. Awesome book.
Hey, thanks everyone. I'm quite delighted that everybody seems to be enjoying it.
And lolliepop: I love that kitty too: he's a big softy and has been in the family for about 11 years. Do you have any pets?
-Foggie
sophia says it was very cute.I loved it.I loved the pitures you chose
Ohhhhh I just loved this story! It's perfectly balanced between your thoughts and the pictures. I love my gramps...so I'm going to read it to him.
@Holidays Thank you! And say thank you to Sophia too. Is she a friend of yours?
@stacies Why thank you. You mean a real gramps is going to read my story? Wow, that's pretty awesome and means a lot to me. Do tell me what he thinks of it (unless he thinks it's terrible, in which case, don't bother passing it along... hehe, teasing.)
-Foggie
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I love your story!
Pure brilliance, only the highest from of writer is this good brilliant job!
it was ok
Minnistar hearted this
very clever but my grandpa is like that!!!
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Thanks for hearting and commenting! I'm pleased and punch that you're enjoying the story.
@GymKid: will, then you're one lucky kid!
@hingnoman: Any thoughts for how I can make it better?
-Fogger
idontlikepeas hearted this
ZOMG IT WUZ SOOOOOO GOOD
crimperman hearted this
i love this story bird and the rhymes
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That was awesome. Totally coooolll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
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WOW fog cat that is just an AMAZING story!!!
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Brilliant story!!
I like it.
i LOVED YOUR STORY.
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it reminds me of bannanas
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Thanks very much everybody! I'm very glad that you are all enjoying this.
@chanellady. Bananas, eh? Well, bananas are good. I especially like them in banana and chocolate chip muffins!
sarahloubob hearted this
This reminded me of my papa. (:
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I am loving this story,I could read it all day.
.P.S. can you make a shorter version?!
Just so you know in the middle of your story you are kind of being mean and saying like bad things about your grandpa.:( So what I'm trying to say is that if your grandpa ever would take out this book that he would be very sad in the middle of the story. P.S This makes me sad because my great grandpa died.
@likeyoupony I'm very sorry to hear that your great grandfather died. Both my grandfathers died, so I know a bit what it is like.
As for the story saying mean things, I think you must be mistaken, because the narrator is only saying nice things about his grandfather. I'm not sure exactly where you've gotten tripped up, but you'll notice that at one part he pretends "to be a yuc--, smelly old man" but that doesn't mean he is.
@gmcgarrity: Thank you. I'm glad you like this storybird. I'm afraid I can't make another version because the artist has taken down the pictures of the little boy. Besides, it would probably be confusing for everyone if there were two versions of the same story. Also, if you think about it, the average length of an ordinary picture book is 32 pages, and this is only 23 pages, so it's really not all that long. Okidoki?
@saraloubob: Thanks!
-Foggie
Amazing story
Specky hearted this
it was really good
I LUV IT!!!! Super Duper!!!
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It is pretty cool!
i love it thanks
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Good story!
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What a great story!
cbernard hearted this
What a great story will use it in class for sure. Thanks!
Thanks fellow storybirders. Can't say how happy I am that you are enjoying this story.
@cbernard: Use in a class? How cool! I'm honored!
-Fog
Again, another fabulous storybird of yours!
philomath hearted this
The story was fobulous!
I liked your story because you used very funny characters,
You are the best ... I can't stop reading it it is so good . Good story
i loved it so funny
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i loved it.it was great!!!!!!so funny!:)
FogCat, you have to be the best writer on here. I love your books! I find it a little challenging to write a story from the pictures, but when I get an idea from one, it becomes something I would have never thought of otherwise! Your story, Tiny Enough to Fit on a Cupcake, is my favorite book ever!
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Thanks folks!
And @stepstep Yeah, it's a tricky way to write. Believe me, I've got a whole slew of discarded stories and half-finished stories in my "unpublished storybirds" section. But you're right, it can also be very rewarding!
-Foggie
AnnabelH hearted this
So good! :)
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dtwilight hearted this
wow. You have a lot of comments. Cute story!
i hearted this story.Would you like to come and read my book called little monster?
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@halat: Thanks. I would be happy to read your book. Right now, you don't have any books that are published/made public so that we can see them and read them. Let me know if you make your story visible to the public so I can come and see it.
-Foggie
Fogcat
Your story is absoloutely fantastic!
If I could rate it I would rate it 10/10
thank you so much for making up a fantastic story!
limp bizkit
limpbizkit123 hearted this
awesome
How do you write such amazing stories?!
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i like your story
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LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IT!THANS@U
Awesome book!
Now I remember you, the first book I read on story-bird was your A-Z book. It really made an awesome first impression of story-bird on me.
keep on writing!
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Thank you @limpbizkit, @mrdickeysclass, @penguin1, and @amoschan.
@ScottScienceLab Thanks! I'm privileged to have provided a 'first impression' ( : That's pretty cool. And Storybird is as pretty cool place.
-Foggy
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha......................
Very funny I enjoy it a lot with my son...
earthluver hearted this
I like all of the combinations of the pictures that you used in your book.I think your book is very very funny
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<3
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Excellent! :) Yay for Gramps!!!
Thanks for reading this and commenting, folks! This was my first storybird, and is still one of my favorites. ( :
-Foggie
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