No Name
Is My Name
A little girl sits alone on a planet and dreams of meeting someone.
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Published: Dec. 22, 2011
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smiley316 hearted this
Great voice. Made my eyes devour the words as the No Name's thoughts crept along...
hi_its_me hearted this
:)
GreenHolly hearted this
That was so good! I was just sitting so still, I'll show you at the bottom of the page. But it seems so sad. Was the whole thing just a dream? I hope so, because that would be so sad, the whole thing. I hope late she'll find that boy. I like that name:Hope. That's a very pretty name. I'll call her Hope. Maybe. It's just a meaningful name, I think. Okay, this is how I was sitting:
P.S. The happy face is me.
1st minute:☻ 2nd minute:☻ 3rd minute:☻ 4th minute:☻ 5th minute:tappity tap tappity tap(this is me typing this comment.)
@Smiley, thank you!! I wanted No Name to have a very distinctive voice. @GreenHolly, thank you! I love your comment--it was a sad story and I was sad writing it. I wanted it to be a parable and represent how lonely some people feel, especially when they are young--that they can be surrounded by people but still feel lonesome. I think she finds that boy eventually, and they can explore the universe together.
@hi its me and Rocky, thank you!!
Luckyboy22 hearted this
Nice story!! LOVE how no name has her secret name!! My brother used 2 have a friend named 'hope' It was funny cuz they worked together and when he un-loaded those sign's the said 'hope' he said to her 'your famous' LOL!! They loved teasing each other!!
figment68 hearted this
Really nice story czikimonkey! Very creative. I like that her secret name was Hope. I hope she finds a friend one day to hug her. :)
This was *in a singsong voice* amaaazing!!
You are a VERY awesome writer...I know an awesome writer when I read their storys!
Fab job!
~Rockstar
That was so neat! It's like the idea of "hope" in another universe waiting to be found. We are always looking for hope, but it is hard to find it.
@luckyboy--Funny!! Thanks for the comment and heart :)
@Allalea--thank you so much!!
@FIgment--thank you queen of awesome comments!
@Rockstar-- thank you for your a-maaaa-zing comment! I really appreciate it!!
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Magarooney hearted this
Wonderful job. I wish I could write with the ability you have! Keep on writing! ;)
@kcs12--thank you!!!! That means a lot :)))
One word: wow. I'm blown away. This takes story telling to a whole new level. No Name's secret name, Hope, is more than just a name. It means something more. She needed to believe and hope that someday she would find "Home" and the boy. You should write a sequel to this!!! Great story!!! :)
*Blushes* Well it was pretty amaaazing! :)
Congrats on being the featured author!
That was the sweetest thing I've ever read
@kcs12 thank you so so much!!
@kylieges, wow- your comment was awesome!!! Thank you so much!
@rockerchick2000, you are so sweet to say that :))))
wow! keep on going!
That book is so cool I can not believe any human bean could come up with such great ideas.
cool
Gia1800 hearted this
wow. this is deep. it's also AWSOME! :D
This was really sweet! I am new to storybird but I love all your stories! They are really really good! YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE SEQUEL!!! :-D
HollyTheWelshie hearted this
This story is very sad but I like no name's name: Hope!
bunnyman hearted this
nice book!
Once again, a wonderful job! Keep on writing!
~IZ
izmclaughlin hearted this
Great story and great use of the artwork, I loved it
Cassb hearted this
Lovely!!
trinityjulia hearted this
I love how different and mysterious this story is. Keep up your excellent work!!!!!!!!!! Please, why don't you read my story Remorse it's really interesting!!!
good book
I loved when you said "the pocket of her heart". that was a beautiful way of putting it:) well, well done on the entire story! i loved it:)
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secrets333 hearted this
It's so sad. :_( Sad or not, I like it! :-)
@everyone thanks so
Much!!!
@stubby thank you! What a nice comment.
Beautiful, wonderful writing! Slightly melancholy, but the twist at the ending makes it great. :)
such a nice story czikimonkey! u r such a wonderful writer!
P.S. The ending was great but i didn't really get the end.......
Anyway i have 3 words to some it up............ .ok here they are...........................................................
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Naomi012 hearted this
The title is awesome
Sambeagle hearted this
@naomi, if you think about it, if planets collide.....they disintegrate. Or they probably will.
No Name just wanted someone to love.
LOVED IT! :)