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  mark says:
  That IS sad. But nicely done. (PS. Salor is "Sailor")

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  randomgal says:
  Whoops I'll change that

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  randomgal says:
  got it

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  danicorp hearted this

  hearted 26 months ago
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  danicorp says:
  cute story but very sad as well

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  froggygirl says:
  READ YOURS

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  froggygirl hearted this

  hearted 26 months ago
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  froggygirl says:
  i loved it!

  Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  rad52097 says:
  cool story man

  Posted 23 months ago (Permalink)
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  daddylove678 says:
  I like it and I wrote a kinda like one of mine.

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  daddylove678 hearted this

  hearted 22 months ago
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  dtwilight says:
  This is a very beautiful and emotional story! Well done;)

  Posted 17 months ago (Permalink)
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  dtwilight hearted this

  hearted 17 months ago
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  32000 says:
  Oh! Poor Marie!

  Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)

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