On Gray Days
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Published: May 1, 2010
Updated: July 25, 2010
Total Pages: 10
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Excellent! Very good concept and nicely executed. You might, just might consider tweaking the title to make it more eye-catching and suggestive of the unique premise.
But good job, daughter of 047Mister3. You write well!
-Foggin
Great story
I like it. I hope you write more!
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