Rhian's birthday party!!
The story is about a rabbit planning a b'day in winter and it started snowing and she played in the snow the next day with her best friends!! Its a story for an age group of 5+ if they can read it!!!!
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Published: March 16, 2010
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I like my story alot its really cool and its like my birthday
i made alot of mistakes like rhain should be rhian
Great work Timtam
Just a few mistakes, Though great job!
Why did the name change from Tammy to Tommy or were they two different characters? Read my story called 'Her story'
Sorry Timtam i didn't read your 2nd comment!
GenwouldStories hearted this
awesomess =) you really worked well with the art congrats !!
Katrina hearted this
Great work, Tamara. Don't forget to proofread really carefully before you publish.
Mrs E
thanks to all i appreciate it