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  • Allalea
    Allalea says:
    Awww that's so sad. I loved it, though. Excellent!
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  • rockythegoldenpup
    rockythegoldenpup says:
    This is wonderful. :) Sad, but wonderful. :)
    Posted 6 months ago (Permalink)
  • mark
    mark says:
    Fantastic. Stories like this demand their own section in our library: mature, intelligent, but accessible to anyone with a heart.
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  • smiley316
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    Wonderful!
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  • deepfried_freak
    deepfried_freak says:
    That is beautiful. <3 Well done!
    Posted 6 months ago (Permalink)
  • yanchay
    yanchay says:
    congrats on new and note worthy!
    Posted 6 months ago (Permalink)
  • cookie54lover
    cookie54lover says:
    Brilliant! I haven't heard from you for aages. Lucky man, your daughters gonna be a published author I hear? And all profits will go to you I suppose. ;)
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  • waphooy
    waphooy says:
    Very very powerful and beautiful, richart. :)
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  • figment68
    figment68 says:
    Wonderful, touching and sad.
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  • Binksies
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    Sad but wonderfull
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  • sp6jaleelb
    sp6jaleelb says:
    sad but nice
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  • Noor123703
    Noor123703 says:
    I really very much like this well done.
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  • bookloverjoy
    bookloverjoy says:
    Great story!
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  • jeffalcious
    jeffalcious says:
    touching.
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  • edengrace2000
    edengrace2000 says:
    That's so sweet
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  • luminiere
    luminiere says:
    I haven't read one of your books for a while. Sorry about that. I've been busy with... other things. You're still as great as ever. You will be awesome in the challenge. Just think. It's in New and Noted. How could you not do great?

    Very sad, but very intelligent thinking. I'm thinking that this is going in my reading list. Nice choice of words, richart. You are amazing, don't you know?
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  • baconbaby511
    baconbaby511 says:
    I read it still even though I'm not 18+ and up. XD But Richart, this was truly terrific. :) Very well written story! Probably my favourite and YOUR best, I must say! At least she said "I'm sorry." in the letter. That's good. Love the story!
    Posted 6 months ago (Permalink)
  • FogCat
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    Ooo, skillful. It just slides by so smoothly that you hardly realize that the excellent style is what made it do that. Great voice.

    -Foggie
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  • ag44
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    I think I'm gonna cry!!! Wonderful!! *sniff, sniff*
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  • SpottyEyes
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    Nice. I loved it!
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  • kk10061394
    kk10061394 says:
    I think this was cute
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  • doodledo
    doodledo says:
    very nice story
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  • cheekers55
    cheekers55 says:
    O that was one of my favorite stories.!!!!
    Posted 6 months ago (Permalink)
  • recycle656
    recycle656 says:
    That was truly amazing, and very well written!

    <3, recycle656
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  • recycle656
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    By the way, are you still going to write The Trip of Lifetimes, I kinda hate to see a tag game die like that. :)

    <3, recycle656
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  • Inationals13
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    Nice! really really good!!!!
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  • czikimonkey
    czikimonkey says:
    Awesome.
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  • ikickner
    ikickner says:
    sad, but u r awsome with description!
    Posted 4 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Cassb
    Cassb says:
    Very moving....the starkness of the white page with those two little words on it is heartbreaking. An excellent story!!
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  • MaryM12
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    OW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • ghollowayM03
    ghollowayM03 says:
    AWSOME!!
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  • Magarooney
    Magarooney says:
    Oh so lovely and I could have cried.
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  • bgilbert4
    bgilbert4 says:
    So touching! My writing teacher tells us to write like that! You inspireme!
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  • amelia07
    amelia07 says:
    sad but Exallcellent
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  • cocojo123
    cocojo123 says:
    Oh my goodness that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • yadira1214
    yadira1214 says:
    very touching... make more please i like this alot
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  • trentbarlass
    trentbarlass says:
    liked it it was cool
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  • LukeF5
    LukeF5 says:
    Luv it
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  • LukeF5
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    luv luv luv luv luv it
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    wow nice
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  • Not_a_Novelist
    Not_a_Novelist says:
    love it, so emotinal
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  • KCS12
    KCS12 says:
    This is a very well written storybird, and it makes me want to cry. It is so sad and wonderful, I am suprised that I don't see your books in every library across the country. Great Job, really excellent.
    Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
  • czikimonkey
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    Congrats on getting featured story, Richart! You totally deserve it!!!
    Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
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  • cmcgirlpower
    cmcgirlpower says:
    I loved this book! I added it to my reading list and I'm definitely going to read more of your books. Really, really, really great job!
    Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
  • muddyanna
    muddyanna says:
    This is such a beautiful story!
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  • cocojo123
    cocojo123 says:
    Very good!!!!!!!!
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  • marlene111
    marlene111 says:
    awsome! and if u like to read stuff like that well read advetures of tys' day!
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  • bendavis
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    S+A+D=SAD.
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  • JordynR16
    JordynR16 says:
    sooo sad but an awesome story i like how you made the story as if it could of happened to you or anyone else and please write more feeling stories because you are awesome someday you could be a real and amazing author
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  • katieallison1
    katieallison1 says:
    why so sad?
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  • GeorgiaR16
    GeorgiaR16 says:
    it was a great storey so sad though one day you neva no what you could become!! it was a awesome story you neva no what is coming your way!!!
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  • marymcn123
    marymcn123 says:
    really sad
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  • Iris_pony
    Iris_pony says:
    It is just so powerful:)
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  • kchaney1010
    kchaney1010 says:
    Love it.......
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  • Writer7368
    Writer7368 says:
    Awww. very sweet. u r an amazing writer
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  • Aathena
    Aathena says:
    What a story, wow, what a story, wow, what a story
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  • Sharkbait9
    Sharkbait9 says:
    sosad
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  • Diana111
    Diana111 says:
    sad, but brilliant.
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  • BrantleyFullerton
    BrantleyFullerton says:
    cute and sad i love it
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  • aysroom12
    aysroom12 says:
    My, how sad! You never know what kind of ending a story may have. I LOVED IT!
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  • juliana10
    juliana10 says:
    cute










    I love it :)
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    s9990946c says:
    woah, nice story
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    aboestc says:
    good job
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    tucker06 says:
    Nice story, I wish I could write like that.
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  • HollyTheWelshie
    HollyTheWelshie says:
    That is so sweet!!! Really sad, but good too.
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  • ag44
    ag44 says:
    You know, I never EVER get tired of this story.
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  • kbedoya03
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    ow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • elgharbawi
    elgharbawi says:
    this is the best love story ever made:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
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  • 62586
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    SO SSSAAADD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • wharrah123456789
    wharrah123456789 says:
    Wonderful! Even though it was a short story the words were so amazing that it strung the whole story together and made it seem like a famous novel!
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    AAAWWWEEESSSOOOMMMEEE!!!
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  • TAdamsCiara
    TAdamsCiara says:
    gives me chills
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  • orakdidi
    orakdidi says:
    The best part was the white page with "I'm sorry".
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  • Laura1112
    Laura1112 says:
    Cool story
    Sad but cute and depressing...in a good way.
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  • lgore
    lgore says:
    i like your story
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  • Firestory
    Firestory says:
    Very sad but loving story.
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  • scsags
    scsags says:
    That was REALLY clever! So sad but so good.
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  • laney68
    laney68 says:
    I am not 18 up but that was still really goodz1 awesome job it deserves to be on the front page!!!
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  • sl211
    sl211 says:
    that is so sweet
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  • adsheriff
    adsheriff says:
    Awww! I think I'm gonna cry!
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  • Dolphin24
    Dolphin24 says:
    awesome!!!!!
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    ambutt says:
    This is the best story ever! :)
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  • scsjkt
    scsjkt says:
    Very sad. still luv it though!
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  • ahmedm616
    ahmedm616 says:
    it's just so touching...:(
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  • sugarblossom13
    sugarblossom13 says:
    omg luv it so sad though:)
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  • sl211
    sl211 says:
    you are a great writter
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  • FranciscoEsparza
    FranciscoEsparza says:
    AWSOOOOOOOOOOOOME
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  • oliviah2
    oliviah2 says:
    oooohhhh that was cute
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    davoliver says:
    COOL STORY!!!!
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  • Falconheart
    Falconheart says:
    so... pretty, heart wrenching and touching!
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  • amekkri
    amekkri says:
    Very sad but beautiful
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  • MMosuch
    MMosuch says:
    i really like your book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • room143
    room143 says:
    love book

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  • Nele
    Nele says:
    Awww! What a sad storybird...
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  • morganmg
    morganmg says:
    cute
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  • shade
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    OMG! Your story toched my heart! You should read mine.
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  • scsgag
    scsgag says:
    Aw, that is a sad and sweet story. I loved it. One of the best I've seen.
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  • y5boliver
    y5boliver says:
    cool
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  • Gilmer7
    Gilmer7 says:
    i thought it was hreart warming
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  • AbbyWeasley
    AbbyWeasley says:
    That was amazing! I like it I love it
    Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
  • Irving23
    Irving23 says:
    I LOVE THAT I EVEN CRIED GOOOOODDD JJJJJJOOOOOOBBBBB RICHART HOW OLD ARE you?
    Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
  • ghollowayM03
    ghollowayM03 says:
    love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • cupcakeartist
    cupcakeartist says:
    Love it... sooooo touching
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  • 62586
    62586 says:
    I read it even tho I am not 18+
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  • maxxam6
    maxxam6 says:
    Wow this is so deep and emtional and powerful. I love the story even though it is so sad.
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  • redruby550
    redruby550 says:
    plz read my storys there really good =)
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  • slashhendrix
    slashhendrix says:
    NICE
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  • cookie54lover
    cookie54lover says:
    I can tell you now, that was a whole lotta intelligence, ya know what I mean?

    Though I shouldn't be this surprised - you're smiley's dad, right? and all of smilinator's relatives are genius. :)
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  • sarasue
    sarasue says:
    Wow...what a well put together story. You are a very good story teller! Are you an author in real life? If not, I think you should be! One of the best stories I've ever read.
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  • cambop
    cambop says:
    That is so sad!!!!!!! But is was excellent!
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    well done your the first story I read I love it it made me go wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Sad but exciting, very exciting!
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    That was AMAZING!!!!!! Do you have anymore heart-touching stories?? I loved your story,and anbody who reads it will alsolove it!
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    sad, but good.
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    nice.
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    you rock
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    it was very dramatic! Awesome~ :D
    ~IZ
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    This reminds me of my ex girl friend. I <3 this very much
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    This is a GREAT story!!!! I love it! You are a very talented writer and I can't wait to read more by you.
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    Great storyline!Sad, but perfect.;)
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    It was beautiful. I loved your book!
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    MAZ'N MAN!!!
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    So heart touching and beautiful yet so sad! You know straight away that the story will grip you from start to finish. Thats what happened to me.
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    i wuv it. it so sweet and touching!
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    I LOVE this book i recomend it to any body eventhough it is sad, but it is still wonderful <3
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    It was very nice.
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    amzing story you sould go pro
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    really great story please come read my one!!!
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    this is wicked(awesome)
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    This book touched me!!! <3
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    LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IT
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    cool story check out wallace11
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    i love this!it was the first story bird i read!!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    it is a little long but it is so cool
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    good story.
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    nice 2 time reading it
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    wow alot of comments....this is good
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    So beautifull!!!!!!
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    that is a great story bird
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    That was a nice, good , awesome , descriptive story,
    *Thumbs up*
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    ommm….AMAZING! Almost made me and my friend cry… you are excellent at writing! That story made me want to read it over and over again! GREAT IDEAS!!!! <3
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    LOVE IT! :)
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    ONMG!! this is an awesome book and i bet my sister is going to love it too!
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    good book
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    Awesome. So beautifully written! I heart this book!
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    This makes me think of my book I'm writing (I couldn't put it on here though_)
    very sweet
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    It's really touching!
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    Very Moving and sweet.
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    good story
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    love the story
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    :)
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    That is the best story I have read!
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    That is sooooooooooooooooooooo sad
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    that was an excellant story. it was sad also.
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    A_Mazing
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    Wonderful job!!!
    Such a sad story. Well written and your story had wonderful meaning.
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    GOOD JOB!!!!!!
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    THIS IS AMAAZING!
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    that's a very cute story<3
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    It was pretty sad but still a WONDERFUL story to read! Bravo and are you an artist cause if you aren't then you should!
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  • mhigh5
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    I love it. It's so sad but i would recommend it to anybody. Are you a real author. You should write a second one! It's the only thing I've liked on storybird. Check mine out! James and Lorie: a Pirate Story! You should have a look. I think you'll like it.
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  • FeatheredDragon
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    That is probably one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. :)
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    i like the way you have wrote this the best one yet and 1st i think you should do another like it!!!!!!!!!!
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    This book was amazing! You said it was only for Adults. WEll I am 10 and I am adding this to my reading list! LOVE IT!
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    casideepinke says:
    this was an amazing story bird!!!! You have a gift!!!! A real gift of storytelling! Check me out sometime!
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    CUTE CUTE CUTE
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    Such an Amazing Creative story love it!!!!
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    Aw! But it is only for adults? But it's rated 10-12?! I'm only 8 but this is freaking amazing! It's number 1 in my opinion.
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    aaaaaaaawwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Tht's sooo sad! :( made me cry! :'(
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    great storybird you really put all your time and effort into this and it shows. :)
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    good but so so sad
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    Best book eeevvveerrr!!!
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    Awesome! I can tell that you worked really hard on that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    beautiful. love this story.sad but i love it
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    hello peeps i like trains
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    Sad,but good
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    nice story i loveded
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    Awesome
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    sad and awesome
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    I believe this is more targeted towards adults rather than ages 10-12. Beautiful and poignant.
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    Very touching and sad,sweet too.
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    I don't get it
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    hi sup awesome story! pleez look up me and my story and comment and... great storrrrryyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!
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    i love it!!!!
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    I LLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE this story it is soo sad
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    your story is so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    WONDERFULL!!!

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    I love this book! And I am only 9 years old!
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    coco10015 says:
    This storybird is great good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Hi this story is great.
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    gordhail413 says:
    NICE BOOK!!!!!
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    Thanks for all the kind comments, everyone! It was such an honor to log on and see this storybird in the featured section!
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    i kinda thought it was funny BUT BUT sad
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    caro1296 says:
    OMG best story read today its great be proud of your self i know how it feels
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    this book is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Although I may be 12, I still totally get this! This story was sad, but true.
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    heeheeheeheeheeheehehehehehhehhehehehhehhehhh
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    Liaglen says:
    hey love it hope you post more stories by you!
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    Awesome book
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    Wow. That's all I can say. You write with such emotion and I love the way you worded everything. Well done; keep up the good work!!!
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    cool
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    bobsterguy says:
    aww so sad that was such a great story hope u write more cause that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hav any more stories?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    cool story it's awesome
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    luv this
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    I love this story you are great!!!! :)
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    Sad... ;(
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    WOW!This bok is very nice!
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    i like your story
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    cool
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    Very nice, its creative and beautiful!!!
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    Amazing and sad at the same time OMIGOSH cant get better
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    that is a lot of words
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    That story is very meaningful! It made me cry!
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    I liked it allot, i liked how at first you were talking about how long since you two have talked to each other. But you shouldn't say one thing at first, then you say it again, with a little something added to it. But it is a really good story. I like how you kind of expressed your feeling after she left you that not.
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    That got me in tears.
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    Love this story! It is so touching!! No matter how many times i will read it it will NEVER get old!!!!!
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    Are you C.S. Lewis ? It's a masterpiece!
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    so cool
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    That story was sad but..
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    Please read kiki7 and my story
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    thanks
    love your story!
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    cute<3
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    a little long for a 8 year old! but still very good.
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    rlly good choice of words but i was confused by the pics. they didnt rlly connect with the story. but it was still rlly well written!!!!! :)
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    i love your book itit is very lovely get a job as a rigter right now send me a book okay.


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    thiz was such a gud story and it waz emotinal waz it a true story or waz it an unbeliveable made up story
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    Wow that is a great story one of the best I think.
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    ...Touching and tender. Sometimes, mind prevents us from appreciating love ...
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    AMAZING!!!!! I love this story SO much absolute favorite!
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    This story is so sad, but is so great! Awsome! :)
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    very nice
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    Wow that's defiantly one of the best stories I've read on story bird. It's so sad but so amazing and i love the words you use i could really see the picture in my mind. I know you'll probably never read this richart because you have SO MANY to read but oh well lol.
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    Well, there is "I´m sorry" and "I´m sorry"...
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    A perfect book. I love it. Every single word that you wrote ties the whole story together, making it complete. Completely wonderful. Well done, richart. Bravo.
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    This is like one of my favorites :0
    -Amina
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    Hi,I am new on story bird so I don't really know what I am doing here. also I am only 8 years old still!!

    please comment on mine

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    THat is the saddest story i have ever heard it made me almost cry this is an awesome story everyone should read it.
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    love your book
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    me and my british freind almost cried when we read this!!
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    Everytime I read this I shed at least 1 tear and spread at least 1 smile:);(
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    great story. that almost made me cry. you should continue it. or just go right to where you need to be: go be an author!!!!!
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    sad but good!
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    Sad but touching. Good Book
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    Just Beautiful, the best thing I've probly read on story bird!
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    I love it!
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    great story!
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    very sad
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    That was a very good story, richart, and it was very sad. I cried(exaggeration).



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    Very heartfelt and sad, but also very good. One of the best stories I've ever read. And I mean it! SO going on my reading list.
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    this is the b-best storuy i've e-ever read. :')
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    We grow together yet we mature and grow apart. The hard lessons of Life! Loved the story.
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    This story was so sad and so nice I just loved it.
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    Great story loved it! Have you ever gotten a bad comment from someone? I would like to know. Have fun writting even more storys! :) You have a tallent. Great for you. Also liked the plot and the Beggining,Middle,and End. You should be a writter someday. If not just write them for fun! If you have kids oneday you could show em'.
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    It made me cry I love it
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    nice story
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    I loved this BOOK
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    allys1246 says:
    nice book. it is so sweet
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    *Tear* *tear* *even more tears* *Raindrops falling from my eyes*
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    how are there so many comments and hearts?
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    your art work is cool!
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    Sambeagle says:
    nice story
    and it is true!
    i keep reading this book over and over
    it is so good
    i think figment68 is a good author she writes a lot of stories and i want to be like her
    so it would be nice if you could read my stories and leave a comment
    here are some of the stories
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    Nidhi artwork is the best
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    I will and always will be perfect
    if you read these stories you would make my day!

    thanks
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    I <3 ur book so........... AMAZING ......................AWESOME.................PRICELESS.....................I <3 it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    That was a wonderful story to share...it left me crying in memory of my own lost love...this will definitely be added to my reading list!
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    Wow you got a lot of commets!!!Good job!!!
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    That was amazing so heart touching I look up to you and your stories. good 1
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    Great story but kinda sad. (:
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    Whoa! Dude, that is one of the best stories i have ever read on this website. My teacher would throw you a pizza party.
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    cool book
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    wow so intreging and interesting, a lovey descriptive peice riddling with exspresions, i almost cried when i saw the letter
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    i'm a 4th grader and this is easy and this is to me its a book to be made in the real world
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    bballgal11 says:
    I don't get the title. BUt all in all great story bird!
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  • Gordish
    Gordish says:
    can I download it??
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  • jac24
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    AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    awsomew
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    kool
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    MyRecorder says:
    i likeed your story
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    Oh my! what a wonderfull moving piece of art!
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    Awww...So sad yet intriguing and hooking. Great job!
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    lovely absolutly lovely
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    Beautiful,Poignant,Perfect. Reminds me of Leunig.
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    Seems like friendship is really important! Great story
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    great story!
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    AWESOME!!!
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    bluefairy says:
    I love how the pictures go with the story.The story was very creative.



    Erin
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    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww luv it
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    aww cute
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    wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i have never been so touched!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    it was not for adults 18 and older but it was great
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    That was an amazing story.
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    ewackowski says:
    sad but cool
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  • erinbear01
    erinbear01 says:
    that was an amazing story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont stop writing!!!!!!
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    it touches my heart its the best story i ever read please get someone to really publish this in a real book that everyone can read
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    Beautiful story im srry sad isnt it ill heart iy<3
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    Sad, sad story. but good!
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  • haleyluvsgummybears
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    oh my gosh that is soo sweet i love that story its one of my favorites now you have a gift
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    Sad! Your words are very strong! great job richart!
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    I LUV U
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    nice
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    !!!!!!
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    Very Moving.

    Loved it.

    :]
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    That was sad but really good!


    AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
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    It was good I like the animals
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    starfish21 says:
    GREAT BOOK.I LOVED READING A BOOK THAT I REALLY LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    im having mixed feelings right now,sad about the book but love the book...............
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    check out my books!
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    o intelligence
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    I do not like this story because they broke up.
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    its a heartbreaking story but you would never have to guess that it might happen to you.
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  • Erin50
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    so sad but i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so awesome
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    k8callahan8 says:
    soooooo touching sometimes that really does happen with some couples
    u touched my heart.
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    amazingly sweet...
    shows that there are many possibilities in life. loved it!
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    it was the best story i have read so far and hi
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    awesome
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    Wow that is so sad
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    awwwwww i teared up thats the best story i have read yet. so sad but happy
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    IT MADE ME WANT TO CRY. You really have a gift :)
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    I didn't get the concept of the story. The title is "0 Intelligence", but the person in the story sounded like he was as smart as can be. Was he looking for a lost love?
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    Cool bro! Best story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • a22jakeh
    a22jakeh says:
    Man make another one. Wow bro, you got to watch how cool your stories are.
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    jdelaney39 says:
    so cute!!!
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    AHH THAT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SAD LOVED IT LOL
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    222SW says:
    u might not no me but i love your story and those small word ''i'm sorry'',that really touched my heart that i almost cried.
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    I felt that. Sometimes the head must rule the heart.
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    CPears says:
    If you get a chance, look at my newest one "Love Is"
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    I liked the detail in your story
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    readingiscool2002 says:
    Wow what a sad story! is it true?
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    miguel504 says:
    best story yet(-:
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    i8chichi says:
    Beautiful, sad, but very, very beautiful. <3
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    wowww
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    Good job I really liked it!
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    Landdog99 says:
    hi
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    I love it!
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    Awesome! And the crowd goes WILD!!!!!!
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    That was amazing!!! : )
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    R167 says:
    So very sad and touching.
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    i know im not 18 but i loved this story its great
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    AdrianaMendoza says:
    DUDE YOUR STORY IS SO COOL I REALLY REALLY REALY LOVED IT .
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    7146102 says:
    that is the cutest story ever.
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    much love... that wsa beautiful
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    best story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Wowza! It was like a poetic drift in a way. Beautiful x
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    I LOVE THIS STORY !!!!!!! :)
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    NIIIICEEE!!!!!! I liked it!!!
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    Awesome. You have alot of views and it doesnt surprize me.
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    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    One of my all time favorite stories! I loved the feel to it and each word glides smoothly over the page! You did very well!

    -Waterbaby13
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    I LOVE IT
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    pinkmillie says:
    That made me cry!! Wah!!! That is sooooo sweet
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    62498 says:
    SO SAD !!!!!IT MADE ME CRY!!!
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    THIS WAS AN AWESOME STORY
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    seamus102 says:
    AWESOME!!!! i wish i was as good as you :(
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    That was AMAZING!
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    coco10015 says:
    This book was so awsome how did you make such a good book like this i'm jealous. (:
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    COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    DUDE I CANT STOP READING THIS STORY I READ IT OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN
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    FAB, story its awsome!!
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    so, so, soooo sad :'(
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    I looooooooooooooove this I cant stop reading it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    cool bro
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    thepowerpuffgurlz224 says:
    good job!
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    ALL OF MY FRIENDS LOVE THIS STORY. THIS STORY IS THE BOMB
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    funnybunny1234 says:
    heart breaking. i loved it.

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    i love it
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    GREAT!
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    ladyfriend123 says:
    OMG I <3 it!!! So awesome!!!!
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    jadex says:
    sooo goood
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    jacksbox27 says:
    That is such a delightful story.
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    i all most cried :(
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    Sad, but great.
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    Sad,but awesomely good
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    sad but nice
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    Such a beautiful story!
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    That is beautiful.
    Very talented author, you are.
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    I was in tears after i read this but such a sad book
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    I love it. It was sad and made me cry on the inside but i love
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    i luv this book u r very talented but it is so sad
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    Again i have to say it is the best story i could read over and over and over again
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    I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    G= Great story kinda sad but an excellent story.
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    It's so sad but a wonderful story;my mom cried with this
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    I'ts so sad. I really like it!
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    This just touched my heart, it's so sad and wonderful. I love this storybird!!!
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