pure poetry
a calming book of deeper poetry not silly poetry more seoirus poetry.
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Published: Aug. 28, 2010
Updated: Dec. 8, 2010
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a very calming book of poetry. that makes me happy.
I enjoyed your language and I enjoyed your poetry. I think the illusatrations go perfectly with the writing. Very Good!
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Interesting word choices, some in my class loved it others where confussed.
I liked the poem but disliked the pictures.
Very good word choice.Good job
I shared this with a class of seventh grader's. We discused how with poetry you don't have to use right punctuation, and you don't have to rhyme,we collective came up with the comment. Many students are scared to really enjoy poems that don't rhyme or that are different.... because different is scary. You don't have to change a thing about this poem, it has a certain calm feel to it and personally I really liked it.
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