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This was brilliant, funny, charming and wonderful! Simply superb! :) <3
So cute and funny and adorable! You are one author to read :) Very awesome
thank so much you are the best.
ah it's good
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you are totaly right! @Pasqueflower
I really like how you've done that with 'love this story'!
Yeah brilliant everything you said even more!
@Pasqueflower I agree!
Nice! I wanna do that someday!Sincerely,A very impressed and HappyHuman
@Pasqueflower beyond agreed
<3 <3 love this soo much
Every single story you make just makes me go, "WOW!" This one is just so clever and awesome! I just love it! You knock my socks off, coletrain1! (Only don't knock my socks off after basketball practice because my feet will smell bad. ;D)
Totally love this cole! Reading list!!!!!!
hearted this <3
A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! This was such an creative idea and your use of rhyming and why with words, like always, was quite breathtaking! I love the ending and the pinch of humor in this. Reading list and you defiantly deserved to be Storyspotted. Your a VERY talented writer! :)
-I have just read ALL of your stories and 99% of them are on my reading list, all of them are just amazing, breathtakingly amazing. ?
Amazing story! I loved it without a doubt! You are such an inspiring author!
you like selena gomez!!!
Awesome name. @writer smurf !!!!!
????this!!!! 3 cheers 4 Storybird!!
awwwww I LOVE IT@! I am a messy person too....:P But thankfully my room does not smell. @coletrain1 good job!
This is dazzling.
Wondrous! I'm glad Maxine finally cleaned up her act!
Hi i just want to say I LOVE THIS STORY.
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Messy Maxine has a hard time being clean. Her room is the messiest that I've ever seen!
Published: Nov. 1, 2012
Updated: Nov. 23, 2012
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